Comments from JasonMarak
|2011-11-02 01:14:14||Alarming Sibling||Please don't forget to vote! Love it or hate it, your feedback is much appreciated! ^_^|
|2011-11-03 15:30:01||Holly Jolly Christmas||Please don't forget to vote! Love it or hate it, your feedback is much appreciated! ^_^|
|2011-11-03 15:58:21||Holly Jolly Christmas||Thanks Anon, but keep in mind that this is a true story. If you read my other submission, Alarming Sibling, you will see that when I make it up off the top of my head, it is not straight into it. I jumped straight to this part because it was that week we spent together that I wanted to portray, not the teasing we did at work. Thanks for your response though.|
|2011-11-05 01:47:55||my sister Carole part 2||Nice story friend, well written if laced with very minor mistakes. Looking forward to the next.|
|2013-12-14 02:06:23||Alarming Sibling||@ Anons:
If I'm being honest, I didn't need to use my imagination for this one.
This actually happened.
So, it WAS a story, and 90% of the voters seem to think it had plenty of spice.
Enjoy the minority, boys.