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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-03-29 23:52:21 |
Life's Little Moments | Chapter One |
Keep writing. This is a good start. |
| 2013-03-07 00:32:21 |
how i lost my virginity? |
Paragraphs don't have to be too long. Just enough to make a statement. You keep writing... |
| 2013-03-07 00:13:14 |
King of the hill : the sexual adventures in the ally |
There is an "alley" behind my house. |
| 2013-02-01 11:12:08 |
Ella's troubles |
Bravo!!! The point about this being fiction is well taken. |
| 2013-01-31 01:08:34 |
The Time Machine(Part 2 Mary Boleyn |
oh. is this what dr who meant |
| 2013-01-14 10:12:14 |
From Lonely Unfilled Housewife to Perverted Slut Part 12 |
This part of the Story is delivered as promised, and it delivers as promised. |
| 2013-01-11 10:41:38 |
My Granddaddy Emerald Green |
I should have typed, "Done" |
| 2013-01-11 10:37:31 |
My Granddaddy Emerald Green |
Thank you for sharing, Tim. |
| 2013-01-10 15:27:19 |
TRAIN RIDE |
I am not sure the "Southwest Chief," has a section for that. If so it would still be the "Super Chief." |
| 2013-01-10 15:24:48 |
TRAIN RIDE |
I had to take the readership to One thousand. |
| 2013-01-10 14:57:57 |
Maritime Law |
Thank you. Well written and received. |
| 2013-01-07 23:46:18 |
Italian Fantasy |
oh my. you are a horny romantic. |
| 2012-12-28 04:50:51 |
Batwoman meets Catwoman (Part One) |
Now I am a Comics Fan, fan again. Twice. |
| 2012-12-28 04:32:05 |
The capture and domination of Helena Bertinelli Part One |
I hope part two is on the way. I am now a comics fan, fan. |
| 2012-12-22 21:39:42 |
Shazza Ch01 - The Beginning |
false confession? I want to know what happens next? |
| 2012-12-16 15:30:12 |
Beast. |
The old storytellers could not have told this story til the kinder were in bed. |
| 2012-12-14 13:56:59 |
A mother in law dilemma PART TWO |
NOTICE:: To whom it may concern, this story is Very Well Received!!!!!
At least my me. I suspect that others may be busy and forget to mention it. |
| 2012-12-06 21:40:58 |
Life's Strange Turns. Part 1 |
Good use of pov. Thank you. |
| 2012-12-06 07:35:58 |
The babysitter returns part 2 |
The kiss on the shoulder is the true point of this story. |
| 2012-12-04 15:55:29 |
One Silent Night |
This story is the Christmas Miracle; delivered before Christmas. I do like the way you use gender and weather...Thank you! |
| 2012-12-03 11:22:15 |
One Silent Night |
This was worth waiting for.!! |
| 2012-12-03 10:57:02 |
Passions at school (re-written) |
Maybe you are just bad. |
| 2012-12-01 09:38:00 |
A Slave of the Rus - The Conclusion |
Of course, I mean the Goddess should be honored by your story. I am honored that you shared it with us. |
| 2012-12-01 09:36:35 |
A Slave of the Rus - The Conclusion |
Freya should be honored! |
| 2012-11-24 02:31:14 |
A Slave of the Rus |
Good research, Thank you. |
| 2012-11-23 22:23:46 |
THE VAMPIRE GIRL 2 |
Watch the format. The story line is stunning. |
| 2012-11-23 22:22:22 |
THE VAMPIRE GIRL |
The gothic touch is hot. More please. Mo. |
| 2012-11-23 09:54:45 |
Enemy Turned Fuck Buddy |
I forgot to mention this; this is a good story. You are developping characters well. |
| 2012-11-23 09:49:34 |
Enemy Turned Fuck Buddy |
My cousin (female) has a T-Shirt: Kiss me like you miss me, but fuck me like you hate me. |
| 2012-11-21 00:46:25 |
My friend's 43y/o kinky Mother (formatting errors fixed) |
I look forward to the continuation. |
| 2012-11-19 23:03:45 |
Darling part 3 |
Isn't lovelost our favorite girl? |
| 2012-11-13 09:20:50 |
Blast from the past part 3 |
Bravo. Ole. Thank you. |
| 2012-11-09 21:44:57 |
Holidays, Chapter 1 - A New Year |
That's what what I call a New Year. |
| 2012-11-06 16:10:17 |
Blast from the past 2 |
Of course I wanted to read Part 2. I would love to read part 3 |
| 2012-10-30 11:24:53 |
The Chair |
Gym was right. Thanks Gym and Daddycums |
| 2012-10-30 08:20:45 |
Wife swapping |
Married at 11? Not here! |
| 2012-10-19 09:38:41 |
Left alone with his friend |
This story should rate higher. |
| 2012-10-16 13:08:01 |
~Family~Rituals~ |
There is a good deal of detail in this story. Keep writing. Anywhere. |
| 2012-09-07 09:35:55 |
A Super Life Chapter 3 |
I think I see the Superpower showing. |
| 2012-09-04 14:55:26 |
visiting my brother |
I am really getting to enjoy the action in your stories. |
| 2012-08-22 11:03:44 |
A Bad-Stepmother |
Even if you tire of this genre, Keep Writing! |
| 2012-07-22 09:45:29 |
The Coaches Wife, pt 2 |
Hmm..Can you say "The Last Picture Show?"...... |
| 2012-06-19 16:08:05 |
Respecting Mom |
I really enjoyed the detail. Hot. |