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Story title |
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| 2012-09-17 20:19:51 |
The Templar Belles - Parts I - VII |
To 2012-09-17 02:45:56, part 2:
I'm going to stick to the multiple POV format, otherwise known as an "Episodically Limited" narrative, because of the advantages known to be offered by this technique. There's not enough room here to list them all, but the most useful of them is that while the POV character can never purposely mislead the reader (since you're inside their head), their observations and opinions may not necessarily be accurate. And yes, I'm a big fan of ASOIAF, and with casts this large and locales this varied, being able to jump between points of view is extremely useful. |
| 2012-09-17 20:19:29 |
The Templar Belles - Parts I - VII |
To 2012-09-17 02:45:56, part 1:
I find that the sex scenes actually bog me down more than anything (I know, huh?), but if it'll help to alleviate your fears, here's a general outline of what's going to happen next. Ariel will be reporting back to her organization and getting further instructions; Bella continues to develop her skills under her daddy's tutelage, but there's a matter concerning another relationship she has to resolve; Chloe receives some on-the-job training from her master as the two of them try to track down the Archbishop through the girls he's been forced to abandon; the Archbishop meets with his splinter faction and is introduced to an unexpected member. |
| 2012-09-06 14:37:58 |
The Templar Belles - Parts I - VII |
To 2012-09-06 00:43:43:
After being delayed by a number of side projects, I'm happy to report that I'm about 5,000 words into the next installment, and that's only about a week of work. The potentially bad news is that it's only one chapter, so it may be another month before the entire installment is ready to be published. I have a good idea of where I want to take the story so that won't be a problem, it's just a matter of having enough time to lay it down properly. I appreciate your concern regarding the progress of the story, and I hope it'll live up to your expectations! |
| 2012-08-18 03:11:51 |
The Templar Belles - Parts I - VII |
As requested, a shout-out to "Cuntfaggot." Enjoy. |
| 2012-08-03 19:53:36 |
Shake It Up: Tear It Up |
A quick thank-you for the feedback since my last post. I'm glad most of you enjoyed it, and to those who didn't because it was too extreme, well, I did my best to warn you with the story tags. :) |
| 2012-08-01 09:10:04 |
Quincea?era |
To 2012-07-30 21:39:09:
The body is back in the hands of the family. I'd love to elaborate in a sequel, but I'm concerned that it'll ruin the "feel" of this story. I also don't know if it should have a sad or happy ending.
2012-07-27 04:38:46:
First of all, I want to emphasize that I have no desire to harm or harass anyone in real life, but if you've read my other story "The Templar Belles," then you know the answer to your question. ;)
And thanks againt to everyone else for the compliments! |
| 2012-08-01 08:59:39 |
The Templar Belles - Parts I - VII |
To 2012-07-30 21:51:06:
Haha, oddly enough, I had planned on incorporating the Archbishop as an ally of the two reformers, albeit with a more radical agenda. Interesting that you would see this in an indie film format; I'm curious as to which ones you're thinking of.
To 2012-07-16 06:54:54:
I guess I can't really blame them, but I tried to make it clear that this was a celebrity fanfic at the very start, so...heh.
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| 2012-07-07 19:44:50 |
The Templar Belles - Parts I - VII |
I'm working on another story right now, but I'm definitely interested in writing another installment of the 'Belles! |
| 2012-07-07 19:41:42 |
Quincea?era |
Got logged out writing my responses, but 2012-07-07 19:39:59 was me, lol. |
| 2012-07-03 16:50:59 |
Quincea?era |
To the reader below: I'm glad you enjoyed it! The thing is, I've re-read the story on more than a few occasions, and I keep finding errors or things I'd like to change every time. If anything, I seemed too eager to use certain combinations of words and didn't pay enough attention to sentence flow.
The point is, every story written is good practice. Hopefully, one day I'll be able to tighten up my prose to the point where it's both poetic and elegant. :) |
| 2012-07-03 16:37:56 |
Shake It Up: Tear It Up |
Thank you both for the compliments. I really wanted to illustrate the main character's escalating depravity and highlight his initial struggle against his own conscience; it's what passes for character development in a piece of literature that has no redeeming social value otherwise, haha. ;) It couldn't have ended any other way. |
| 2012-06-28 08:06:57 |
Quincea?era |
Thanks for the compliments! To the commenter below: that's precisely the effect I was going for. ;) |