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Comment |
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| 2012-11-22 02:59:42 |
Anothr Yard XII |
I wish you would post further installments. I dont give a da...m...n what those neg idiots think. Just let us know where you will be posting in the future. |
| 2012-05-29 19:55:16 |
MOM WANTS TO BE MY CUM-BUCKET - CHAPTER 13 |
Most excellent story! I have read all 13 chapters. Have you thought of posting it on the stories on line website? You would get excellent reviews... Please More!!! |
| 2012-03-26 01:47:34 |
MOM WANTS TO BE MY CUM BUCKET! - CHAPTER 3 |
Good story so far. I will finish the rest of the chapters before commenting further |
| 2012-03-26 01:25:18 |
MOM WANTS TO BE MY CUM BUCKET! - CHAPTER 2 |
I love the fact they got caught by sis! I almost blew my load. |
| 2012-03-26 01:10:15 |
MOM WANTS TO BE MY CUM BUCKET! - CHAPTER 1 |
Pretty good. Lot of sex, short on plot. I would still give her my cum |
| 2012-03-15 18:25:53 |
SLuT9 pt 12 |
Remember, this isnt your story |
| 2012-03-04 00:31:37 |
Dream come true: How it all started |
Nice story, It could be more interesting if it continued |
| 2012-03-03 21:45:25 |
The Amulet part 2 |
I like a lot of sex, what person doesn't? However in this story less could be more. It needs more of a plot. |
| 2012-03-03 21:35:56 |
The Amulet |
Not to creative, but interesting. I like the basics of it though |
| 2012-03-02 22:52:25 |
Alien Inheritance 5 |
The complete story "Alien Son" has already been written by franco, copyrite 2002. Look at storiesonline.net |
| 2012-03-02 22:50:39 |
Alien Inheritance 4 |
The complete story "Alien Son" has already been written by franco, copyrite 2002. Look at storiesonline.net |
| 2012-03-02 22:50:00 |
Alien Inheritance 2 |
The complete story "Alien Son" has already been written by franco, copyrite 2002. Look at storiesonline.net |
| 2012-03-02 22:49:04 |
Alien Inheritance |
The complete story "Alien Son" has already been written by franco, copyrite 2002. Look at storiesonline.net |
| 2012-03-02 22:48:07 |
Alien Inheritance 3 |
The complete story "Alien Son" has already been written by franco, copyrite 2002. Look at storiesonline.net |
| 2012-03-02 22:45:47 |
Alien Inheritance 3 |
The complete story has already been written by franco, copyrite 2002. Look at storiesonline.net |
| 2012-03-02 22:45:04 |
Alien Inheritance 2 |
The complete story has already been written by franco, copyrite 2002. Look at storiesonline.net |
| 2012-03-02 22:41:56 |
Alien Inheritance |
This story was written by franco copyrite 2002. Look at stories on line. |
| 2012-02-28 20:23:24 |
Lloyd's Angel |
Good story. Also a little confused on the dialouges. How did Angel/Angela get Lloyd's mc?
By blood or by tampering? Great sex! |
| 2012-02-28 20:17:48 |
Milk of Desire, Chapter 6 : Testing Lisa at the sleepover |
Been following the story closely. Very good. Looking forward to the next part |
| 2012-02-25 19:07:28 |
Accidental Master pt 1 (edited) |
To continue my last comment, Third, I apologize to Lord Skies here, and sent him emails to apologize for what I have done. Finally to let the readers know, the posting of the chapter I have done here is in the process of being removed. Thank you. |
| 2012-02-25 19:05:14 |
Accidental Master pt 1 (edited) |
First, I want to apologize for all the readers I have offended here. Yes it was origionally written by Lord Skies. I give him full credit for the story. I found only this chapter on another website and planned to build on it because I thought after 2006 Lord Skies gave up on it and left it incomplete. That copy had many sentence structure errors, and was grammatically incorrect. I left the heart of his story alone, and tightened up the chaper, and fixed most of the errors I had found. I only changed the names on the main characters due to fact I knew a couple in real life with that name that I didn't like and didn't want in any way for them to read it and think I had re written it with them in mind. Secondly, I want to thank the readers on finding the full story on the other websites. It tells me to do more research and never to this again. I am new at this and whenever I post another story, it will be completely my own. |
| 2012-02-25 18:46:06 |
Accidental Master pt 1 |
To continue my last comment, Third, I apologize to Lord Skies here, and sent him emails to apologize for what I have done.
