Comments from DreamWeavers
|2012-06-24 01:57:00||The Plan part 2||Thanks for the comments all. :) The next part should be ready some time in the next week.|
|2012-07-01 02:34:11||A START OF A NEW BEGINNING||Just a few tips...
1: Write in a program that has a spell checker, copy it in after. Even Gmail would work.
2: An "i" alone is always capitalized: "I"
3: Texting shorthand has no place in stories unless you're writing what someone is texting.
4: Don't forget proper punctuation and spacing as it makes a story readable.
Drop me a line once the story is legible and I'll rate it then. :)