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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-01-11 11:17:20 |
Harry Potter and the Spellbook of Desires - Chapter 40 - The Third Task |
Anonymous reader
2011-10-19 22:57:49
you are the piece of shit. if you read the end he is clearly not stuck for an ending because he is allowing the series to continue.and as you may not have figured out yet because your a brainless PRICK this series has been well thought out since the beginning. to avatrek i say well done sir i was pleasantly surprised by every single twist and turn and enjoyed the series immensely. i implore yo to continue and no listen to the fuckwits that dont realise a) the effort writers put in and b) that just because the story is based upon a real one does notmean it has to be the same and c) that if a writer wants to include a recurring theme in their story they can and nothing they say wills top them
i leave you with this
haters gotta hate
wankers gotta wank but what do potters have to do?? XD |
| 2011-12-28 05:39:42 |
Swim Team Buddies (The Locker Room) |
A very well written Would love to here more
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| 2011-12-22 00:37:14 |
Sav In The Lav |
toall readers
this story was inspiredd by an actual event. it was highly unlikely but actually happened. i went from their adding my own fantasies about this girl. thanks to other authors especially Rebelman for inspiration
their is as of yet no part two as i am yet to be inspired
however feel free to PM me with suggestions and i will pick the best ones and write a new part. if i choose your suggestions you will receive an honourable mention so include your name or an alias. i will not say what you suggested for thensake of privacy.
awaiting your messages
sincerely Horny teenager
Ps ou can PM me through my authors page. just click my nam,e at the top of this comment or the top of the story
thanks |
| 2011-12-21 23:18:12 |
Broken Bliss Ch1 |
my only complaint is that the brother protesting so much is kind of a turn off
other than that a great story
one other thing-there was a lot of "thought"s that were "though"s |
| 2011-11-07 02:40:06 |
My Daughter's Slumber Party |
dear Anonymous reader
2011-11-06 11:39:37
ur are the jack ass
as you may have noticed this story is clearly labelled fiction. this means that it DIDNT HAPPEN.therefore your comments are all redundant. if someone wants to fantasizer about fucking preteen girls then thats fine as long as they dont atc on it. ur justb a lone hater and one of the stupidest peopleon this site. as you ll notice all of the stories with illegal themes are labelled fiction or fantaqsy. thus u arre a fuckhead ur opinion doesnt matter and ur stupid impulsive un thought out illiterate comment simply shows what a fuckhead and jack ass u r. if u don l;ike these stories dontread them. but dot be the coward that hides behind the name of anymous and abuses writers who work very hard to produce these stories for others enjoyment
so in summary go fuck yourself
sincerly
horny teenager |