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Comments from JamesCorboray

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Date Story title Comment
2011-11-23 00:03:24 One Night in Arkham Well, when I wrote it it was on a whim at 4 am nearing Halloween and I wanted to write something scary, but more Lovecraftian scary. Which is why she essentially turned into a deep one.

I'm not too fond of the ending myself, I feel I could have written it better. It's nice to know that you though my story was good though.
2011-11-23 00:17:43 One Night in Arkham Well, when I wrote it it was on a whim at 4 am nearing Halloween and I wanted to write something scary, but more Lovecraftian scary. Which is why she essentially turned into a deep one.

I'm not too fond of the ending myself, I feel I could have written it better. It's nice to know that you though my story was good though.
2012-09-27 19:59:22 Jane's Day I apologize for the poor spacing between paragraphs.. It looked better before I uploaded it to the site.
2012-09-28 15:33:17 Jane's Day The quotation marks as question marks almost made me take the story down after I published it because I was worried that's what it would constantly look like.

I appreciate the tips on the double spacing and hitting enter three times. I understand the pains of trying to read stories with poor spacing. Unfortunately mine ended up as one of those it seems.
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