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Date Story title Comment
2012-06-28 08:06:57 Quincea?era Thanks for the compliments! To the commenter below: that's precisely the effect I was going for. ;)
2012-07-03 16:37:56 Shake It Up: Tear It Up Thank you both for the compliments. I really wanted to illustrate the main character's escalating depravity and highlight his initial struggle against his own conscience; it's what passes for character development in a piece of literature that has no redeeming social value otherwise, haha. ;) It couldn't have ended any other way.
2012-07-03 16:50:59 Quincea?era To the reader below: I'm glad you enjoyed it! The thing is, I've re-read the story on more than a few occasions, and I keep finding errors or things I'd like to change every time. If anything, I seemed too eager to use certain combinations of words and didn't pay enough attention to sentence flow.

The point is, every story written is good practice. Hopefully, one day I'll be able to tighten up my prose to the point where it's both poetic and elegant. :)
2012-07-07 19:41:42 Quincea?era Got logged out writing my responses, but 2012-07-07 19:39:59 was me, lol.
2012-07-07 19:44:50 The Templar Belles - Parts I - VII I'm working on another story right now, but I'm definitely interested in writing another installment of the 'Belles!
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