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| 2011-06-22 22:10:13 |
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Well guys, I'm torn to be honest. This chapter received such disappointed reviews I wanted to be sure the next made up for that fact but as I've stated before, my life is hectic right now with all these army things going on. I'm moving halfway across the country in less than a month and we don't even have a place to move into yet.
I'm sorry if the waiting is too difficult. But I'd rather post something good than just post because people are impatient. Just look what happened with this chapter. I posted it before I really felt like it was ready due to the pressure to just put something out there and most didn't care for it.
So I'll be holding the next chapter till I feel like it's good enough to post. And right now, I don't have the time to devote to making a great chapter. |
| 2011-05-15 08:04:35 |
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Yeah. Sorry for that. It's one reason this chapter took so long to get posted. Hubby is off with the army and I'm getting NO SEX. I was hoping our day together at graduation would end in that "first time" feeling after going without it so long but things didn't work out to our advantage and we didn't get a chance :(. I tried to hold off on posting this chapter till I had a chance to revitalize my body but people were getting impatient. Oh well, plenty more sex scenes coming. Hopefully one will meet your approval. |
| 2011-05-14 08:50:05 |
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I hope to have it up today or tomorrow... As I said, I'm very sorry. I had a trip planned to see hubby graduate basic training after 2.5 months of not seeing him... it distracted me a little from worrying about writing porno. lol |
| 2011-04-29 08:09:39 |
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More is coming. I apologize for the delay. Hubby graduates basic training next week and I'm buried under travel plans and packing. lol. I do hope to post the next chapter before I leave town. Hopefully time will permit that! Thanks to everyone for reading and leaving comments! Always a thrill to hear what people think! |
| 2011-04-07 20:37:12 |
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To Anonymous below: Thanks for the comments. I hadn't given it much thought but it makes sense. Glad you're enjoying the series despite the physiological discrepancies :) And yes, I know I prolonged the sex a little more than most are used to on here. But I wanted the wedding night to be one giant "release" so to speak. I think building up her virginity for so long really helped make that scene a doozie. She went from virtually untouched to a cumloving slut in no time flat. And I don't think it would have been so profound without all the teasing earlier. But I do get a little long winded sometimes. One reason it takes me so long to get chapters posted. I'm constantly asking myself if I've stretched a scene out too long. lol |
| 2011-04-06 08:11:38 |
The Rape of Mary |
unusual but a very good read! Well done :D |
| 2011-04-03 10:01:25 |
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10 is written and will be posted soon. Just had to take a few days off to take care of other obligations but it is coming! I promise! |
| 2011-03-30 07:50:01 |
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If I ever return to that one, it'll be a while. I'm just a little stuck on that one. It grew a mind of its own and took some directions I wasn't expecting. And that one is at least held up at a decent stopping point with her finally making it to her destination. We'll see. Definitely going to finish this series first. |
| 2011-03-29 22:45:18 |
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ok, ignore my last... it only appears to be formatted wrong if accessed through my account screen. No idea what that's all about! |
| 2011-03-29 22:44:01 |
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Well, I've tried to repost these without the "?s" replacing all my punctuation... it looks fine in the editor and then soon as it's published, I get "?" all over the place... hopefully Admin can sort this out soon. |
| 2011-03-28 13:48:59 |
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lol! It's coming! just have to proof it. |
| 2011-03-27 12:24:19 |
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To the Reader below, I thank you for your input. But I must say, considering I never gave a specific time period or even stated this took place on earth; the fact the cities and countries are fictional; and the fact that I place this squarely in the fantasy section would, I think, be enough to excuse "historical inaccuracies" considering I never stated it was any part of Earth's History. |
| 2011-03-26 19:26:35 |
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what do you suggest? I don't mind criticism but it does me no good if you don't elaborate so I know how to improve it. |
| 2011-03-26 19:03:10 |
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Sorry for posting 5 and 6 twice. The submission form turned all my " into ? so I submitted a corrected version for easier reading while I wait for the originals to be yanked. |
| 2011-03-26 19:02:42 |
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Sorry for posting 5 and 6 twice. The submission form turned all my " into ? so I submitted a corrected version for easier reading while I wait for the originals to be yanked. |
| 2011-03-26 10:33:40 |
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Chapter 5 is pending... I'm so very sorry for the wait, everyone. It's been a very rough year for me. I hope you like it. Chapter Six is already in the works and I hope to get that up soon as well. |
| 2010-06-24 12:34:42 |
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no worries. chapter four should be posted by tomorrow, hopefully. just takes a while to get through the validation period.
~snooch |
| 2010-06-20 07:34:16 |
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chapter 3 is submitted for validation. Sorry. but for those of you who don't know it takes about three days between "posting" a story and it actually showing up on the site.
~Snooch |
| 2010-06-04 09:03:00 |
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chapter 2 just submitted for validation should be up in about 3 days
~Snooch |
| 2010-06-04 08:50:37 |
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that's why it says CHAPTER ONE at the top. it's a work in progress. it will be completed. this is the first installment of 8 finished and a 9th in progress.
~Snooch |