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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-04-19 20:35:59 |
I Was a Virgin Nymphomaniac |
I liked it, brought back a few memories of the nympho nextdoor when I was a teen. Thanks for sharing |
| 2013-02-26 11:15:17 |
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Awesome story, babygirl. Wish I had someone like you close by |
| 2013-01-27 10:16:18 |
Slipping |
Awesome story, jazzy |
| 2013-01-15 12:42:57 |
weekend with daddy (chpt 1-2) |
I thought you story was hot. Wish I had a babygirl like you at home with me |
| 2012-12-03 09:50:32 |
My Daughters Ass |
I liked your story, wished it was a little longer with more details but still very hot |
| 2012-11-30 10:40:06 |
Daddy's Recovery |
I thought it was very hot, would love to hear more. You have one lucky daddy |
| 2012-11-18 19:57:41 |
The beginnings of a new little slut |
Not bad for your first time. Looking towards reading more |
| 2012-11-03 18:44:41 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 1 |
Very hot story, nicely written too... Thank you |
| 2012-10-26 18:05:26 |
What This Woman Wants |
Now that was hot. I like your thoughts, the next lucky woman I'm with is going to live out your story :) |
| 2012-10-23 20:16:47 |
Subway Stories (part II) |
Awesome chapter, can't wait to read more |
| 2012-10-23 10:37:32 |
Picture Perfect |
You did an awesome job with this story, very hard to believe its your first one. I'm looking towards reading more from you |
| 2012-10-22 18:42:08 |
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Hell yes we want more. This is one of the hottest stories on here |
| 2012-10-22 18:14:19 |
Forever And Always |
Great job on your first story. Looking foward to reading more |
| 2012-10-10 11:27:23 |
Family Tragedy |
Loved your story, very hot and nicely written |
| 2012-10-09 16:25:23 |
Joined at the Hips |
I think your story was pretty hot. Would love to read more from you |
| 2012-10-02 13:45:13 |
Case Study 301: Holy Shit my daughter wants to fuck me |
This was the best chapter so far. You should make this into a movie |
| 2012-09-28 21:02:54 |
High school lust fuck |
I loved it. I love your naughty mind. Keep up the good writing |
| 2012-09-26 21:27:44 |
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A great story overall, can't wait to read more |
| 2012-09-08 18:19:54 |
A Game of Inches - Part Fifteen |
I think Ashley should move in with them and end the story with the three of them happy together |
| 2012-09-06 19:37:06 |
My sweet, sweet Daddy |
Omfg this is a very hot story, awesome for a beginner. I would love to hear how it all started |
| 2012-09-06 19:16:47 |
Our dirty little secret |
I think you did a very good job being your first story. I would love to hear more |
| 2012-09-06 18:40:24 |
Daddy Broke Me [Part 1] |
Hot story, babygirl. I think you should write more |
| 2012-09-02 19:50:43 |
Lending a helping hand |
I'll add an amen to that also. Very good writing, thanks for sharing |
| 2012-09-02 19:00:37 |
The Good Samaritan |
Now that was a very hot story. To this day the hottest sex I've ever had was with a younger black woman, she rode me like I was a ride at an amusement park |
| 2012-09-01 21:54:09 |
Independence Day by Zatharos |
I'm glad you posted it, very hot |
| 2012-08-22 20:29:43 |
Spying on Big Brother |
You are an amazing writer. Please don't let the idiots with the stupid comments keep you from writing and sharing more stories for those of us that appreciate what you do. Thank you |
| 2012-08-21 13:27:21 |
Two lovers |
I think you did an amazing job with your first story. I'm looking foward to reading more |
| 2012-08-17 09:45:40 |
The Perfect Date Gone Wrong |
Not bad at all. I think you have the potential to write some more great stories although if you lengthened them with a little more detail they'd be better |
| 2012-08-15 21:13:55 |
Blackmailing little sister |
Another awesome story. You can go in so many directions with this, maybe have the dad catch them in the act but instead of confronting them right away he just watches, then sneak into her room one night? That'd be a way to change the old man's grumpy attitude |
| 2012-08-15 21:07:40 |
Seducing Daddy |
That was a very hot, nicely written story. Wish I had a sexy young daughter sneak into my bed at night :) |
