Comments from pollyslot
|2012-02-13 15:37:52||Bait and Switch Ch. 10||she has much more integrity now. :)
That was me just now; I thought I was signed in.
|2012-02-13 16:00:48||Bait and Switch Ch. 11||Your description of Lela's appearance and Nick's whispered "Please forgive me" one he was back in his room SLAYED ME. I have this ache in my chest now.
And I HATE Nick's dad already. I feel so much anger towards him. You make a very realistic portayal of the functional-alcoholic and how he affects everyone.