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2010-05-08 11:06:54 Stormy... Justwondering... No idea perhaps only to compare themselves to others outside of the main... or have colleagues read and compare its fun and harmless...
2010-05-12 03:36:58 a truth or dare game changed to sex Maybe paragraphs and more coherent thoughts too... I'm not saying its a bad story by any means it could just have gone on longer and been better. At least break it up a little and give us the readers some more description what were you feeling, what did it sound like taste like ect. Just a friendly thought. CJ
2010-05-12 03:41:26 a truth or dare game changed to sex One more tiny comment... 5000 characters is not really that many my own ongoing series is right at 337 thousand characters.... Make it bigger... bigger is better. CJ
2010-05-12 03:41:34 a truth or dare game changed to sex Maybe paragraphs and more coherent thoughts too... I'm not saying its a bad story by any means it could just have gone on longer and been better. At least break it up a little and give us the readers some more description what were you feeling, what did it sound like taste like ect. Just a friendly thought. CJ
2010-05-12 03:44:03 The Plane Crash Pt. 13 I submitted the next installment a little while ago so expect it soon. Glad you all like it. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions comments suggestions whatever. Or check the sex stories forum I have a thread there if they ever get it fixed. CJ
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