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| 2013-02-07 05:10:53 |
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I hope you guys will comment to let me know what you think, again sorry it took so long to get this to you |
| 2013-02-06 04:25:49 |
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Okay what in the world...to the strange post who talks about how the people who write these stories are sick did you even read my story I wrote romance stories not story of ppl being raped and torn omg if you don't like them don't log on |
| 2012-11-27 02:55:12 |
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Thank you for all your comments and MR I greatly apprieate your compliments since I have started the Turner Legacy you and AC have been dedicated readers perhaps when these books are published if they are I shall send you guys signed copies. I enjoy writing but it's always nice to get positive feedback. |
| 2012-11-27 02:33:19 |
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Sorry Guys I meant this is Chapter Four... |
| 2012-10-18 00:49:33 |
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Hey guys sorry it took so long to get this Chapter up i will try to not take so long on next one
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| 2012-09-26 20:24:59 |
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Okay guys Chapter two is finally up let me know what you think please, I am working on the rest of Chapter two and will post it along with Chapter three as soon as i can. |
| 2012-09-26 17:14:07 |
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Aww thanks, i enjoyed the Unexpected series as well. I have spoken to a publisher and the story is actually called Caught in a Texas storm. She is eager to get started on it and is awaitng First time for everything as well. As soon as I get more time I will be adding Susan and Bills story as well as Morgan and Regina by time I am done you will have a background on the whole family. I am calling it the Turner Legacy, i alreayd rough drafts and notes to the other two stories and I am working on CHapter two as we speak. |
| 2012-09-26 17:12:59 |
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Aww thanks, i enjoyed the Unexpected series as well. I have spoken to a publisher and the story is actually called Caught in a Texas storm. She is eager to get started on it and is awaitng First time for everything as well. As soon as I get more time I will be adding Susan and Bills story as well as Morgan and Regina by time I am done you will have a background on the whole family. I am calling it the Turner Legacy, i alreayd rough drafts and notes to the other two stories and I am working on CHapter two as we speak. |
| 2012-09-26 16:21:08 |
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Come on guys I need comment to help me better the story or to know what you think of the story :) |
| 2012-09-26 13:56:37 |
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Oh yeah just realized something earlier in the story i said Lydia had Auburn hair that was a type her hair is blonde and that is mentioned earlier in the story sorry for inconvience. |
| 2012-09-26 13:46:41 |
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Guys I hope you comment on this, I don't know if some of you reading this are avid readers of the unexpected series but this is Lydias story. |
| 2012-09-22 15:12:34 |
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Thanks for your comments guy I will add a part two soon and i will try to remember the paragraph breaks for some reason when i write this on Word document it tends to not look right. |
| 2012-09-21 07:23:01 |
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Please feel free to comment, this is my first attempt at somethng dark like this. What with monters and all lol. |
| 2012-09-11 20:35:51 |
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Feel free to leave comments guys, it seems like more people are responding negativally on this last chapter than they usually do. I should be posting Lydias story soon |
| 2012-09-11 03:23:54 |
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Here it is guys sorry it took me so long to get it done finally. I am working on Lydias story right now and should have chapter one posted very very soon. |
| 2012-09-11 03:02:53 |
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Alright Chapter 8 is up guys I hope you enjoy it and sorry it took so long. |
| 2012-08-25 02:14:43 |
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Actually I am not a male I am female so the term "Sis." would be more accurate lol, either way I am working on Chapter eight now it will be the final chapter of story. I hope to not dissapoint I just want to make sure it ends on a great note and you guys are satified with the tales of Sara and Bryce. I am thing about creating another part to this serious only through Lydia, bryce's younger sister. Let me know what you think |
| 2012-08-25 02:12:13 |
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LOL as a matter of face I am not a bro since I am female, I would say sis would be more accurate, sorry its taking so long guys I am putting the final chapter together I want it to be special and end well so give me more time and I hope to not dissapoint you |
| 2012-08-15 01:59:44 |
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Okay guys chapter seven is up i hope you like it and its much longer than was i usualy write. |
| 2012-08-14 23:44:50 |
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I am already in talks with a publisher she is really interested in this story the actual tittle however is Caught in a Texas storm, this is just a rough draft version of it. I cant say if Bryce dies or not you just have to read what is next from here it will kind of a time jump. |
| 2012-08-13 17:31:24 |
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Okay guys i have up chapter six sorry it took so long to get up. hope you enjoy it |
| 2012-07-20 16:51:05 |
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Mmm Monkey dicks....:) Sounds tasteful and fun. LOL listen like i have said you guys can say anything you wish to me its the internet its not like i am being told to my face and if someone told me to suck moneky dicks in real life i would laughed and walked off anyways have a nice day as always |
| 2012-07-19 21:13:26 |