Finally to let the readers know, the posting of the chapter I have done here is in the process of being removed. Thank you. |
| 2012-02-25 18:41:13 |
Accidental Master pt 1 |
First, I want to apologize for all the readers I have offended here. Yes it was origionally written by Lord Skies. I give him full credit for the story. I found only this chapter on another website and planned to build on it because I thought after 2006 Lord Skies gave up on it and left it incomplete. That copy had many sentence structure errors, and was grammatically incorrect. I left the heart of his story alone, and tightened up the chaper, and fixed most of the errors I had found. I only changed the names on the main characters due to fact I knew a couple in real life with that name that I didn't like and didn't want in any way for them to read it and think I had re written it with them in mind.
Secondly, I want to thank the readers on finding the full story on the other websites. It tells me to do more research and never to this again. I am new at this and whenever I post another story, it will be completely my own.
Third and most importantly. |
| 2012-02-24 18:50:49 |
Accidental Master pt 1 (edited) |
Just to let the readers know, your comments and pm's are appreciated since this is my first attempt. |
| 2012-02-24 18:43:20 |
Accidental Master pt 1 |
Just to let the readers know, your comments and pm's are appreciated since this is my first attempt.
Also, I just finished editing this part for an easier read. Thanks. |
| 2012-02-20 23:41:02 |
Camp Epilogue |
This story that you copied was a piss poor rewrite. You left out major sections of the story. Netwolf would be pissed if he read it here. |
| 2012-02-15 02:06:48 |
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Well done. I think its great erotic story. |
| 2012-02-15 00:56:38 |
Milk of Desire, Chapter 2 : What just happened? |
Still a good Story I don't know where mind control comes into it at This point. |
| 2012-02-15 00:44:49 |
Milk of Desire, Chapter 1 : How it all started |
Good Story. I read a similar one about 30 years ago. |
| 2012-02-10 02:44:29 |
Ashlys Command |
Good Story, I think pedo is sick, at least under 13, but I liked the rest. I wouldn't mind seeing the mom taking the pill, plus Mrs Jenkins. |
| 2012-02-10 00:08:45 |
Wi Fi Master |
Good Story. If its the 70s marry the guy off and continue to the next generation. |
| 2012-02-09 03:59:13 |
Aphrodite wakes part 1 |
Good story so far. Autism is not taken lightly. Be careful where you tread. I will keep reading. |
| 2012-02-09 03:58:16 |
Aphrodite wakes part 1 |
Good story so far. Autism is not taken lightly. Be careful where you tread. I will keep reading. |
| 2012-02-09 03:37:05 |
My Beautiful Angels of sex 1 and 2 !! |
I like the story, needs a bit more sex. Don't know where your character is going with Amanda. Correct the grammar. Keep the plot going. Please continue the series. |
| 2012-02-06 09:02:45 |
Alex's Unusual Story -Part One- We Are Legion |
Great story, continue, you are a gifted young writer. |
| 2012-02-06 00:06:47 |
My daughter Claire was sweet Part two |
People who tell you that you are sick can't read. Look at the genre you Fucks! Too short for now, though interesting. If you deal in real snuff and cannibalism, I hope you meet your own fate. |
| 2012-02-05 23:55:31 |
My daughter Claire was sweet, so very sweet and tender! I |
People who tell you that you are sick can't read. Look at the genre you Fucks! Too short for now, though interesting. |
| 2012-02-05 01:25:03 |
Afican Slave Queen (Jungle Kidnap) |
