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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-02-24 22:41:02 |
Breaking A New Family Into The Lifestyle |
Thank you for your comments. The words emanate and emit are interchangeable in reference to sounds. The other two errors are my mistake. I am surprised the "coxed" did not get picked up by the spell checker, but understand why the other didn't. I have always found condoms on toys to be a good idea. You would not believe the horror stories I have heard of girls supposedly getting a rash or allergic reaction while using a vibrator. Worse was a girl who came in and provided graphic pictures of her injuries when battery acid leaked from a damaged unit onto one she pulled out of the drawer. Went to a lawsuit, but since we did not supply the batteries that leaked; it was tossed. I appreciate your constructive criticism. |
| 2013-02-20 15:49:32 |
Breaking A New Family Into The Lifestyle |
Yes, sex toys shared from person to person should be cleaned and covered with a condom. Unlike skin, materials in vibes may be porous enough to harbor micro organisms that could be transferred despite cleaning. Even cleaned, these microbs could multiply while in storage. In addition, some people react to materials in vibes which would destroy a great lay. Been selling adult toys for over 20 years and seen it happen. |
| 2013-02-15 01:49:32 |
Sis & I & Sis #2 |
Regarding the comment about my "father" dying in two stories. It was my Grandfather. I did mention at the summation at the end of the first story in looking ahead that he died several years later, and mentioned it again now that it was a couple of years later. Also, there are three sisters, Mary, Tracey and the youngest Julie.
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| 2013-02-11 01:12:53 |
Sis & I Caught In The Garage |
I noted the concerns about "introducing" the old man and the gay item. It would not be possible to tell the story of my sister and me without it, or I would have to change it to fiction and fabricate everything. I can not change the details of what did happen, but I hope you will continue reading. |
| 2013-02-05 18:49:24 |
Popping Sis's Cherry |
The first part of the story was told under the title 'WHEN SIS CAUGHT ME" detailing our sexual experiences before this. |
| 2012-05-19 01:48:30 |
A Case of Sibling Incest |
I liked the story. Plenty of detail, and great description of the sex. |
| 2012-04-22 17:22:39 |
When they're alone. |
Really, you have got to proof read your work before publishing. The confusion between male and female pronouns, and as already said "Who's Harry?" |
| 2012-03-17 19:45:20 |
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Great story. Was a little turned off by Riley's dark side. After he broke them, he should have forgiven them and they could fuck the summer away willingly. Who knows? Once Mom finds out, she might have Kendall relieve some of her own tension, and we might find out bi traits run in the family as she looks to Lacey. |