||A SOPHISTOCATED AND VERSATILE LADY
||A message to the person - "hispanic". There is a personals section in the forums - so put your requests there and use some common fucking sense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
||ON ROYAL PALM ESATE Part One: Happenings between a man and a woman
||That last one was me. Bloody system logged me out.
||THE LUCKY BABYSITTER: Part 4: Fun and a Surprise
||To whoever the last person was - people have different sized penises. You must be the kind of person who wants to read stories where the characters are all 8 inches, which in reality is not the case. And of course it's relatively far fetched! It's a bloody fictitious sex story for heaven's sake! Maybe you should pick up a dictionary and read the definition of a few words. Just a polite suggestion.
||Most of us have had drunken fucks, and you've told it well.
||THE FIRST TIME COUPLE: Part 1
||to the previous reader: In England, college follows school. We have different terms for things. Secondary school (age 11-15) is sometimes referred to as high school.
||A Friends Curiosity
||Excitement all the way, but it needs to be longer. Good, though.
||Sleepover fun part 1
||Hi, it was good. More detail and making it a little longer would improve it greatly, but that isn't a negative criticism.
||SEX AND TRAGEDY: My Story: Part 1
||usc912etc......you continually spam the comments section of these stories - you are pathetic! As for knowing where I live, I was not born yesterday, although in all probablility, you were. Leave adult sites alone and buy a Marvel comic instead! You impress nobody!
||SEX AND TRAGEDY: My Story: Part 1
||This is a message to the charming person/people (probably one person) who left me those messages: Leave a reason for your comments and I may take you seriously.
||Siblings With Privileges (re written)
||Erotic and hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
||I'll be looking out for part 2, that's for sure.
||Stories come true
||Original, entertaining, intriguing, dark, erotic and well written. Basically - excellent.
||Cousins Cumming Part 1
||Keep going, but make the next one longer and with more detail.
||When I Was A Young Boy - PART 3!
||Another good installment. I'm looking forward to the next.
||When I Was A Young Boy - PART 2!
||Once again, it's very erotic. Keep going.
||When I Was A Young Boy
||Great stuff. I'll be checking more of your stories out.
||THE LUCKY BABYSITTER: Part 3 Losing the Cherry
||In my intro, I dedicated this story to Kinkybitch, rather than Kinkybitch1. My apologies to both ladies. Once again, this story is dedicated to Kinkybitch ONE
Sorry for any confusion caused, if there was any at all. Douggie. xx
||Short Term Relationship.
||Great stuff. I'll be looking at more of your stories.
||Well written and really horny. I hope there's more to come.
||Two Cute Boys
||A positive rating is the only option. Excellent stuff. Feel free to email me on: email@example.com All the best.
||I wanted her... She wanted me...
||More detail on the characters and their bodies would help a lot. Also, break the paragraphs up a bit. That will make it easier to read. Sexy, though. All the best.
||My daddy's little slut
||Hi, I think it was ok, but could have done with more detail, and would have been better if longer. I gave you a positive rating, nonetheless
||That last comment was me. Damned thing logged out
||An excellent tale of young lads discovering what their penises can do. Realistic, with good writing and excellent descriptions.
||THE LUCKY BABYSITTER: Part 3 Losing the Cherry
||Hi. Thanks for pointing that out. I'd received a message about My early years part one: Mary's Story, while I was writing this one. It must have been a subconcsious slip. Sorry for that. It won't happen again, I promise.
||My First Cock Sucking
||Forget about the idiots saying faggots and freaks of nature. There'a something wrong with them. You advertised it as gay - so they needn't have read it. On another note, make the paragraphs shorter and give a bit more detail. All the best.
||Absolutely brilliant!!!!!! Good writing, good srory, good characters, good situations . . . I could go on! I couldn't believe the 85% rating, but that WILL go up. A positive rating is the ONLY rating one that I can give! Anyone doing otherwise cannot appreciate the craft in the wordsmith. Keep going!
||A good story let down by the spelling and grammar. Have a read of some of mine and take note of the use of capital letters and full stops etc. Please feel free to message me if you want advice. Don't feel bad by the comments left by those before me. Writing takes practise, that's all. All the best to you.
||Shelly's Secret Chapter 1
||Well written, sexy, intriguing, naughty and nice. I'd like to read more. Great stuff!
||Naughty School Girl
||A good start. Well writen and leaving the reader wishing for more, which I hope you will give. I've given you a positive rating - what else could I give? Good stuff and all the best to you.
||Camping with my daughter Katrina Day-1
||To the ill informed person who asked where her hymen was - she was fifteen, and had probably been using tampons. Also, if she masturbated, that too would stretch it. You obviously don't know much about girls!
||THE LUCKY BABYSITTER
||Please accept my apologies for the errors. I will admit that I did not proof read this, which is an all time first. As for a Part 2 - I never heard of anything else happening, but since it was probably not true anyway, I suppose a purely fictional sequel cannot be ruled out. I will have a think. Thanks for your comments; they are much appreciated.
||Boy+Boy = Ass+Mouth
||My early years: Part one: Mary's lesson
||To the person who wrote the last comment, or anyone else. I do not recollect erections before that day, with the exception of the occasion I mentioned. I may well have recalled something at the time, but it was quite a while ago that this happened. The erection in the story was my first memorable one, for obvious reasons. Maybe I did wake up with them, but I do not recall.
