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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-12-10 03:57:14 |
You First 2 |
awesome story
it sounds real in the way its written
keep it going |
| 2012-12-03 17:35:47 |
Stepsister Seduction |
good one but a little less jumping between them would work better instead of just a moment make it the length of an action or when they switch positions something like that also i liked that they both wanted it but they were also nervous about it |
| 2012-12-03 16:59:27 |
Sisters By The Pool Part 5 |
nice story i like the addition on the giggling while being restrained last time it kinda seemed rapey |
| 2012-01-18 03:26:40 |
3 Evil Sisters-Part 4 |
jake? who the hell is jake
nice story
i understand the moving trouble
im still having the same problem three weeks later |
| 2012-01-05 07:34:17 |
3 Evil Sisters-Part 3 |
awesome story
a lot better
BAKED
shooting his load on izzy AWESOME |
| 2012-01-05 01:24:37 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 20 |
whoa ho ho nice story man
it has to be some epic battle with the demons(relativley)
or has to have some great twist at the climax of the battle
good ol' mrs polkins
sweet |
| 2012-01-03 05:28:53 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 19 |
wow great story
awesome like ones in the beginning but double
whats gonna happen with gina
how does he defeat the demons
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| 2011-12-19 04:49:43 |
3 Evil Sisters-Part 2 |
good story but kinda cheesy keep em coming |
| 2011-12-16 07:47:59 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 14 |
i think the length of it added to the effect there is the sex but its also a story and you got to it right away with the shortness of it
enter demon ships i love it
finally an encounter
hes gonna whoop their asses right?
are their children okay?
damn good story man |
| 2011-12-09 03:28:53 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 12 |
nice story waiting for the next |
| 2011-12-07 01:13:38 |
childhood friends (revised) chapter 1 |
pretty good, but first time for either of them and there was no cherry popping 8/10 |
| 2011-12-07 01:13:18 |
childhood friends (revised) chapter 1 |
pretty good, but first time for either of them and there was no cherry popping 8/10 |
| 2011-12-06 14:06:53 |
Twin Sisters And Their Best Friend part 2 |
shit it is not supposed to be like that damn it should i repost it a third time to try and get it right
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| 2011-12-06 03:37:53 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 11 |
great cant wait for the next
lela pregnant awesome
and a lesbian sister whoa! |
| 2011-12-05 02:13:07 |
Losing my virginity |
oh ho ho that was a pretty good one a lack of story but great details and descriptions |
| 2011-12-03 21:16:08 |
Daddy Makes Out with my Girlfriend |
nice story i was great |
| 2011-12-03 21:01:31 |
Daddy Makes Out with my Girlfriend |
nice story i was great |
| 2011-11-28 00:17:13 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 08 |
can you give me a few tips on how to write a good erotica story im new at this and want to write a sequel to my story but i dont know how to include the sex into it without it being stunted |
| 2011-11-27 21:18:16 |
The Hottest Senior |
thanks for the tip i noticed that also from reading the other stories |
| 2011-11-27 18:19:22 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 08 |
wow i posted my first story on this last night and then i come across this one and i was just blown away these are awesome you are a great writer i was up late and then first thing i did when i woke is turn on my laptop began reading your other stories the incest thing kinda bugs me but the way its written by you makes it acceptable |