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| 2013-03-25 21:06:21 |
The Judgment of Sgt J Chapter 8 The One who became Carrie |
To our friend David I wish I never heard of this thing men like you and Sgt. J call the code. For I know what that code means to men like you and he. That is what worries me the most; for all of us in his family have no Honor, no Respect, no Trust, no Courage, none of us are just as none of us have done what was right. The only part of the code we have left is HOPE. We all can only hope this turns out with an happy ending. As I typed that a little feeling of understanding came over me. Maybe Sgt. J is right about writing about yourself makes you understand yourself. However I will keep those feelings to myself for now.
Cathy |
| 2013-03-25 20:34:57 |
The Judgment of Sgt J Chapter 8 The One who became Carrie |
Cathy here and while I am no writer Kay tells me I should type something here. To Harold thank you for your kind words. I am not for sure it was courage sharing my story. It has been more out of fear. Fear of losing an man I have loved like no other. In knowing John there is a reasoning behind having us tell our story. In the 29 years I have been with him this not knowing his reasoning is troubling for me. The man was right about understanding yourself as I found out when I read what I had told him. I would tell Kay and Sherri I am sorry for what I have done however it is to soon as my story has only just began. I hope this helps us all Harold for we all fear losing the man you call Sgt. J.
Cathy |
| 2013-03-14 09:03:50 |
The Judgment of Sgt. J Chapter 7 Kay's Heart Speaks the Truth |
Kay here to say thanks for enjoying my story. To David Angel Carrie guides us all but I fear some of us have harmed her as well as John with our actions. Time heals all wounds except to your heart. We can only hope that we have not scarred his heart to deeply for if we have not even Angel Carrie can help us. |
| 2013-02-22 05:36:50 |
The Judgment of Sgt. J Chapter 3: The One Who Could fix Skates |
Look at my last comment and you will see why I do not write the story lol
Kay |
| 2013-02-22 05:32:34 |
The Judgment of Sgt. J Chapter 3: The One Who Could fix Skates |
Thanks Beth and best wishes to you old63 I did not know you were the one from Texas until now. your comment reminds me of something my husband once told me “What you need to know today is no matter
matter what has happened, it has all worked
together to bring you to this very moment. And
this is the moment you can choose to make
everything new. Right now.”
Kay
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| 2013-02-19 07:17:08 |
The Judgment of Sgt. J Chapter 3: The One Who Could fix Skates |
"I dated other men twice. Well I would not even call
them dates I would call them fucks. It was John’s
fault everyday of sitting by him as well as going for
a beer after classes had my pussy twitching and I
needed some cock."
This is confuseing why blame John for when you
decided to sleep with other men?
Kay here the reason was because at the time him and I were not having sex and i needed it |
| 2012-08-19 12:10:12 |
Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 31 A Star Guides our Souls |
Thanks everyone for your comments as well as your support. To Dylan Fielding "Never Give UP" for somewhere there is a heart that beats for you. To Coach use the forum to get a hold of me and will give you an email. Everyone is welcomed to contact me through the forum here. The epilogue is now out as well. I thank you all from my heart and deep within my soul.
Sgt. J |
| 2012-07-28 11:08:46 |
The Academic and the Nymphomaniac Ch. 3 Repost 3 |
Good use of scifi tech as well as politics quote- The implications of this information have the potential to cause a lot of problems for us with the Conservatives and the Fundamentalists. waiting for more. |
| 2012-07-28 11:05:47 |
The Academic and the Nymphomaniac Chapter Two |
Keep up the good work it will get easier in time |
| 2012-07-21 09:07:09 |
Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 28 The Daughter War Begins |
To my readers and fellow vets thanks for the support. My newest chapter will be out as soon as we get some things fixed at home. We had some storm damage to our home on the lake. We are all well and safe however the same can not be said about or home. Hopefully the repairs will be quick after all I do know of a construction company lol
Sgt. J |
| 2012-07-16 20:41:21 |
The Academic and the Nymphomaniac Chapter One |
Don't you just hate that when they rake your chest with their claws lol and to think the wife gets her claws done every other week. Looking forward to more from you.
SGT. J |
| 2012-07-16 20:38:17 |
The Academic and the Nymphomaniac reedit Chapter Two |
Looking forward to Chapter 3 |
| 2012-07-12 15:32:54 |
Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 28 The Daughter War Begins |
Now as to the ship named "The Star of Carrie" why do you think I never told anyone about it you ass wipe.
Now for my opinion of you and I am sure others will have the same opinion as I.
It is dumb asses like you that I fought for so they did not just round your type up and shoot you in your fucking head.
