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| 2012-11-05 09:23:24 |
The Girls Next Door 13 |
I loved reading this installment to the series. I have been rereading the other parts to keep the series fresh in my memory while I await the next installment. I understand about having a new lady friend. I hope that she will be amicable with your writing so that you can continue this series in a more timely manner. Please write/post other chapters in a more timely manner. I really want to hear about all four of the wives delivering babies. Will CJ have triplets or quads? |
| 2012-08-08 14:39:48 |
The Girls Next Door 12 |
Another great addition to this story series. Please continue. I am thoroughly enjoying this series. I am also a little confused as to who is pregnant. Was the comment of "4 for 4" meaning that 4 of the girls were pregnant? Or is it that 4 of the girls are not on birth control? |
| 2012-07-09 15:53:37 |
The Girls Next Door 11 |
This is an awesome continuation to an excellent story. Will Katrina end up pregnant after loosing her virginity? If so, will she become another wife? |
| 2012-06-29 14:02:13 |
I CAN'T RESIST MY NEIGHBOR-OR HER TEENAGE GIRLS!-CHAPTER 5 |
Excellent story. This story series has been a great read. I have thoroughly enjoyed each part. The story just keeps building. Please tell us more. Just do not take as long to!! |
| 2012-06-27 08:57:37 |
Lisa's Awakening Chapter 5 |
This is a great story series. The end of part 5, indicates that there is more of this story to be told. Please tell us more. |
| 2012-06-20 13:07:46 |
The Bus Driver And His Angels |
Great story. Please tell us about the morning with Mandy. And then continue with the rest of the girls!!! |
| 2012-06-18 08:54:31 |
The Girls Next Door 10 Bills Birthday Pt 3 |
This is a continuation of a very good story series. That was a unique twist to the story plot concerning CJ and Anna's parents. At least now Anna is "officially" part of the family. What was in the envelope that Anna's dad gave Bill. It will be interesting to read how soon Alissa and CJ become pregnant after graduation. Please continue this excellent story series. |
| 2012-06-14 13:39:26 |
Denny?s Breakfast Treat ? 6 |
This is a great continuation to this story series. Please keep this series going. Tell us about their vacation, their progression of their pregnancy in pictures, the birth of the babies( how many will each wife have), and how soon the wives will be pregnant again.
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| 2012-06-11 09:37:55 |
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This is an excellent story. It is very well written. Please tell us more. |
| 2012-06-08 13:02:01 |
The Girls Next Door 10 Bills Birthday Pt 2 |
I have enjoyed every part of this series. You tell a great story. You have enough topics to write at least ten more parts ( the wedding, the honeymoon, Amanda's baby, CJ's and Alissa's babies, Anna' graduation <then Anna's baby>. Throw in a couple more parties like the last one.). I can hardly wait for the next part to this series. Please continue and tell us more. |
| 2012-06-07 11:56:53 |
I CAN'T RESIST MY NEIGHBOR-OR HER TEENAGE GIRLS!-3 |
This story just keeps getting better. It does appear that you have left yourself room for at least another chapter or two. Just a couple of thoughts for topics. 1. - Have Tony marry Cyn, with Kat as the bridesmaid, as the vows are being said, Kat could be saying them also. Then Tony would actually have two wives, with all three agreeing to this arrangement. 2. - The twins could go to Cyn for questions about sex (masturbation and oral sex) while she is in bed with Tony. Being the good mother that she is, Cyn could show the girls along with Tony. Showing the twins that all men are not like their father was, as you did with Kat. Please keep up the good work and tell us more. |
| 2012-06-04 10:19:08 |
Mit 3: Her Final Request |
I have really enjoyed all three parts of this story. I totally agree with Ghostrider939 as a possible direction for the next part or parts of this story. Maybe even have Tiffany find out and have her join you. |
| 2012-05-30 15:29:17 |
Fucking Teagan - part 3 |
I have enjoyed all three parts. I can hardly wait for more parts of this story. Please continue |
| 2012-05-29 08:50:08 |
I CAN'T RESIST MY NEIGHBOR-OR HER TEENAGE GIRLS!-2 |
I have thoroughly enjoyed both stories. After reading the first story, I was impatiently, patiently waiting for the second story. The second story was worth waiting for. Again, I will be impatiently, patiently waiting for the third story. This story series could go on for a few more parts. Tony and Cyn could eventually get married. Kat could still part of the "marriage." You could jump ahead a couple of years to when the Tiff and Shannon turn 16. They could have found out that Tony and Kat are making love to with each other. They could have a talk with Kat about her lovemaking with Tony. Such as does Kat enjoy their lovemaking, and how long have they been making love. Tiff and Shannon could talk to Cyn about Kat And Tony making love. They could express their desire to make love with Tony also. Cyn could use the same reasoning with Tony for why she allowed Kat to make love with Tony. This is just a couple of thoughts that I had. Keep up the excellent storytelling. |