| 2012-08-11 19:02:14 |
Little Broken Toys |
That was a very hot story, very well written to. Thanks for sharing |
| 2012-08-07 21:35:57 |
I CAN'T RESIST MY NEIGHBOR-OR HER TEENAGE GIRLS-6 |
Once again, you've done an outstanding job writing this story. Although I hate to see it end, you ended it perfectly. Thank you for sharing this story with all of us |
| 2012-08-04 22:23:35 |
MY DAUGHTER IS A CUM DUMPSTER 2 |
Awesome story, can't wait to read more. Wish I had a daughter like that :) |
| 2012-08-01 18:33:45 |
Detention with Mr. Sullivan |
You did an amazing job with this story, very hot |
| 2012-07-19 12:34:23 |
Oh Daddy! My step father. |
I thought it was a pretty hot story. I'd love to chat with you, pm me if you'd like |
| 2012-07-08 08:34:35 |
Love Her Like a Daughter, Ch. 5 |
This is one of the best stories on this site. Very well written and very erotic. Thank you :) |
| 2012-06-25 20:34:10 |
Too Perfect to Pass Up [Chapter Three] |
You are an amazing writer. This so far is one of the hottest stories I've read. I can't wait to read more |
| 2012-06-23 14:40:37 |
Progenitor 1: The Beginning |
I think you did a very good job writing this, it was a very hot story. I'd love to hear more, the possibilities with this story is almost endless |
| 2012-06-22 19:08:33 |
Summer School for Sheila (Part 2) |
That was a very good story. I love that you added a romantic touch to it. I do hope you continue this |
| 2012-06-21 16:40:57 |
Daddy's Belonging |
I like it so far, hope you continue |
| 2012-06-19 22:10:57 |
Helping Her Stretch out |
That was a really hot story, would love to read more |
| 2012-06-19 21:48:29 |
Amanda's Fantasy |
That was a very hot story, great job. Can't wait to read more |
| 2012-06-16 16:15:42 |
Daddy's Little Girl |
I think for a first time writer, you did a very good job. It's a get hot story, would love to hear more. You could lengthen the story a bit, spread it out with a bit more detail but even if the rest is written in the same manner it will stiil be a good read. Don't let the negative comments stop you from doing your way, if they think they can do better let them try |
| 2012-06-16 11:50:05 |
A Game of Inches - Part Nine |
You are an amazing writer, every chapter I've read has just been amazing leaving me wanting more. |
| 2012-06-14 10:29:40 |
Loving my Pappa |
Your daddy is a very lucky man. Thanks for sharing your wonderful story. |
| 2012-06-09 17:29:04 |
my lifes experences and my loving dog |
I liked it, it was pretty hot. I'd love to find a woman like you |
| 2012-06-07 15:52:46 |
Daddy's secret girlfriend 1 (completed) |
OMG that was a hot story. Your Daddy is one lucky man, I wish I was him :) |
| 2012-06-07 15:26:26 |
I CAN'T RESIST MY NEIGHBOR-OR HER TEENAGE GIRLS!-3 |
Once again you've done an outstanding job with this story. I think since the two younger girls got robbed of their virginity already in such a horrible way, maybe cyn could talk tony in to showing them how real love is like? I'm sure whatever direction you decide to take with this, its still going to be just as good |
| 2012-05-31 14:44:41 |
My Fathers Boss |
Very hot story, very well written. Sorry about the loss of your friend |
| 2012-05-23 11:43:55 |
Michael's naughty little stepsister PART 3! |
Awesome, you're doing great with this story. Keep up the good work. |
| 2012-05-22 10:40:09 |
childhood lovers |
For your first story, I have to say you did a very good job. |
| 2012-05-21 08:53:18 |
Parking lot whore |
Awesome story. Now I'm thinking of becoming a shoe salesman |
| 2012-05-20 19:49:26 |
Michael's naughty little stepsister |
Great job for your first time, awesome story too |
| 2012-05-17 19:10:26 |
A Casual Encounter |
I loved it, very hot |
| 2012-05-16 14:41:18 |
liveaboard fun 14 and final |
Wow, that was an awesome story. Hands down, best one on here so far. Thank you |
| 2012-05-14 20:42:30 |
Grandpa's Journals: The End and The Beginning |
As before, you did an amazing job with this series. I hate to see it end but you couldn't have ended it any better. Thank you |
| 2012-05-13 18:19:37 |
It Begins With the First |
I'll have to agree, you are just a little twisted but I LOVE IT , keep up the good work |
| 2012-05-02 12:56:04 |
A Very Difficult Daughter - Chap 2 - "It's your body Sally" |
I hope you write for a living, this story so far is one of the best I've read on here. I can't wait to read more |
