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2012-06-14 16:21:56 Mind Control Family AUTHOR: HAHAHA I figured the two things people were going to criticize me for was the grammar, and switching from first person two third.

I will admit I was lazy and in the interest of time I didn't go through it as well as I should have. I did this off the top of my head, next chapter I'll actually come up with a outline before I wright it. Its it's just to bad I can't edit my work on here.

Thanks for your suggestions and praise everyone.
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