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| 2013-04-01 01:21:23 |
Oral pleassure with master |
great story very well crafted keep it up :)
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| 2013-02-17 05:53:48 |
The Beginning |
dam that was hot great writing every little detail was up to par it was amazing 10/10. i came so hard |
| 2013-02-09 02:36:26 |
abby my slave |
in case any of you are wondering what our condition is i haven't spoken to her in about 6 months which sucks but oh well life goes on |
| 2013-02-01 00:46:56 |
Used by my neighbor |
dam just dam thats hot
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| 2013-01-17 06:58:20 |
A ROOM FOR RENT |
not bad im not that deep into hanging stoackades and such some light bondage and a collor but not a bad story ill give it an 8 |
| 2013-01-10 05:23:32 |
Sex With Slenderman |
this is a rip off he didn't write this i saw this same story by a different writer a few months ago word for word
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| 2013-01-05 04:57:05 |
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this was horrid i just wanted to comment that the chick sucking and fucking sure but bi guys ni a threesome? honestley wtf is wrong with you queer? -_- |
| 2013-01-03 00:15:03 |
forced fuck fun at home with babysitter |
alright i understand your points thank you for being in depth with your suggestions i will make sure to add in more background to my stories trust me my newer stuff will be better just be patient and as for staying hard after cumming im not sure what the technical term for it is but yeah i gotta come like three times before i quit being hard |
| 2013-01-02 00:31:31 |
The Dark Side Of Jeff |
not bad except the dog that was just sick |
| 2012-12-30 04:12:28 |
update |
i didnt see any point in cotninuing that one since it got so many negative comments so i am going to focus more on my other stories |
| 2012-12-27 04:48:07 |
Wendy and Miss West |
not bad i liked that i'll give it a 9.5 |
| 2012-12-25 02:47:14 |
My unknown submissive side (cont) |
not bad is the woman his slave too or a fuck buddy??? i must know!! lol good story keep it up i certainly will be ;) |
| 2012-12-25 02:41:13 |
My unknown submissive side |
dam good please keep writing |
| 2012-12-21 01:18:16 |
Wild Sisters I |
booo that story sucked |
| 2012-12-19 01:18:55 |
Becoming submissive |
i agree or she could be a body builder chick and still ew muscly chicks are gross too |
| 2012-12-18 02:50:37 |
Fantasy becomes reality |
dam good story but thinking of the title as i read the first line about the dom/sub site i was like "oh that's why"
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| 2012-12-18 00:31:51 |
The Trip |
so turns out this "stranger" is her bf or something? kinda lame ending but the rest was good |
| 2012-12-12 03:19:50 |
Sorry, thought this room was empty |
dam that was hot i have always wanted to fuck two chicks like that and if you want stories about 10 year olds you are sick |
| 2012-12-08 02:51:28 |
Dominating and Owning a Punk Ep.2 Natalie Dominates Sam |
i agree make it all you too many chefs spoil the gumbo as they say if you cant even keep natalie in line how do you expect to keep your bros in line for a gang bang? XD |
| 2012-12-07 02:36:20 |
Yes Sir, I'll do whatever you want |
wasnt bad would hav liked to see some bondage but none the less great story |
| 2012-12-06 02:45:51 |
Dominating and Owning a Punk Ep.1 Breaking Samantha |
dam dude that was hot A++ |
| 2012-12-06 02:44:57 |
Dominating and Owning a Punk Ep.1 Breaking Samantha |
dam dude that was hot A++ |
| 2012-12-05 03:12:04 |
My story |
dam thats awesome wish i had friends like that any girls wanna come over and play strip call of duty? ;) |
| 2012-12-05 03:02:10 |
Fantasies Come Alive |
oh god that was hot may be the best master slave story i've read so far and as for all tehse other comments about chicks wanting slaves names rob i'm 16 5'9 150 pounds average build with short brown hair and blue green eyes if any of you wanna be my pet email me just sayin ;) btw frenchi your master is a seriosuly lucky guy having a gamer slave girl |
| 2012-12-05 01:16:28 |
The Chronicles of Jesse Adler- Truck Load |
not bad thats pretty hot sucks im only 16 or id totally give you what that trucker gave you ;) |
| 2012-12-05 00:55:50 |
World of Warcraft- Mage and Death Knight |
this was so so not good but not bad either |
| 2012-12-04 01:01:13 |
Succubus genie part 1 - Paradise bequeathed |
good story wish a sex genie was real lol
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| 2012-12-03 04:38:40 |
Damians Harem part 2 |
dude thats hot i mean not the fact that he fucked his cosuin and aunt but yeah harems are hot i so want one of at least 4 one day ;) |
| 2012-11-29 13:53:04 |
Raping Silk |
i find it interesting that a woman who used to go by the screen name mystress carlie would have submissive fantasies like this |
| 2012-11-29 02:38:38 |
Adaptation |
lol naomi nice wordplay |
| 2012-11-29 02:27:56 |
traci"s story |
the master is sadistic yet not cruel exactly my kinda mindset i love slaves teasing themselves too and the fact you want to please him and serve him so hot |
| 2012-11-19 05:14:02 |
Hard "role" fucking in the van |
you ever think that chick likes brutal fucking?