| 2012-04-28 20:37:28 |
Mandy's Brother |
I think you did pretty good for your first story. Don't let the negative comments keep you from writing more, I think you have a lot of potential |
| 2012-04-20 09:06:00 |
Nikki's Daddy |
You did a pretty good job. I myself would have liked it better if Nikki seduced her dad instead of him raping her but still thought it was hot |
| 2012-04-15 14:25:58 |
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This so far is the best story I've read on here. You had me laughing, crying, just about every emotion one can feel. Thank you for sharing, I wish you the best with your two lucky ladies. |
| 2012-04-13 20:47:11 |
With my best friend |
That was a very hot story, can't wait to read more |
| 2012-04-06 19:19:27 |
Caught by daddy |
Yessssssss please give me more. |
| 2012-04-06 11:46:49 |
Sibling Surprise |
Easily one of the best stories I've read on here. Very well written also. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing |
| 2012-04-04 10:44:00 |
Like a Good Neighbor |
Great story, I sure wish I had a neighbor like you :)
Can't wait to hear how the rest of the evening went |
| 2012-04-03 12:18:54 |
SEVEN MONTHS WITH MARIE: PART FIVE "The Hurricane" |
Please tell me you married this amazing woman |
| 2012-04-02 13:34:08 |
The other man |
Another amazing story, I love your imagination. Can we look foward to a second part? |
| 2012-04-02 11:50:34 |
My first gang bang |
Hot story. I'd love to run in to a woman like you, even if it was just to watch you take on four cocks |
| 2012-04-02 11:42:34 |
My first gang bang |
Hot story. I'd love to run in to a woman like you, even if it was just to watch you take on four cocks |
| 2012-03-30 15:00:42 |
Grandpa's Journals: Peeping at My Grand Daughter's Window, Part 3 |
Absolutely one of the hottest stories I've read, awesome job. Please keep going with it |
| 2012-03-28 16:36:45 |
Sister In Law Massage, Part 2 |
Like we have to ask, of course we want to hear more lol. |
| 2012-03-28 14:14:50 |
cum slut |
I love that someone as young as you can have such a naughty creative mind. I could use someone like you in my life |
| 2012-03-23 19:54:49 |
Handyman 2 |
I think you're doing an awesome job with this, nice addition with marcia and bobby |
| 2012-03-23 15:37:28 |
GOOD KARMA 3: RANDI |
That was one of the best stories I've read on here, thank you for sharing. I only hope that in the end, zeb ends up with randi |
| 2012-03-22 15:40:25 |
My husband set me up for a rape |
Not only is your husband a good man, he's a very lucky man too. Thanks for sharing |
| 2012-03-16 09:28:30 |
the dark side of me : part two |
You did a pretty good job with this so far, wish I had a niece like you :)
Maybe you can have mom and dad come home early and catch their innocent daughter riding uncles cock and maybe dad joins in? |
| 2012-03-15 11:55:36 |
Lisa's Awakening Ch 4 |
Once again another outstanding read. I like that you're taking your time with this, not rushing into things |
| 2012-03-14 10:39:44 |
New Neighbor: Part 3 |
Very good story so far, can't wait for more |
| 2012-03-10 08:56:45 |
Protective Husband Four Loves part 1 |
Awesome job once again, can't wait to read more |
| 2012-03-08 10:20:23 |
Love in the Club |
Stupid auto type, meant to say...... Very hot |
| 2012-03-08 10:19:38 |
Love in the Club |
Great story, her hot... :) |
| 2012-03-07 09:21:18 |
18 Year Old Foster - Chapter 2 |
Awesome story, can't wait for more |
| 2012-03-06 13:51:48 |
Being taught |
OMG what a hot story. Very nicely done, can't wait to read more |
| 2012-03-06 12:49:46 |
Richard's Tales: Scoring the Coach |
Yes, please write more |
| 2012-03-03 15:54:19 |
Do you want to see me for real? |
Absolutely one of the hottest stories I've read on here, great job |
| 2012-03-03 11:54:35 |
Jack's little sister-PART ONE- |
Hot story, I hope you write more :) |
| 2012-03-01 11:03:48 |
The Dick in the Wall |
Good story, would love to hear more |
| 2012-02-21 13:37:33 |
Caught them at it Part 1 |
Can't wait to here more |
| 2012-02-19 09:41:54 |
My Week With Tommy. PT.2 |
Yes I want part 3.... Good job so far |
| 2012-02-13 18:53:02 |
Kaylee's hair peeks out |
OMG that was hot. Please keep going with this one |
| 2012-02-08 13:56:15 |
Polka Dot Pajama Bottoms |
Awesome story, made me hard :) |