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| 2013-04-14 15:31:11 |
Fire Class Going To School |
A different twist compare to JWDD original. I'm not going to compare which is better. But there were many spellings, grammar and word usage errors. Don't worry, I'm not trying to put you down or debase you. But constructive comments hopefully can help you improved. For eg 'Precocious', that's description were mainly used to describe badly behaved children. Cautious would be the correct words. Try used shorter and simpler sentences. There were many times I have to read and re read juz to grasp the true meaning.
Nevertheless I still enjoy reading your story. So it's +ve vote for me. |
| 2013-03-28 17:13:17 |
FIre Class: Falling in Love |
Oooooh nice plot! Great story! But your spelling and grammar, plz IMPROVED or you'll bring the story down! I suggest spellcheck and proofread. Its good you decided to diverge the story to your own idea. But the biggest problem I dare say is, what if JWDD does not approve of you using or tinkering with it. Thats the Mickey!
You should at least try to get JWDD acknowledgement or approval first. I really hate to see this story go into limbo. But if it does, I suggest you create your own story using your current plotline.
Other than that I got no objection on what you do. I really like where you're going with this story and hope JWDD has no objection. |
| 2013-03-17 12:17:15 |
Eternal Destiny: Chapter Two |
All I can say is WOW!!!!! Considering what Mishi is going through, WOW!!!! And Captius its not easy for you to be the supporting pillar either!!!! All in all, I juz can't wait for the nx chapter.
Magic 101?????? Really?
Hmmmm.......
The last I check, there's no tag of Witchcraft and Wizadry. But anyway thanks Captius for explaining....... or was it Mishi....... LOL! Anyway who cares! Heck you don't have to be a walking encyclopedia to post here.
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| 2013-02-21 06:34:41 |
Bait and Switch Retype - Ch 17-18 (Really) |
When DB posted it first time, I love the story. I still love it now even though you posted it again. The best part, you let us knew from the beginning why you're doing it. I applaud your decision and action. I sincerely hope you continue.
Ignore those defractors and just continue. Perhaps DB wanted to continue with a new chapter after the story concluded. Perhaps not, who knew. DB has already pass on. |
| 2013-01-19 06:05:01 |
Modern Mage Chapter 18 |
Now you got a hunter as ally. Damn who is that nephandi????? Well another great story Wolf Knight.
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| 2012-11-12 05:18:08 |
My Rape! |
No matter what cicumstances led to your rape, it was still rape! Am I heartless to say you deserve it? Some will say yes and some will say no. Thus I will reserve that judgement to myself. I hope you continue. Only pls check your spelling and grammar. Plus check your tagging. Don't be discourage by negativity. Its not easy to write a true rape story. True or not just keep writing. That is all and take care. |
| 2012-11-12 04:53:58 |
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Your life has almost come full cicle. Now I really knew why you were piss when some commenters were too critical of Ashley. A good way to end the story if you wish to but since you decide to continue, by all means proceed. I'll be waiting patiently and when you're finish, continue writing other stories PLEASE for you're a good story teller. Peace and be happy man. |
| 2012-11-11 17:10:12 |
Driven Lust X |
I've read this story from the begining and luv it all. Its great to see that although James could have all or any of the pussies plus witnessing many kinky act and can do so if he wanted too but he did'nt. It goes to show he have some dignity in him.
I am personally happy to see that you Gentelman decided to remain here and not succumb to malicious commenters. I'll be waiting for your next chapter with ferver for you never seems to run out of great ideas.
Wish I could have a job like James!LOL!!! |
| 2012-11-02 08:09:22 |
Sweet Smell of Lust |
This was a great story. I love it eventhough you did not write it. Only you should have put the original author's name at the start. Pls post other chapters if you have them. Don't forget to give credit to the authors at the start. |