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| 2012-04-23 19:20:25 |
Denny?s Breakfast Treat - 3 |
When some one like Anonymous at 2012-04-19 13:07:04 gives criticisms and examples I do listen. When someone just takes a pot shot I just take it with a grain of salt and move on. Constructive vs destructive, constructive takes the win.
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| 2012-03-31 14:33:27 |
The Girls Next Door 9 Spring Break Pt.1 |
Would someone enlighten me as to why all those brave souls that give negative ratings cant give constructive critisism? Is it possible they are just poor, lost, jealous souls that want everyone brought down to their level? |
| 2012-03-14 00:45:32 |
The Girls Next Door ? 7 CJ?s Birthday Surprise |
Amanda and her mom will make their feelings known soon. CJ's sisters are only going to play a very minor role in a future chapter to cement the family. Thanks for your thoughts. |
| 2012-03-13 12:11:11 |
The Girls Next Door ? 7 CJ?s Birthday Surprise |
I'm well into #8-The after Party.. Everyone see's them at the same time. Please post contructive critisism here. Pathetic old perverts pretending to be young males or females need to look in the mirror and get a life |
| 2012-02-13 20:58:40 |
The Girls Next Door - 2 |
You must have read so fast you missed him going to the shower to beat off. It had paragraphs when I hit submit. I don't know what happened. I ran spell check and re-read several times, what did I miss so I can and it to my list for chapter three. |
| 2012-02-11 18:26:23 |
The Girls Next Door |
Thanks for the comments. i will try to make Chapter 2 much better. |