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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-10-21 20:29:59 |
Taken by wolves |
Make the story longer, slow it down. But good |
| 2012-09-09 19:23:10 |
Spring Break Broke My Heart |
Throughout the whole story I felt really bad for Brian. He decided to go slow for her because she needed ''space,'' but then as soon as the next guy(s) come along she's as loose as a dublin whore. Happens all the time in real life. |
| 2012-09-04 18:27:54 |
Joint Passion |
I really enjoyed that. It was erotic but no to heavy. A light a refreshing way to combine two of man's greatest arts together. |
| 2012-08-19 11:28:14 |
Sexual Exploration |
Needs some story. But I like it. Wish it was longer (no pun intended). |
| 2012-08-19 11:23:51 |
Alicia and Ron (Dressing Room) |
But... great opening. Hate incest... but I can pretend there friends. So, the story worted for me. I'll give ya a plus. |
| 2012-08-19 11:22:43 |
Alicia and Ron (Dressing Room) |
HAHAHAHA 'Hey, you wana have sex." Funny!! If only it was that easy... No seduction, no dinner, no romantic gestures; just 'hey you wana have sex.' Best joke on this site. |
| 2012-08-19 11:17:47 |
danny phantom ghost boy series 2 jayrich |
Yes.. I'm your first positive comment. |
| 2012-08-19 11:17:22 |
danny phantom ghost boy series 2 jayrich |
Lol to they comment at the bottom. Good story |
| 2012-08-19 11:15:03 |
Super 8 #1 |
I'm not a hater but, it needed something. I don't know what though. On a positive note you did make the characters very real though |
| 2012-08-19 10:57:01 |
Time For School Pt. 1 |
Oh dear god, for the last time. I said HE MIGHT THINK THAT ABOUT HIS WRITING. Hey, look in the secind comment, I said it was FINE. No, I am not trolling. I'd never troll on a story. 1, Because they take a great deal of time and effort, 2, Trolling just wastes everyones time. The point I was trying to make is the age of the author. I'm been seeing alot of younger authors. I like it. People DONT have to wait to grow up to make a diffrence. And on the Net, where we can hide our age, is the best oppertunity. I was wondering if you were one of those people. But all you do is get defensive. I made the message as simple as possible, but able to get through the system. Because most of my comments get rejected, when I dont even say fuck. So.... yeah. Nothing wrong with the story, its hot. We all thought about it in school. Someone finnaly wrote it. Thank you. Just reread my comments with a clear mind. |
| 2012-08-18 23:17:56 |
Time For School Pt. 1 |
I said you might think your writing is amuture. It's fine by the way. I was merely saying that your age is in question. The idea of the story, you're saying of how you're writing style is at a level of a 14 year olds. AND you chose that age category 'secret'. Under 18 much? And know I'm not 'trolling.' Why would you troll on a sex site? No disrespect intended. It's just.... this site is for sex post. Why the hell would you troll? |
| 2012-08-18 17:31:32 |
Time For School Pt. 2 |
Only part I enjoyed was the Kit Kat. |
| 2012-08-18 17:29:06 |
Time For School Pt. 1 |
You say that you didn't do well in school. This might mean that you know you're writing might be seen amature and young. You also wrote a fantasy that is commonly thought of in school. Age is "secret." Hmmm |
| 2012-08-16 17:57:35 |
Feel part one |
Wow, I know I got a low rating, but I'm not upset. Why; I gotta 69 rating |
| 2012-08-04 17:26:25 |
danny phantom ghost boy series by jayrich |
Too short, and not hot at all. We need more fanfic stories, but not ones that make us wana never see the series again. |
| 2012-08-04 10:07:09 |
Hiding as a friend |
I did, but for some reason it was posted in the story section. Maybe its just an error. But I posted it in the poem section. |
| 2012-08-03 17:55:39 |
A Dream Within a Dream; or, Madly In Love |
I've read this a thousand times. Perfect style, and just the right mix of sex and storyline. I've told a ton of people to read this. WRITE A SEQUAL!!!!!!! |
| 2012-07-17 14:59:38 |
Harry potter chapter one |
Ya need to work on spacing, but I like Harry/Hermione. Ron is too fucking stupid to keep up, and they'd probably get divorced. harry is smart and thinks about others. Hermione is crazy smart, and has been there for him. Ron; eats magical jelly-bellies. |
| 2012-07-17 14:56:36 |
Fallen angel |
It's deep, I'll give it that. If you really look for the meaning its not half bad. |
| 2012-07-17 14:54:07 |
Sleep around (cheap poem) |
I try my best to respect people, because we all have feeling right? I don't know you so how can I possibly judge you? Well dude, this is too much man. Is there ANY way to get this off the site? I know its a porn site but this sucks ass. Like not normal sexy ass, but fat hairy ass. Shit and cum coated hairy on an ass thats, I dont know...