||The Brothers Return
||I like your style. Very sexy and well written. If you wanna chat, email me on firstname.lastname@example.org
||Curious little sister
||That was good. Well told and fun. Erotic as well. I wish I'd had a sister like that.
||Twins n best buds
||If I'd had a brother I'd have done the same. As it was, I had a want/fuck buddy, but a cock identical to my own would have been awesome. That was good. I hope you write more. If you have any questions, please feel free to message me.
||School trip with the luscious Mrs. Craig
||It was me who praised your grammar, etc. Bloody system logged me out as I wrote it. Anyway, I'll be reading more from you, I hope.
||I agree with one of the comments above. There were no 8" cocks; therefore it was very realistic. It, like some of your other stories, reminded me of something that happened to me. Keep going.
||Giving It To Gary
||That was fucking great!
||the nudists of new york part 2
||Hi, I liked it, but it needs breaks in the paragraphs to make reading it easier. My first story was like that, so I went back and broke it up. Please take a look at the difference between the PART 1 that I resubmitted. Also, give us some more detail, especially with the cocks and bodies of the characters. I like the idea of different aged guys; I did something similar years ago. If you have any questions, please drop me a line. All the best.
||Camping With Mom - Part 3
||Hi, I like what you've done. I've never been involved in incest, myself, but you've done a good job with someone else's story. All the best.
||Road trip with first gay encounter
||Yes, more detail would be good; nevertheless, it was good. I think I'd like to go there myself. All the best.
||Long hot summer Part 1 (Repost)
||Very good. I'll look forward to the next installment.
||First Time pt 1
||Good stuff. I remember being that age and being turned on by older guys, often in the toilets. I never wore ladies' undies, though. Keep it up.
||Making Sis Feel Better
||A brilliant start. Very erotic. I agree with some of the others; don't get the elder brother involved. Keep going.
||Wow. That was good. I don't often read gir/girl stories, but after reading this, I will. You made it very sexy and arousing. Write some more. All the best. Unlike the other person who read it and didn't rate it, I did, and it was positive. Next time, though, put it in fiction or true story, and add more subjects. You'll have a much larger audience, which you deserve. Maybe repost it. That's what I did with my first one. All the best.
||The Overlooked Girl
||Excellent, erotic and reminded me of a girl I once knew. I hope you do more stories. Good stuff.
||Hi. Your writing is technically excellent, and the story intriguing. Maybe the reason people haven't rated it is because there's no sex. I've given you a positive rating because it's refreshing to read something that has good grammar. I'd love to read more. I hope you write more. All the best.
||After school drama party!
||Sorry, I meant a "good" start.
||After school drama party!
||A goos start. Keep going.
||Billys Mum teaches Sex Ed 2
||Excellent again. It puts me in mind of a tale I heard when I was at school. All the best.
||Billy's Mum teaches Sex Ed
||I love the detail of the anatomy of the penis. So many on here write about a cock, but give nothing for the mind to feed on. You do it well. I like to put such detail into my accounts as well. It seems rather pointless in not doing so. If you wish to discuss this, you can contact me on: email@example.com All the best and keep on writing.
||Christmas in July Part 2
||A very teasing chapter. I shall read on.
||Christmas in July
||Another good tale, once again reminding me of my early years. Older teens with preteens does happen, as I well know. I love your honesty as regards your cock size. You're an average guy and proud to admit it, as am I. When I read a story proclaiming "my 8 inch", I flick to another. All praise to you, my friend.
||I can forgive the grammar and spelling. Your story reminded me of an experience when I was younger. Keep it up - the story writing, that is.
||First time experimenting with anothery - hand jobs and blow jobs at age 12...
||This is the second of your stories I've read. It was very erotic, but I was saddened to hear about the tragedy. My fuck buddy moved away, and that was bad enough. I admire your openness. All the best.
||TRUE STORY - Teenage actors check into a hotel room where they end up having a VERY sexy night!...
||I left you a comment but wasn't logged in. I finished with: Fair play to you. All the best, mate.
||A Little Girl and Her Best Time Brother
||Having experienced the desires of a young girl when I was a boy, I know that girls can be promiscuous, so this is believable. Very erotic.
||MY EARLY YEARS: Part 3: Gav Shows More Moves
||To the person who wrote "faggots butt pirates", I have a question. Why, if you are clearly so homophobic, did you read the account? I clearly stated at the beginning that if you do not like this kind of thing, go elsewhere, which makes me question both your intellect and sexuality.
||Teen Brothers Growing Up
||Very erotic and unlike many stories, believable. x
||My Younger Brother's Friend Part 2
||I like the admission of cumming quickly. So many people brag that they go on and on. Ten out of ten for your honesty. I think the lad was lucky - you as well.
||My Younger Brother's Friends Part 1
||Good stuff. I know where you're coming from. I'll read the rest, that's for sure. x
||Cute Little Colin (Part 2: Friday)
||Very erotic, although more detail would improve things. All in all, it was good. x
||I must say that fucking my mum never entered my thoughts. I still don't think that I would have because I was very active with kids my own age since I was ten, but I love the tale.
||The Babysitter: The baby takes care of the sitter (Part 3)
||If you ask me, Issy was lucky to have such a nice guy to teach her. Keep going, my friend.
||The Swiss Family Incest
||When I was eleven, we had a boy who was incredibly large, although nobody teased him. We all wanted one like it, but I can imagine that it can provoke animosity, which can lead to discomfort for such a lad.