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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-01-25 02:08:45 |
Mine! Part 1: The Bet |
Jesus Christ. Lemme know if ya ever wanna collaborate, you were my inspiration to start writing. |
| 2013-01-13 18:56:09 |
My Innocent Addiction: Chapter Four |
That's....awful. I mean, very well written despite the wall of words, but you're quite brutal and cruel. I'd be glad to spell check, punctuate, etcetera, for you, just message me(: |
| 2013-01-12 22:06:10 |
asleep |
You're not as good as you used to be, but maybe it's just me. |
| 2012-12-02 17:45:50 |
Christian's hot neighbour |
Spell check, more punctuation, make the paragraphs a little shorter perhaps? |
| 2012-10-13 16:01:56 |
he New Pregnant Girl At School part 1 |
To be honest: Awful. Read some of the highest-rated stories, and learn something from it. |
| 2012-10-08 02:02:00 |
First Kiss |
I was looking for a cute young vanilla story, and although this is not at all what I expected, it made me smile. Beautiful story. |
| 2012-08-13 02:42:31 |
Sex Slaves/Pets: Rules, Regulations, And A Couple Short Stories |
These rules are from when I was 16. It's old school. The minimum age is whatever the age of consent is in the pet's state, max age stays the same. I'm not a pedofile, all young pets mentioned were either my age (at the time) or older. |
| 2012-07-06 17:33:06 |
My Boyfriend's Submissive Brother |
Yeah, I accidentally rushed it. The people I live with got into a very loud fight and I got distracted. I already have plans for part two(: |
| 2012-06-22 01:47:11 |
Vanilla Sex Story |
You're a bitter fucking person. These are old stories, and I only write short stories. |
| 2012-06-22 01:45:58 |
Give me your v-card!/Just A Quickie |
Fuck, sorry. (<---sarcasm) |