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| 2012-11-17 01:41:04 |
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dam dude that's hot wish i had friends like that :( |
| 2012-11-16 03:03:07 |
I Teach My Wife: Part 1 |
dude that was hot if you dont like it then go somewhere else btw she willingly climbed into bed when she came back in from the balcony so she submitted to him |
| 2012-11-14 02:57:21 |
cum slut |
daddy guy thats creepy go die in a ditch you freak as for the story love it dominating chicks i love that shit especially forcing them not to cum |
| 2012-11-11 11:05:30 |
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he is asking cause at the end she was sucking his dick great and as fro the sister leave her out of this this may be a great series just incest a bit wrong |
| 2012-11-10 00:23:23 |
Knock knock |
loved it was epic beging is one of my fav things to hear ;) |
| 2012-11-09 23:35:42 |
Detective Olivia Benson enslaved by the Stabler Ch.1 |
fuck you you bastard how dare you even relate these great detectives to this degrading shit i skipped the entire story just to tell you off you freak stabler would never!!!!!! |
| 2012-11-06 07:51:45 |
My new girlfriend wants me to get her a slave 2 |
it was great although when i read this series i imagine him as 18 not 35 |
| 2012-11-05 06:48:40 |
The Life and The Dream |
not bad not good but not bad |
| 2012-11-03 04:35:50 |
My new girlfriend wants me to get her a slave 1 |
loved it and as for the guy that says this is sick and twisted wtf did you expect from a story containing Anal, Bondage and restriction, Cum Swallowing, Domination/submission, and slavery? -_- |
| 2012-11-02 08:37:06 |
Forced... |
well crafted and somewhat hot keep it up |
| 2012-11-02 08:33:59 |
My rape fantasy |
loved it cant wait to read more |
| 2012-11-02 06:41:12 |
My Beautiful Dark Twisted Fantasy - Chapter 1 (Fixed!) |
love it that was amazing i came so hard to that it was insane i love the whole torture them with pleasure thing mental bitch slap lol great job |
| 2012-10-30 05:31:45 |
master of the house |
love it love everything about it wish i had two subs like that |
| 2012-10-29 04:20:39 |
Trixie, Chapter One: Waiting |
must say well crafted although i agree only tag what actually happens the thought of a sexy naked bitch chained to the wall gagged ready to please kinda good except torture i only see as punishment
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| 2012-10-29 04:13:41 |
DOMINATE ME |
decent poem although certain parts were a bit hard to read along cause the tempo of the words changed a bit from how short some lines were |
| 2012-10-29 01:51:17 |
forced fuck fun at home with babysitter |
lol the point to this is fear so makes sense to be scared |
| 2012-10-28 05:21:03 |
My brothers teammates |
i call total bullshit i got to black ops and MW3 panties then that was it you are a liar gamer girls dont wear that -_- |
| 2012-10-28 05:01:05 |
First Fuck |
dude that was a cool story i really liked it til you ended it with her death |
| 2012-10-24 07:22:34 |
Adventures with Powers |
it was so so not good not bad i think he should make emma his slave more just cause shed hate it
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| 2012-10-24 01:59:12 |
Forbidden love |
are you are you getting blown while righting this? cause you stutter too stutter too much fuck head -_- |
| 2012-10-22 02:31:27 |
Silence in the Library |
pretty good although i did replace the librarian david with a girl lol than again i am straight |
| 2012-10-22 02:13:51 |
"You said you wouldn't do that if I did what you said." |
that was dam good he used her like a bitch love it |
| 2012-10-21 06:33:52 |
The Runner |
helll yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2012-10-20 05:37:55 |
Amber's Revenge |
dude that was EP to the IC loved every second a bit too long though |
| 2012-10-10 04:25:59 |
Sex with Sister-in-law |
lmao that was good
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| 2012-10-10 04:14:39 |
Fucking my Step Sister |