Very good story, looking forward to your others. Hot |
| 2012-02-04 22:47:47 |
A Nuns story |
I do not like it at all. Too many implications. |
| 2012-02-04 16:43:53 |
A timely cum uppance, part 1 |
Great brain washing story. Yes similar subliminals has been done with minimum effect. More like a deep hypnosis. However deprogramming is available. It is a very hot story. Makes me Horny. |
| 2012-01-29 20:47:39 |
3D Radio |
Good Story, I also do not understand why the 3d doesn't effect her. |
| 2012-01-29 14:42:28 |
'Til Death. |
I love this story. Well written, greatly creative, and romantic. |
| 2012-01-29 02:57:36 |
An Adventurous Outing, Complete: Chapters 1-8 |
Thanks for compiling all of your chapters. It was sick but good. |
| 2012-01-28 19:45:13 |
An Adventurous Outing, Chapter 1 |
I'm into bdsm and humiliation. But nothing like that. Good story so far though. |
| 2012-01-28 19:27:31 |
An Adventurous Outing, Chapter 1 |
I'm into bdsm and humiliation. But nothing like that. Good story so far though. |
| 2012-01-27 23:15:12 |
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Very cool. Good story. I like the mind control. |
| 2012-01-27 23:13:17 |
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Great story, I like the details Plus it's hot. |
| 2012-01-27 16:48:29 |
Succubus genie part 1 - Paradise bequeathed |
Real nice. I can't wait to see where it goes. |
| 2012-01-27 12:00:52 |
My Ability To Sense Minds Chapters 13 |
Great story. I guess your done with the series. I would recommend you expand it and make it a mini novel. |
| 2012-01-27 11:45:56 |
My Ability To Sense Minds Chapters 10-12 |
Great story, hot and horny kids and mom! Does Penny have the mind powers too? |
| 2012-01-26 22:11:42 |
"The Routine" - Chapter V |
I like it, keep going! |
| 2012-01-26 21:45:05 |
"The Routine" - Chapter IV |
Great story, Hot and a lot of fun. |
| 2012-01-26 21:25:42 |
"The Routine" - Chapter III |
Good story. Damn hot. |
| 2012-01-26 19:17:05 |
My Ability To Sense Minds Chapters 4-6 |
It's a good story. Fun and hot |
| 2012-01-26 19:05:28 |
My Ability To Sense Minds Chapters 1-3 |
Good story in all. Like the other comment below put a little more into it next time. Run spell check and grammatical mistakes |
| 2012-01-25 21:21:00 |
"The Routine" - Chapter II |
Great story but how does he release her from his hypnosis? |
| 2012-01-25 21:09:14 |
"The Routine" - Chapter I |
That is very good. Simple but good |
| 2012-01-25 20:51:31 |
Subjects 0 - CH 7 (Final) |
Great story! Will there be a sequel with Adam's and Shelly's child? Way to get rid of limp dick Harold. |
| 2012-01-25 18:28:54 |
Subjects 0 - CH 6 |
This story is great. You by far are the best writer on this site. |
| 2012-01-25 17:54:06 |
Subjects 0 - CH 5 |
Great work ever. Is mom preg? Can't wait. Adam has his own harem. Kill off Harold |
| 2012-01-25 16:49:15 |
Subjects 0 - CH 4 |
I love it. Glad the shit didn't work good on Harold. And those who can't stand incest read the list of what's in it. |
| 2012-01-25 16:16:29 |
Subjects 0 - CH 3 (Edited) |
Ok thanks for harolds input. |
| 2012-01-25 10:14:57 |
Subjects 0 - CH 2 |
Can't stop reading your stories! |
| 2012-01-25 09:42:36 |
Subjects 0 - CH 2 |
Great! Hot! Gifted...keep writing. |
| 2012-01-25 00:47:49 |
Subjects 0 - CH 1 |
Great story man. Get back safe and write some more. |
| 2012-01-25 00:10:38 |
Son Of Cupid Chapter 2 (Flying To Corte Beach) |
It sounds like some bliss God out for revenge. |
| 2012-01-24 23:38:52 |
The Storm (Part V) |
It's a good concept, I recommend you revise it too.
