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| 2012-08-03 19:51:35 |
My new girlfriend wants me to get her a slave 2 |
I say the new girl should be younger then whore and she i think she should be really willing to do everything but also real nervous and scared about all of it. Definitely needs to be a Virgin in all manners. She should have blond hair and be the type of girl you would never expect to go along with everything. |
| 2012-07-07 16:10:30 |
The Old Language Chapter 1 - The First Lesson |
How did he put the amulet away if he was tied up? Who would accept that situation so fast? You are rushing through in your writing the story line sounds good but you are sticking everything way to close. |
| 2012-06-24 14:32:54 |
Solomon's Daughters: Prologue |
Great story... I have followed you a little since you posted some of Eric's work on here and that is where i first learned about him. It is great to see you have written your own story sound like it will be good. |
| 2012-06-17 05:03:14 |
THE NEW GODS 4: Priestesses and Perversions |
GRRR I HATE YOU!!! You give us this excellent story and then leave us with such a cliff hanger not even knowing what they are talking about. I can't wait for the next chapter This is an Great story hope it lasts awhile :) |
| 2012-05-29 00:09:54 |
Endless Summer |
Completely agree with that person under me no way was this to long |
| 2012-05-12 03:22:13 |
Doing the Babysitter Pt 3 |
Love it keep them coming. Great story line can't wait to see where you take it. |
| 2012-04-26 15:59:46 |
Doing the Babysitter Pt 1 |
Very good start of a story it has lots of potential and i hope you don't let that slip away because i will be happy to read it. |
| 2012-03-22 16:11:05 |
3 Evil Sister-Part 7 |
Good Continuation i think if you want you should go ahead and try to finish the story its good enough that i will definitely read what you write. Somestory has been gone for a while so it should be fine if you do this and if anything he could always just come back and write it the way he wants and we have two different endings. I say just go for it |
| 2012-03-22 02:36:33 |
House Girl |
A FUCKING MAZING!!!! this is definitely one of the best starts to a story i have read. I am not even joking this is a great plot line with so much potential to it that i hope you do not squander. I am looking forward to the next chapter and all the ones to follow with i hope will be tons. |
| 2012-01-10 03:15:20 |
caught in the act chap. 1-6 |
Wow. This is the first story i have read about a reverse cuckold and i have to say I'm impressed. I really dislike normal cuckold stories and this was pretty good. Since the whole situation started with her with another guy i am really hoping that for now on you are the only guy in the situation because if you started having her fuck other guys that would just ruin this story for me. But if it is going to stick with you humiliating her and bringing more women in to the equation then i can't wait for more. |
| 2012-01-09 22:20:06 |
How did this happen? |
Very good story love the story line and seems like a very good base for a series i really hope you don't plan on letting it die here because i will continue to read about these three escapades as long as you continue to write them. |
| 2012-01-09 06:08:17 |
7 days in heaven ..!! |
So i guess the results are in and when someone re posts a story it doesn't magically get better. Next time fix it before you re post it |
| 2012-01-07 17:16:49 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 21 (Final) |
Noooooooo!!!!!! how can you stop writing i hope that you saying this is your final series is some kind of sick joke you are one of my favorite writers on here and i couldn't stand to loose you amazing writing |
| 2012-01-05 08:27:49 |
College Days Ch. 01 |
Both the percy jackson and the kids with powers sound pretty awsome but that second one sounds gay. it sounds like a story where the main guy will have to know about the girl sleeping with other guys and that just isn't my thing.
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| 2012-01-02 00:09:36 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 19 |
I also hate to see this story end and i don't see why you apologized from what i read shanna and nick seemed to end out on good terms in this story. even though the story will be ending soon i can't wait for the ending and to read the next story line |
| 2011-12-22 14:38:02 |
fucking my sister Jessica |
no Brother and sister would be able to jump into a sexual relationship that fast i find the story decent but i find it hard to read and enjoy a story that is to unrealistic |
| 2011-12-22 13:15:39 |
Home on Leave, Chapter 9 |
my bad on the double comment |
| 2011-12-22 13:15:24 |
Home on Leave, Chapter 9 |
I would suggest that you just skip ahead to when he gets back and wrap up the story. I would honestly like to see him getting marcie pregnant and them just living there lives together all three of them. i think you might still have a good amount of chapters left if you use the same length you normally do. Just please don't add rape or bestiality. Love your stories and cant wait for what ever you decide to do. |
| 2011-12-22 13:15:05 |
Home on Leave, Chapter 9 |
I would suggest that you just skip ahead to when he gets back and wrap up the story. I would honestly like to see him getting marcie pregnant and them just living there lives together all three of them. i think you might still have a good amount of chapters left if you use the same length you normally do. Just please don't add rape or bestiality. Love your stories and cant wait for what ever you decide to do. |
| 2011-12-22 01:09:17 |
Me and mom, Under the covers, In the cold |
masturbating is probably the word you wanted not master baiting just from reading it i can tell its a sex story not a fishing one. but other then that it was pretty good if you write more ill probably read it. |
| 2011-12-21 21:13:56 |
A Boy and His Powers IV |
I completely agree with the last comment so much potential in the plot is being wasted honestly a story shouldn't be only sex you need a little bit of a story line in there. and i don't know about others but i find it hard to read and enjoy a story that has a grammatical error on every other line. |