im so sad everyone here has a step sis but me im a horny little 16 year old and i have no step sis to try stuff with :( FML |
| 2012-10-10 04:09:25 |
Step Sister |
dude wish i had a step sis like that just dam and leave the guy alone he says 8 inches so what maybe he is maybe he isnt what does it matter if what detail is fudged a bit |
| 2012-10-09 04:36:37 |
Peeking at Stepsister |
dude good story ive had lots of fantasies of fucking a step sister although i dont have one :( lol good sotry but if its true then just dam dude |
| 2012-10-05 04:26:32 |
Slave to a man part 1 |
dude when are we gonna see part two im getting bored
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| 2012-10-03 03:53:38 |
The Sexy Stranger |
if its a build up to part two i love it ;) |
| 2012-10-02 05:50:03 |
Do You Want To Fuck My Soul |
this sounds like a rip off of what happened to that guy on torchwood |
| 2012-09-27 01:27:17 |
abby my slave |
glad you enjoyed it and ive been to chat ave i must agree they do usually have lots of slaves there but its been down recently so i have to stick with 321teenchat.com and hope something comes along :P |
| 2012-09-17 02:15:38 |
abby my slave |
i found mine in a chat room try putting an ad out online or go to chat-avenue.com sometimes theres lots of subs there |
| 2012-09-15 02:24:28 |
abby my slave |
she was naked all the way in the r p |
| 2012-09-15 00:24:54 |
abby my slave |
glad you enjoyed it and as for breaking her id rather have her be obedient right from the get go less work for me lol |
| 2012-09-14 02:09:38 |
my slave Boy -01 |
im not gay but i enjyoed this i got off on the submission im a dom and i liked the twist of the guy paying to be used instead of using when i read i figured this guy out i was like wtf then i was like oh ok thats what he meant make more please you are good |
| 2012-09-14 01:42:53 |
Slave to a man part 1 |
good start im not gay but got me hard and i have to know why is billy there and as an idea for part 2 what if the main character becomes second in command ya know slave to tom but master to billy like he always wanted that would be awesome |
| 2012-08-25 07:29:30 |
My sister and I |
good story and where the hell have you been chick ive been jacking it since i was ten but whatever good story and the virgin chick wanna meet up maybe im 16 btw ;) |
| 2012-08-19 03:19:58 |
The Girl Across The Street |
omg another good story from you and i like that youll be writing everyday not many people can write like you do good job and i enjoy the vote thing how about slavery that started as a date? i think that would be awesome keep writing cant wait :) |
| 2012-08-19 03:12:31 |
Raped By The Boy Of Her Dream |
hey hey hey enough with that talk just cause shes a stranger on the internet doesnt mean you should be mean and just to let you know ill be a returning fan of yours vamp :) |
| 2012-08-17 02:51:52 |
Raped By The Boy Of Her Dream |
hey good story welcome to this site ive been on here for a few months and gotta say its fun writing and so what if she hasn't had sex yet means she aint found the right guy maybe that's me ;) lol jk but id love you as a writing buddy maybe we could collaborate a story sometime? :) btw im 16 ik too young but don't judge lol |
| 2012-08-15 05:48:04 |
Claiming Lucy |
wtf was that it was good dont get me wrong but next time leave out the ye olde language dude it was hard to read if you didnt know medieval sentences but yeah good story |
| 2012-08-10 02:03:25 |
Ga Tec |
hey sheldon guy big bang theory rules XD |
| 2012-08-09 05:29:03 |
Babysitting the Twins Again - Part 3 - Jenny's Halloween Sleepover |
ok i like the idea of photos of jenny and someone finding them but lets not do the whole perverted dad thing that's just uber creepy dude maybe instead one of jenny's friends finds them blackmails jenny into letting her fuck the twins but its more than she bargained for? |
| 2012-08-06 07:55:32 |
Phoenix acadamey amber part one (revised) |