. Beef it up everywhere. I get the point fucking is all they live for. Make it more than it is. |
| 2012-01-24 23:25:29 |
The Storm (Part IV) |
Good story but not enough to go on. |
| 2012-01-24 23:25:08 |
The Storm (Part IV) |
Good story but not enough to go on. |
| 2012-01-24 23:15:32 |
The Storm (III) |
Starting to lose some interest. |
| 2012-01-24 23:10:47 |
The Storm (II) |
It's nice, but it needs more to it |
| 2012-01-24 23:05:01 |
The Storm |
I liked it. Waiting to read the rest for an overall opinion. |
| 2012-01-22 00:56:37 |
Paranormal Phenomenon 8 |
It has at least 8 parts and 43 chapters. I found the rest |
| 2012-01-22 00:55:02 |
Paranormal Phenomenon |
It has at least 8 parts and 43 chapters. I found the rest. |
| 2012-01-21 22:55:10 |
Paranormal Phenomenon 8 |
Thanks for the re post I hope more is done soon and you can find it. It's hot, intriguing, suspenseful, and more! |
| 2012-01-21 22:08:32 |
Paranormal Phenomenon 7 |
I couldn't vote again today but I give the story a positive. The next time I log in i will vote. It is hot still! Keep re posting. |
| 2012-01-21 21:34:20 |
Paranormal Phenomenon 6 |
I thought it would happen...it's still hot keep re posting. Oh and write more of yours. |
| 2012-01-21 21:05:28 |
Paranormal Phenomenon 5 |
Keep re posting the stories they're hot! |
| 2012-01-21 20:08:29 |
Paranormal Phenomenon 4 |
I still think its hot and since I don't peak ahead I hope sherry gets her fantasy. Thanks for the re post |
| 2012-01-21 18:55:40 |
Paranormal Phenomenon 2 |
Keep on re posting. It is very good. |
| 2012-01-21 18:39:23 |
Paranormal Phenomenon |
Great Story always thought to write one involving some amount of mind control.
thank you for re posting it. I probably would have never read it otherwise. I think the author would thank you for his name being spread so his other works may reach more readers. |
| 2012-01-21 03:45:26 |
Genie Chronicles 2 |
I love it! I can't wait to read more! |
| 2012-01-21 02:38:49 |
Absolute Power 3 |
This is great, I have to have my sub read all three installments to me as I fuck her from behind. I may have to read it to myself next time as she sucks my cock. Write more. |
| 2012-01-21 02:13:11 |
Absolute Power 2 |
The story is still great. A little shorter and it has kept me on edge for the next one. |
| 2012-01-21 01:51:23 |
Absolute Power 1 |
It is very very good so far. I am looking forward to the next installment. |
| 2012-01-20 19:50:18 |
Diane and Room Three |
It was ok. It just wasn't realistic. |
| 2012-01-17 21:48:07 |
Xavier's Mansion |
Really dum... The worst I've read in a while |
| 2012-01-17 21:24:49 |
Zack livin life 4 |
Where was the domination that you listed I didn't notice it and like was said Kelly's view isn't there. I was thinking maybe a 3some angle. |
| 2012-01-17 21:03:19 |
Zack livin life 3 |
Getting much better....keep going |
| 2012-01-17 19:33:10 |
Zack livin life 2 |
It.was.pretty good, we'll see... |
| 2012-01-17 19:25:37 |
Zack, livin life |
Good story, better than the taking mom and daughter. |
| 2012-01-17 15:57:44 |
YTaking of both mother and daughter 3 |
Somewhat better, it needs more to it. Still.predictable.
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| 2012-01-17 15:45:20 |
The taking of both Mom and Daughter repost |
terrible grammar, use spell check. Story is to predictable. |
| 2012-01-13 00:47:49 |
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Very good series, maybe you could follow up with a sequel. |
| 2012-01-12 04:38:12 |
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Much better than 4, I liked.it very much. Looking forward to the finale. |
| 2012-01-12 03:57:57 |
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It was good, but 1 and 2 my opinion was better. But opinions are like assholes. |
| 2012-01-11 01:34:53 |
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good reading, keep it up |
| 2012-01-10 22:48:29 |
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enjoyed it greatly. The best balance of erotica and fantasy I've read in awhile. |
| 2012-01-04 01:44:31 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 20 |
Great story bro. I think it was a little incomplete. I suggest that you compile your story and fatten it up a little. Maybe a project when you get back. I'm looking forward to the finale, even though sad to it ending. By the way I like the ref to the galactica series too. As well as the wheel of time series. Yes I have all of Robert Jordan books too. |
| 2012-01-03 02:47:00 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 19 |
Great story, Its still some of the best I've read here. Keep writing more, just file them til you return. I was over there too at one time. Keep up the good work. |
| 2011-12-28 22:21:29 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 17 |
I've read all of your bait & switchate to see it end, as all things must. Keep up the great work. |
| 2011-12-25 00:37:12 |
Little Girl Lost! |
I liked the twisted ending. The story needs beefing up. shouldn't belong in the snuff section unless there is a part 2 with it. I'd rate it about a 6 out of 10.
