||A mother in law Dilemma Part One
||I enjoyed it emmensely. A little more work on the grammer is needed, but an exceptional read just the same.
||I usually just vote and not comment on stories. But this one I just have to say I enjoyed alot. I don't really have any ideas on how to continue, I'll leave that as an exercise for the author.
||Do you really love me?
||The commenter that posted at 17:18:48 just proves there are some small minded people on this site. And the fact IT did it anonymously just intesifies that thought. I didn't read the whole story because It didn't catch my interest, but what I did read wasn't all that bad. aceofspace keep up the writing and with practice will come a more polished product. Good Luck.
||Doing the Babysitter Pt 2
||The first two chapters look very interesting. I look forward to seeing where you are going to take it. Keep going.
||Seek The Wolf in Thyself
||Keep writing... please
||The Billioaire Rapest - chapter 1
||The only way to use genetic tracing is if the girls or him for that matter were ever registered. And the babies will be sold on the black market. Those type of people will not be interested in finding out who the actual parents are.