BWAHAHAHAHA LMFAO XD your upset that i couldn't spell khaki? you knew what i meant dam son you are an up tight fuck for negatively commenting about one word wow XD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA |
| 2012-08-06 02:17:36 |
Phoenix acadamey amber |
sorry about the spacing issues i have revised this so check it out ;) |
| 2012-08-05 02:39:45 |
My girlfriend's friends: Amy |
hey good story if its fake good if its real not so good force is fun to a point and did you guys ever consider this is true and its true because they role played this? and if you dont like it maybe you shouldnt have clicked on a porn story that was tagged RAPE morons |
| 2012-08-04 06:34:51 |
USED AND ABUSED [PART1] |
i saw the intro and it sickened me you bastard why right this you sick freak!?!?!? |
| 2012-08-02 06:39:00 |
The Teacher Fuck |
i picked this cause it seemed appealing but dont spam this site with that crap you want some good rape stories look up barbarian dogwoglle he is good
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| 2012-08-02 06:34:09 |
Jessica's Scarf and the Old School Copier |
good story man and can i ask you could you try making one about a preppy cheerleader bitch who gets whats coming to her? id search something like that but i know youd do it better :)
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| 2012-08-02 06:19:56 |
Jessica's Scarf and the Old School Copier |
holy fuck yet again you don't cease to amaze me man that was great im glad i decided to read that it was incredible but the whole thing about her fucking her dad leave that shit out incest aint cool but over all well done still waiting for the twins part 4 so make that shit and this school thing would be a good series too thumbs up |
| 2012-07-31 03:27:59 |
Caught By My Sister's Friends |
wish that would happen to me but i dont have a sister but wouldnt it be something for some neighbor chicks to catch me jacking off come in through my window and finish me off man that would be great but dreams are dreams |
| 2012-07-24 02:48:41 |
The Group |
very nice man id love to fuck a bitch like that |
| 2012-07-23 06:23:02 |
candy's Club Pt 1 |
nice ;) enough said great story dude |
| 2012-07-23 01:08:23 |
The End Of A Long Day By: Tomb |
dude tat was great id love to fuck a bitch like that man looking forward to reading more of your stuff |
| 2012-07-23 01:07:00 |
The End Of A Long Day By: Tomb |
dude tat was great id love to fuck a bitch like that man looking forward to reading more of your stuff |
| 2012-07-17 02:12:40 |
forced fuck fun at home with babysitter |
i guess youll have to wait for part two any suggests? |
| 2012-07-09 01:13:27 |
Babysitting the Twins Again - Part 3 - Jenny's Halloween Sleepover |
also again ill be waiting as a fan of your work for part 4 and i vote for a,d, and e i think those would be great maybe alice gets the boys to get revenge for her on a bitchy techer or something who knows but if you make it itll be good |
| 2012-07-09 01:11:18 |
Babysitting the Twins Again - Part 3 - Jenny's Halloween Sleepover |
well i understand you want stand alone storys and experiences but your first and second parts were chicks getting raped then loving to get fucked by the twins so it doesnt make much sense for them to not be in control im just sayin if your making a railroad across a field its easier to lay straight and not make curves get it? just my opinion |
| 2012-07-03 01:24:57 |
Babysitting the Twins Again - Part 3 - Jenny's Halloween Sleepover |
that was just as good as the others good job except the part when the girls tie the twins up id leave that out for part 4 cant wait |
| 2012-06-20 02:34:23 |
Secret desire part 1 |
great story now is it really your desire to get used like that? |
| 2012-06-10 01:49:28 |
Attic |
wow dude couldnt get past the first paragraph you sound like swiskgar on that show metalocalypse hahaha no offense |
| 2012-06-09 05:59:55 |
Gas Station Rape 1: Perveted Discoveries |
i skipped down the whole page just to tell you pedos ares sick and if you even right a fake story about pedophilia you should be raped with a 3 foot dildo and hung bastard |