Now if you wanted to say something about this chapter it should have been that I should have did a lot more proofreading of it but as I do not write for my living all I can say is that I am sorry and will try to do better with my next chapter.
Sorry to the people who actually read my story I do not normally rant over what some one says about my story however the monster within took over me and my computer. Thanks gorilla52 for coming to my defense.
Sgt. J |
| 2012-07-12 15:29:42 |
Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 28 The Daughter War Begins |
Ran out of space As to strong girls like Sherri don't just suddenly cave in like that. Number one I am not finished with my story so you do not now when and why the change had come over her.
Now as to Carrie being irresponsible; loving wife who killed herself and in the process murders her child. Did you even fucking read my story?
Which brings me to being able to see 100 yards through the snowstorm. Once again did you read the story or better yet you dumb shit let me read it for you.
Quote: I walked about 100 yards until I saw what looked like a trucks trailer blocking the road. It was not just a trucks trailer but a fuel trailer. I walked over to see the truck cab was down off the side of the road and the trailer was across the whole road. I made my way to the cab to find the driver cold but alive. He told me he was OK other than a gash to his forehead.
My god man the fucking sentence starts with I walked not saw 100 yards thought the snowstorm.
Now as to the ship named "The St |
| 2012-07-12 15:27:37 |
Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 28 The Daughter War Begins |
I normally do not take the time to reply to someone who has a problem with my story however this time I will. As to the main character not being myself this is my life story and the people in my life. To Carrie being the main character I look to her as being the guide in the story as she has been in my life. As to me having a chip on my shoulder and thinking the world owns me something. Why would I think that now when the world or at least the people in my mine own country did not give me thanks for my serve to them. The world owns me nothing just as I own it nothing.
Now as to Kay having been sidelined that was just how she was back then she rather observed me before she past judgment. Kay was soft spoken back then and Cathy was outspoken. As to them dropping me with a solid right to my solar plexus. It would never had happened as my girls are not that powerful lol however give them a skillet oh they will drop me and they have.
As to strong girls like Sherri don't just suddenly cave |
| 2012-06-29 13:53:20 |
Swinging in the neighborhood Chapter 27 Sherri Becomes an Disappointment |
I love your story! I just have a question for you did Kay ever tell you why she couldn't have any babies? Ohh and did you ever think about wanting another child?
Kay had cysts on her ovaries and she had her ovaries removed before I met her. She had a history of ovarian cancer in her family. Yes we had thought about adopting an child however it just never happened. |
| 2012-05-18 19:02:15 |
Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 22: Whispers From my Soul |
Sorry about that I had meant to say that this chapter would be recapping some of my story. I had some emails where some had asked if I would do that for them. I apologize for not including it in the intro or at the beginning of the chapter. Been writing and fishing some walleye tournaments and late;y I have been sucking at both. Especially the fishing part 0 for 4 so far in the tournaments. However my luck may change next weekend as I will be fishing with an very special woman as my partner. |
| 2012-04-25 21:54:52 |
Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 18: Fate Knocks Upon my Door |
Chapter 19 is out and thanks for the comments.
Sgt. j |
| 2012-04-02 15:21:47 |
Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 13: The Return Home |
I drove to the cemetery and laid those flowers onto Carries and Melissas grave. I saw that their grave site was in order. I also noticed that there was another name on the tombstone. I said a silent prayer for Brenda, as it was her name that appeared. I stayed and I talked to the three of them for some time.
I did not tell the three of them goodbye instead I said, Until we meet again.
I drove to Paul and Terris place next. I knocked on the front door. Terri answered it.
Terri stood there staring at me for a few second before she said, John, is that really you, as she wrapped her arms around my neck.
I am so sorry about your mom, I did not know, I whispered into her ear.
Terri invited me in and we talked. She told me how Brenda was never the same especially after I went lost. All of them had figured I had done myself in so I could be with Carrie and Melissa.
Was in this chapter you just missed it. I never did find out what she died of just that she became ill |
| 2012-03-30 05:23:18 |
Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 13: The Return Home |
I know that song well ofchine I burnted my hand. I cut my face
Heaven knows how long it's been
Since I've felt so out of place
I'm wonderin if I'll fit in |
| 2012-03-14 22:46:14 |
Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 9 The Road to Recovery leads to Carrie?s Place |
Chapter 10 is now out
Sgt. J |
| 2012-02-23 18:57:29 |
Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 7 Ninety Days and Counting |
Thanks for all the comments and Chapter 8 is out. |
| 2012-02-12 16:29:44 |
Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 5: The Good,The Bad and The Ugly |
Yes I was an child of the 60's and I am in my 50s |