Comments from presdeeply

Date Story title Comment
2012-01-04 16:32:29 The Dragons' Pet Part 2: Spawn Reasonably well written but the key transition from pain to pleasure isn't done quite well enough for the story as a whole to work.
2012-01-04 16:39:15 DIY Teens ptII Terrific story, great writing, thank you!
2012-01-17 17:36:20 A Reasonable Deal (Pt. 7) Adolescent fantasy about being big, with the hero a bully only an insensitive adolescent would admire. Hard to like.
2012-01-22 04:16:49 Paranormal Phenomenon 3 Very nive development