(5 min later)
Ok, I'm calm....
(read poem with an open mind)
FUCK!!! |
| 2012-07-17 14:49:16 |
Heartbroken! |
I know the feeling brah, I'm sorry you have to face the worst feeling ever experienced. People tell ya to move on, that it'll would be better to forget about her. But ya can't. Just know that alot of people understand what ya goin' through |
| 2012-07-14 21:32:14 |
Bound |
Thanks, that means alot |
| 2012-07-14 21:27:06 |
Start over, with me |
Thank You Karen, but if I didn't post here you'd have never read that poem. Xnxx gets thousands of viewers a day! If I can get even one person to see my stuff ever, I'll be happy. |
| 2012-07-14 21:24:31 |
So Far Away |
There was this girl who I knew for a large portion of my life. She ment EVERYTHING to me for a while. Parts of my work is dedicated to her. The rest is to my GF Christina. She helped me through a VERY rough time, and I don't know who I'd be without her. |
| 2012-06-21 23:12:15 |
A Dream Within a Dream; or, Madly In Love |
Ok, I read your story two days ago. I just had to read it again. Then I realised that 12 21 2012 is coming up, and there probably wont be internet at the end of the world. So I printed out the whole 47 pages. I was running out of paper at one point. And my friend and I were running around the house trying to find any paper. |
| 2012-06-21 23:05:19 |
Shitty joks that are funny as fuck |
Figure that as soon as I posted it. Im over 14 and under 24. |
| 2012-06-20 23:37:53 |
The Project |
More STORY. There is porn with better lines than you. Come on! |
| 2012-06-19 22:55:58 |
Shitty joks that are funny as fuck |
I don't watch too much porn. I got a fuck buddy. But despite the excellent question, the deal was, your age first. If you wish to say so privetly my numer is478 737 4154. Just text randjr and you age. |
| 2012-06-19 12:43:01 |
Where Am I? |
While this may not be your pain, there are plenty of other people out there that deal with these issues. Normally, if I see some shit harassing a girl, I kick his ass. I also teach self-defense classes up America's east coast. I'm Rand, and if you mention this poem when you sign up, I'll give you a free life-time membership to my dojo. |
| 2012-06-19 02:21:18 |
Shitty joks that are funny as fuck |
To the person below askin my age. I'll make you a deal; I'll give you my age, after you give me yours. also y u lookin up porn at eight in the morning? |
| 2012-06-17 22:45:37 |
Shitty joks that are funny as fuck |
Neh, I told my friend I had an acount, and since he was too lazy to make his own, he used mine. Ive known the guy for eight years so I said ok. I dont really tell jokes. |
| 2012-06-17 01:14:01 |
Thinking of Then |
Why am I getting so much neg. votes for this poem? |
| 2012-06-15 02:04:33 |
We Started As Friends |
This poem is the reason I enjoy poetry. It helped me patch up some stuff. Thanks I owed you big |
| 2012-06-15 01:57:31 |
Start over, with me |
To the guy at the bottem, thanks for the thumbs up. It helps to know there are others out there. |
| 2012-06-14 00:58:05 |
Weird changes chap 1 |
Ok so ur age is a secret, and ur experementing with ur sexuality, your either very young or old. But u said fourteenth so Im guesing ur from twelve to Fifteen urs old?, |
| 2012-06-14 00:44:51 |
Defiance: Chapter Five |
Yo last read talkin about the "her erection part." Shut the fuck up. Finnaly someone makes a REALLY good story, and you gotta be a tiny dick about it. Xnxx has a weird system sometimes with spelling. I ask you to find one story without spelling errors. None. Good job writting dude. You did greek mythology, make your next one kinda like the maximum ride series. I swear you have James Pattersons writting style |