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| 2013-02-12 04:18:19 |
New In Town: Chapter One |
@Anon
Thanks for the feedback, and I understand where you are coming from on it being quite bare of anything exciting. I intend to remedy that in Chapter Two. This chapter was meant solely for the purpose of introducing characters and marking the beginning of sexual tension between him and Vanessa.
The tags are all things that WILL be included in the series, though I do see where marking all that on every chapter could be frustrating to a guy who is looking for a good story about a husband fucking the babysitter while his wife thinks he is the best thing since sliced bread.
My appologies.
And finally, thank you for the remark about grammar. I suspect that biggest factor in the development of my writting style would be that I am an adult, not a preteen pretending to be grown up. |
| 2013-02-12 03:47:58 |
New In Town: Chapter One |
Please don't forget to comment and rate! Even negative feedback can be constructive!
Keep an eye on my profile for the rest of this story as well as other short stories of varying themes. |
| 2013-02-12 02:06:35 |
Checkmate in Three |
I wish I had an answer for you. Unfortunately, I think the site had a glitch because I am not the only one this happened to.
I have a copy posted in the Forums section of this site, in the Sex Stories forum in a thread called 'Stories By Me'.
Wish I had an easier fix for you guys. |
| 2013-02-10 19:48:02 |
Exploring My Bestfriend |
Unkow:
I do not appreciate this racist intolerant shit hanging out at the bottom of my story. I have reported this for removal. |
| 2013-02-10 19:46:28 |
Checkmate in Three |
Please leave a comment and remember to rate! :D |
| 2011-11-05 01:47:55 |
my sister Carole next part |
Nice story friend, well written if laced with very minor mistakes. Looking forward to the next. |
| 2011-11-03 15:58:21 |
Holly Jolly Christmas |
Thanks Anon, but keep in mind that this is a true story. If you read my other submission, Alarming Sibling, you will see that when I make it up off the top of my head, it is not straight into it. I jumped straight to this part because it was that week we spent together that I wanted to portray, not the teasing we did at work. Thanks for your response though. |
| 2011-11-03 15:30:01 |
Holly Jolly Christmas |
Please don't forget to vote! Love it or hate it, your feedback is much appreciated! ^_^ |
| 2011-11-02 01:14:14 |
Alarming Sibling |
Please don't forget to vote! Love it or hate it, your feedback is much appreciated! ^_^ |