Comments from Aleryn
|2012-07-27 05:29:51||Mamas past out again Chapter 2||Please more. It's well written and you left it on a perfect ending for more.|
|2012-09-06 01:35:41||Naruto's Adventures: Sakura's Jealousy Pt.1||Agreed on Anonymous there. A little bit more detail, and a slight bit more on story. Kakashi wouldn't have just went all for it, but he would've ended up falling for Sakura (hell who wouldn't) but definitely work more on how the characters would actually react.
Still though a great job, and can't wait for part 2.
|2012-10-30 17:37:28||Office Girl||It's a great story, with a great job with description and build up.
Do make a second one.