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| 2012-06-08 17:09:45 |
First Kiss |
My wife finally did read this story - after I'd sent it to her a couple of times. She said it was OK - her only comment was that it doesn't tell what happens after they find each other and become a couple; she'd like to see the story continue. I have to agree with that statement, but this will always be one of my favorite stories on this site. |
| 2012-06-08 17:04:19 |
The Ten of Them Chapter 4 |
As for the ages, they're either 12 and 16 at this point or 13 and 17 - it's sometimes hard to keep exact track of the time. I've noticed on this site that a lot of authors choose to write about 12-13 year olds and 16 year olds having sex; 4 years seems to be a common age difference. As for the grammar, spell-check only corrects the spelling - not putting the correct form of the right word in the right place. I like the plot; even though it's all over-the-top (ie genuises, super-rich, master of martial-arts, "perfect," etc) but its still a good story and I always like multi-part stories that take time to develop and make an investment in good characterization. I'd been looking forward to the series continuing and will keep checking back, eager for the next installment. Keep up the good work - I'll be curious to see how the title relates to the continuing story development; ie, 10 children for JJ and Kathryn, or 10 family member for Kathryn's family, etc. |
| 2012-05-06 18:06:04 |
Protective husband four loves part five |
I'm enjoying this series a lot. It's got a lot of sex, maybe too much - though I can understand why the author is doing it - but it's got great character development, lots of sub-plots and good dialogue and settings. I like the spin-offs about Sharon and Dr. Bastard and how those sub-plots keep developing. I look forward to the next installment and will be checking back frequently to see what comes next. |
| 2012-04-21 18:10:56 |
SIMPLE SIMON |
My wife and I met soon after a breakup from my ex and a year after her divorce; she's also not thei pin-up type, but we've been together 14 years and two kids. We made love on our first date, so I really do believe in love at first sight and am always looking for stories that express it. |
| 2012-04-21 18:06:37 |
SIMPLE SIMON |
My wife and I met soon after a breakup from my ex and a year after her divorce; she's also not thei pin-up type, but we've been together 14 years and two kids. We made love on our first date, so I really do believe in love at first sight and am always looking for stories that express it. |
| 2012-04-19 19:44:18 |
The mute girl 3 |
PLEASE continue the series. I'm enjoying it very much; the characters are realistic and, since I proposed to my wife just a week after our first date, I can relate to the love at first site angle. This story reminds me a little of First Kiss, another story on here in the Romance section - both are about unusual people who find themselves and each other and make something wonderful from a chance encounter. |
| 2012-04-19 17:30:15 |
3 Evil Sister- Part 8 |
I've enjoyed the way that you've continued the series - the characters are, for the most part, constant and you've moved the plot along. I look forward to the next installment - keep up the good work. |
| 2012-04-19 17:28:03 |
Ranchland - Chapter 10 |
I have read everything you've posted, and like this series the best. Romance and character development, along with a good plot, are the most important things in any story. I look forward to the next installment in this series. |
| 2012-04-19 17:25:18 |
My Best Studies Ever - finale |
I wrote the previous comment and finally created my own account, so I wanted to claim what I've already posted. I love this series - I could have seen it continuing or ending differently, but I like the way you write and always enjoy a happy ending where two people find each other. |
| 2012-04-19 17:20:06 |
First Kiss |
I loved this story. I've saved a copy and tried showing it to my wife - if she read it, she hasn't given me any input (she doesn't read for pleasure anyway, only for research). I really wish that you could do another story similar to this - at least as far as the character development and romance go. I'll keep checking back for future posts. Thank you for sharing. |
| 2012-04-19 16:59:33 |
Tales of a Secret Sex Writer, Chapter 9 |
After writing the last multi-part comment (the one with all the "continued" statements), I felt the need to actually (finally) create my own account. Most of my writing is business and technical, so I don't have any stories to share - but I do enjoy good writing and character development. |