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Well I suppose I could tell if from carolines point of view if I did create a second part only problem is how 2 write a second part to this. Because of how the story turned out it may make the second part seem boring in comparison |
| 2012-07-19 21:07:23 |
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Yes its a very condensed version of what I wrote so far, I had only posted here 2 see how ppl would respond and when ppl began 2 ask for more I had 2 break itdow to fit it here lol |
| 2012-07-19 17:32:12 |
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Okay guys I have posted Chapter five if you are ready for the next part sorry it took so long to post. |
| 2012-07-13 04:22:19 |
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To the hater first things first I know cali is more than 500 miles away not only are you insults gay you seem to have poor eye sight lol...Oh well losing you as someone who reads my stories is not a hurt in any way just means i dont have to read your shitty comments...second you wouldnt know a story if it fucked you in the ass. You must be one of those little boys who cant get the puss so you come here or the other a man over 30 who cant get any either way haters gonna hate and there is nothing I can do about it go hate on someone elses page..Now for the ppl who love this I am so happy...thanks for your great comments and your wonderful advice. It may be awhile before I write another chapter cause I am working on making them longer for you. |
| 2012-07-13 04:15:30 |
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I am working on making the chapters longer so it may be awhile before I post another one. I dont want to dissapoint and to the haters you may think you hurt my feelings but in the end I still love ya and value your thought no matter how gay its sounds!!! <3 |
| 2012-07-12 03:29:01 |
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And you seem to think I give a shit lol everyone is entitled to opioion if i could I would delete this story it didnt turn out the way i wanted but you say and so what you wish and i will go on not giving a shit what you think thank you and have a wonderful day :) |
| 2012-07-12 03:26:29 |
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@ Jessica listen i understand this is porn site but post your email elsewhere and the chances of you being thirteen are very slim if you are perhaps you should stick to kids your own age no offense...are all kids having sex at 13 now a days what the hell is our world coming too?? :( |
| 2012-07-12 02:57:20 |
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I am in the process of creating 2 more chapteres for u guys so like I said just bere with me and I won't dissapoint you. I am enjoying writing it its been so long since I have wrote something that I thourghly enjoy |
| 2012-07-12 00:45:51 |
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I will try working on longer chapters I might just start posting two or three at a time so it might be awhile before i have the rest posted bear with me i have much more in store. |
| 2012-07-11 23:04:09 |
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wow very nice found myself wishing for more, great job!! |
| 2012-07-11 22:35:31 |
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Okay guys go to page 37 for the new chapters..I continued chapter three to make it longer for you and added chapter four. Like i said there i have talked to a publishing agent who is eager to take this story on and try to get it published for me if that happens you guys will have been the first to read this. Thanks for you support and wonderful comments. I have enjoyed writing this book and i am happy to know you love it too. |
| 2012-07-11 20:30:06 |
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Just to let you guys know this is based off a book I am in the process of writing i guess my confindence isnt the best which is why i have not yet finished it the chapters are shorter on here but for the book they are much longer since you guys seem to be so interested in it i think i shall turn it into a publishing agent and see how it all goes thanks for your adcvice and your wonderful comments...I will be posting Unexpected chapter 4 and 5 tonight perhaps together. |
| 2012-07-11 03:43:54 |
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If you go to Name than to page 37 you will find chapter three half way down |
| 2012-07-11 03:37:25 |
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Okay guys Chapter three is up and ready I will post chapter four tommorow ENJOY!! |
| 2012-07-11 01:55:42 |
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Okay guys just wanted to let you know Chapter two is up and ready its just not on the first page go to name and page 37 if you would like to read Chapter two |
| 2012-07-11 01:04:06 |
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Thanks guys for the critique it will help out on Chapter two which should be on here by tonight. I hope you will enjoy chapter two as well and it will prob be followed by a few more lol. |
| 2012-07-10 21:17:20 |
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I have over 100 view but no one is letting me know if they like this lol if i dont get some comments back i wont continue the story cause i will assume you dont like it. |
| 2012-07-10 21:05:30 |
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damn it I misspelled it too lol I meant to say its not retarted, but RETARDED |
| 2012-07-10 21:04:16 |
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also its not retarted its RERTARDED. LOL |
| 2012-07-10 21:03:42 |
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That wasnt the intent of the story...She was a bitch to him so he killed her |
| 2012-07-10 20:42:40 |
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Sorry guys the last part was supposed to say
"Hello Bryce." to end the chapter review.... |
| 2012-07-10 04:09:17 |
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Yeah like I said this is my first attempt i hope Pt 2 is better |
| 2012-07-10 03:29:45 |
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Just in case you didnt see the previous comment I do have a part two for this story which will finish it off. Would love some feed back |
| 2012-07-10 03:19:16 |
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Feel free to comment on this story plz..I also have a part two to it. I would like to know what you thought of the story. |