Mom Makes a Porn Video
||Nice Job. Interesting scenario. Do they ALL get together?
Bouncing on the Mower
||good job. A little proof reading and a little more continuity. Ages are a turn on (personally) but she could seem to act and speak more like her age. Good that you're able to come to a climax without going "all the way"
||intriguing setup but take your time with the action in the last paragraph. that should be half of the story