| 2012-05-22 00:35:17 |
Babysitting the Twins Again - Part 2 - Sweet Sixteen |
dude gotta say again great story where the hell is part 3 im so excited about it so make it and btw im a 15 year old dude and id like a jenny of my own so hit me up ;) BDorobiala2@aol.com |
| 2012-05-04 06:29:13 |
My Best Friend's Brother |
dude if you guys like this one and babysitter fucking you should check out barbarian dogwoggle he writes some good shit |
| 2012-05-02 06:07:58 |
Babysitting the Twins Again - Part 2 - Sweet Sixteen |
ok ive read all the comments they are all positive so make part 3 oh my god hell yes cant wait for part three just wish i was bobby omg |
| 2012-05-01 04:53:14 |
Babysitting the Twins Again |
dude hell yeah if u guys like this ull love part 2 i really want part 3 but he has yet to write it ugh D: oh well guess ill just wait and damn this storys so hot im a 15 year old dude and wish i had a chick to fuck like that just damn great story |
| 2012-04-30 04:21:45 |
my first jack off |
ok its not homeschool like my mom teaches me im schooled online and ill write how i right now if its something serious that requires good writing then yes i will write better and make sure it looks good but not this its just a story and if you have a problem reading this then thats ur own problem |
| 2012-04-30 03:21:45 |
my first jack off |
oh yeah if my writing is so bad then why do i have a few comments telling me that they cant wait till the next story and i know its one really long run on sentence i just dont care read it or not thats ur choice and i dont care if you read or people respect my writing its just a story on a porn site i dont need the respect of a bunch of people who sit in front of a monitor jerking there cocks or fingering there pussys i just dont care so ima keep writing but im not writing to please u so piss off |
| 2012-04-30 01:19:07 |
my first jack off |
first off you dont need to be an ass second im homeschooled and im doing fine in english and third if i write bad dont tell me just dont read what i write dickhead |
| 2012-04-29 20:41:29 |
forced fuck fun at home with babysitter |
thanks guys :) no spoilers but if you like camp fucking youll like the next one |
| 2012-04-29 12:53:34 |
forced fuck fun at home with babysitter |
look that comment below is for the guy under you and btw the stupid computer fucked up and deleted my whole story and i had to rewrite i guess i forogt to put back in the part where i untie her but yeah ur right ill make sure to proof read carefully |
| 2012-04-29 12:51:40 |
forced fuck fun at home with babysitter |
fuck you nobodys making u read it and who made you sir lord critic of porn storys its not supposed to be a compeling epic its just a story so accept it or piss off you stupid prick |
| 2012-04-29 12:15:10 |
forced fuck fun at home with babysitter |
well thats ur opinion i dont know how you kept getting lost it was simple i raped my babysitter whats there to understand its just a story do you know how to read dummy first you read some words then you read some more then you get to the end ok |
| 2012-04-29 11:17:50 |
my first jack off |
no i said i wasnt going to allow comments anymore but i realized i dont care what people say think or fell about my writing |
| 2012-04-29 06:55:19 |
Tight Ass High School Fuck Boy, Part 1 |
very good best rape story ive seen wish i could write this good but i useley get writers block but yeah good and im a 15 year old dude and omg i wish i knew some 15 year old chicks on here so i could ahve some fun with them off topic but yeah great story really want part 2 next time make him suck ur shot and cum covered cock |
| 2012-04-28 17:32:18 |
forced fuck fun at sleep over with jimmy and john |
look you prick first off i wasnt 15 i am 15 second fuck you you decided to read this story and third im no homo this is just a story i thought people might like ok so piss off |
| 2012-04-27 06:55:06 |
forced fuck fun at sleep over with jimmy and john |
