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| 2012-08-12 20:20:27 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 9 Rewritten |
Thank you all for your comments, I admit that I was running out of ideas, so finishing seemed the right thing to do. |
| 2012-08-12 13:33:15 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 9 |
For anyone who is interested, I have rewritten the ending, I just felt so bad about how I ended the story I just had to rewrite it. |
| 2012-08-12 12:49:48 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 9 |
@Dawnnie64
I admit that this chapter was hard to get through, I had completely run out of ideas, and decided I just wanted to end it, the ending could have been better I agree, I always find the ending the hardest thing to write. |
| 2012-08-07 13:10:42 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 8 Fix |
Just giving a heads up, I am still work on 9 life has gotten busy that's all, maybe another week or two. |
| 2012-08-06 12:05:33 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 8 Fix |
Honestly it never crossed my mind, but at the same time he is very tired as the couch isn't comfortable, that also explains why he doesn't see them. |
| 2012-08-01 12:26:37 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 8 Fix |
Fear not, I'm still here life has gotten busy that's all and finding time to write is rather difficult.
Plus I'm also been getting quite a bit or writers block, but don't worry I hope to have it finished some time soon.
Once again I would like to thank everyone for their support. |
| 2012-07-18 10:24:25 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 8 Fix |
Thank you all for your kind comments, your support and the 10/10's.
I admit that I don't think there will be many more chapters to this story, I'll see how my imagination and creativity take me.
Once again thank you. |
| 2012-07-17 12:52:23 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 8 |
Sorry for the double post. |
| 2012-07-17 12:51:58 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 8 |
I must admit, I'm not sure if I'll post the next chapter here, the reception that I've received thus far from the comments thou positive at times and mean at others have given pause to wonder whether I should bother, I admit that I blame myself partly for some of the responses, but when I'm receiving comments that lower my belief in myself and my writing, it both makes me angry and sad.
Yes I am working on Chp 9, I will see how I feel, I might give this place one more chance. |
| 2012-07-17 12:35:14 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 8 |
I must admit, I'm not sure if I'll post the next chapter here, the reception that I've received thus far from the comments thou positive at times and mean at others have given pause to wonder whether I should bother, I admit that I blame myself partly for some of the responses, but when I'm receiving comments that lower my belief in myself and my writing, it both makes me angry and sad.
Yes I am working on Chp 9, I will see how I feel, I might give this place one more chance. |
| 2012-07-11 13:52:51 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 7 |
@anon 1
Thanks.
@anon 2
I said it's written I didn't say I posted it. |
| 2012-07-11 10:13:51 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 5 |
Wow that was a shock the system, I kind of feel a little depressed about my writing, thank you for your honesty in any case.
As for my style of writing, yes maybe I should use more grammer corrections but that's how I write, I'm not a professional, and writing isn't part of my job description.
As for proof reading, I do do it but I'm not perfect.
I hope you don't take this as me whining, because I'm not, I am man enough to realise when I've made mistake, and out of curiosity is the word realise the error because if it is, then I might understand the problem, I'm not American, I'm Australian so some of my spelling might be different to you.
But please do respond to this message and let me know.
Once again thanks for the heads up on my mistakes, I have two more chapters to post and this site is up to date. |
| 2012-07-11 10:02:42 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 6 |
Sorry you feel that way. |
| 2012-07-09 09:40:34 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 4 |
@Anon 1
If you haven't already get Dawnguard
@Anon 2
I plan too. |
| 2012-07-08 03:04:55 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 3 |
@Anon 1
I never realised I had made those errors thanks for pointing them out, if I can find a way to fix them on here, I'll do it as soon as possible
@Anon 2
Sorry mate the next chapter is already written and I afraid if your expecting what you mentioned your going to be disappointed. |
| 2012-07-07 11:20:07 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 2 |
Sorry for the triple post. |
| 2012-07-07 11:19:51 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 2 |
Than I'm sure you will be glad to know that I've written 8 chapter so far. |
| 2012-07-07 11:19:20 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 2 |
Than I'm sure you will be glad to know that I've written 8 chapter so far. |
| 2012-07-07 08:41:01 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 1 |
Who are you refering too? |
| 2012-07-06 21:07:54 |
Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 1 |
This was the first place I discovered when I started reading sex stories, a few of the writers here inspired me to do it myself, so I finally decided I would post my stories here too.
And I'm glad you like it. |