||Brilliant; enough said
||The title got my attention but I didn't even bother to read the story on principle of not reading a wall of text.
||Die or Live to do a Porno
||Yeah I thought the ending was a bit depressing too but I think it ends the story nicely, glad you enjoyed it.
||The Regretful Fuck with My Cousin
||As I was proof reading it I paid more attention to keeping a past or present point of view but now that I read it again I see what you mean. I think perhaps the problem was I used some personal experiences and tried to mix it with complete fiction, I will work on this.
I did not plan on writing a second part but I may consider it in the future.
||The Tutor and the Nymph
Anonymous reader I will consider your advise for my next story but one of the reasons why I started to write my own stories is because I hate the fact that most stories out there have no closure, I guess I could keep these short endings to myself and if people want to know they could ask me.
||The Lesbian Next Door
||Thank you for your comments I will try and work on all of the above, the advise is well appreciated
||The Test Animal #69
||hahahaha all I can do is lol, I said at the start I don't normally write such stories, the tags are very clear and you could always stop reading when ever you want. Once again LOL