i know just read my next one about my friends sister its actually the first story i made so long it went at least 150 characters past the 5000 mark so yeah its longer but most of my storys i dont make long cuz i like to right them at like 3 am so i just do it then i make the next one better :) |
| 2012-04-27 06:52:06 |
FAMILY GUY |
good but would have been better if chris actually raped her with that thing but thats just me i like rape storys but not actual rape anyway i give it 4 out of 5 and just let me say you really need to title your stories better cuz i had to find this one under your stories by finding the only family guy you actually labelled right but yeah great story also read the cartman thing pretty good |
| 2012-04-27 02:28:19 |
Bobby Gets Raped |
good but at least make bobby 15 or something cuz age difference matters especially when dealing with stories like this
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| 2012-04-26 01:52:03 |
With my brother |
good story and about the thing at the end i agree ive wanted my girl cousin for years but i dont think i should cuz she might freak out if i tried something and then id be in deep shit |
| 2012-04-25 02:53:24 |
my camp bitch and he liked it part 1 |
ok people knock it off if you dont like my writing dont read it and i know i forget to be descriptive |
| 2012-04-25 02:53:06 |
my camp bitch and he liked it part 1 |
ok people knock it off if you dont like my writing dont read it and i know i forget to be descriptive |
| 2012-04-25 02:05:25 |
my camp bitch and he liked it part 1 |
sorry im not great at punctuation but what do u want this was written when i was up 22 hours straight |
| 2012-04-23 09:34:57 |
Mother May I (Part I) |
seriously i agree part two would be awesome if this guys so open with his bros and into force i wanna know what hed be like raping his mom |
| 2012-04-16 03:13:59 |
Avatar: Katara's Secret |
i thought it was good but i agree the details almost perfect just need to be more descriptive and i love how katara started it off then it got flipped and she didnt want to get fucked btw maybe the sequel u could use his bending powers like he earth bended her hands to the ground or somethin but then again thats me i love bondage stories :)
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| 2012-04-16 02:40:15 |
fun with the baby sitter 2 part 1 |
howd u get a headache and how am i wasting my education |
| 2012-04-15 17:06:39 |
fun with the babysitter |
ur right i do need to space more |
| 2012-04-15 03:08:48 |
fun with the baby sitter 2 part 1 |
scott if ur reading this i did the master thing thanx it really makes it sound better and hope u like the threesome thing btw one of my moms bdsm friends likes magic the gathering too |
| 2012-04-15 03:06:18 |
fun with the babysitter |
jsut wanna say didnt think my story would get so many views 3000 and counting keep on reading and ill keep writing thanks |
| 2012-04-15 02:23:58 |
Superman gets some |
ive heard this one before but its still funny |
| 2012-04-15 02:22:51 |
Blueberry Hill |
funny but i kinda already knew where that was headed |
| 2012-04-15 02:18:27 |
fun with the babysitter part 2 |
i know it seems more like a narrative because its leading up to the next babysitter story that i jsut posted |
| 2012-04-14 21:59:35 |
fun with the babysitter |
thanx for the advice i will make sure to be more descriptive and i here you man but i only kinda like bdsm i like the bondage the whole master slave thing and ball gags but whips cat of nine tails and the other pain related stuff not so much :/ |
| 2012-04-14 21:57:02 |
fun with the babysitter part 2 |
thanx for the advice i will |
| 2012-04-14 19:22:23 |
fun with the babysitter |
thanx for the advice angel and anonymous guy shut up with the stupid prostitute comment ok and the other comment what do u want it was my first story and i wrote it at 3 am
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| 2012-04-14 15:58:39 |
Sex With My Babysitter |
good story baby sitter pantasys rock
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