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| 2011-12-23 12:00:08 |
A Day with the family |
Great Story true or not. I don't believe in incest or kiddie sex. I still have to give you a thumbs up. |
| 2011-12-18 02:01:52 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 13 |
Great series, looking forward to the next chapters |
| 2011-12-18 01:00:54 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 12 |
Looking forward to more of this series. |
| 2011-12-18 00:32:00 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 11 |
Even though I could not vote today, I still give you two thumbs way up.
Just a thought though, when Nick first met Lela, why did Lela have 4 digits on her hand. It seems a stereotype in most alien stories. |
| 2011-12-18 00:09:09 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 10 |
Great story and great build up to the next chapter. The Sex just as great. |
| 2011-12-17 23:44:40 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 09 (Edited) |
Like the edit. Soft touch. Great read |
| 2011-12-17 23:03:00 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 09 |
I know you edited and I have not read it yet. Making him a woman great! I think you should have left it a voice, your choice of a masculine or feminine one. Very good.
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| 2011-12-17 22:34:25 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 08 |
Great student professor erotica. What's going on with him watching out for Derek? |
| 2011-12-17 22:11:11 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 07 |
Going great. I think you're going to get a great review on this story. |
| 2011-12-17 21:21:52 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 06 |
Story is still great. The erotica is super. Keep it up. |
| 2011-12-17 06:00:03 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 05 |
Very Very Good. Take your time with ch 15 |
| 2011-12-17 04:19:19 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 04 |
Great story, good build up |
| 2011-12-17 03:36:26 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 03 |
Great, Greater, Greatest. Immorality does await you |
| 2011-12-17 02:55:02 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 02 |
Positive vote from me. Keep it up, just like your main character. Ha. |
| 2011-12-17 02:11:04 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 14 |
Again great work. Let me know if you are published.
Got some information for you to add some extra realism to it. My pm doesn't work. Email me at eagle0xx@yahoo.com if you would like it. |
| 2011-12-17 01:43:11 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 01 |
If you ever publish send me an autographed copy. Great story and highly erotic. |
| 2011-12-17 01:02:36 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 14 |
Best story I've read here yet. I started this first, now I'm going to the beginning. If you are not published, publish. You have talent. Get a good editor, clean up and proof read. They will buy it. I would. Erotic and tasteful, even with the incest angle. Two thumbs way up! |
| 2011-12-16 23:59:26 |
A Family or Sex Slaves Part 2 |
I agree leave the girls alone to ripen a few years. Just mentally break them for now. |
| 2011-12-16 23:42:38 |
A family of Newfound Sex Slaves: Part One |
No real incest, just humiliation and mental abuse to the little girls. Even though I do not condone child molesting and rape for real. I have real sanctioned caps for some.
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| 2011-12-16 02:50:40 |
A bumper harvest part 2 |
Good promise, a little better, could use a little beefing up in the middle. The ending romantic in its own way. I find i could get off on it, even though I'm not into beastialiy. Positive vote |
| 2011-12-16 02:29:00 |
A bumper harvest 1 |
I gave you a pos rating for plot, and tags, if you other assholes read this shit, don't be hypocrites, you are into the stuff. I agree with others your w riting is bad. Next, too much forensic evidence, even a mall cop could find your main character. (exaggerating a bit) I hope your next part is better. |
| 2011-12-15 20:54:25 |
White slavery or is it Really part 1 |
Good story, can't wait to read it all. |
| 2011-12-09 00:55:51 |
George and Lennie Snuff a Girl |
Maybe Lennie could put the next girl in the incinerator alive. |
| 2011-12-09 00:37:30 |
Fucking the ex worse then she fucked me |
Fucked up, but poorly written. |