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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-08-17 10:37:57 |
Spring Break Broke My Heart |
Great story Rutger! Mr. Jack is an asshole and she's a damn whore. I'm so pissed with her! Damn! Bryan deserves revenge!
And I can't see how people are voting neg... That doesn't make sense at all. As always. |
| 2012-08-14 11:00:51 |
The Life Saver |
raineing
2012-08-14 07:05:20
That last comment was mine. Didn't realize I wasn't logged in.
First of all, thanks.
I know the reason she had not to jump is merely fictional and that it's not a reason strong enough to stop someone as depressed as her, or you... Or me, if I hadn't lost mine before my attempts. What made me insist on this was made her suddenly fond of him. Mark was the reason, not necessarily the sex. Anyway, I hope someday you get control over yourself and stop thinking about dying. I managed to do it changing my life absolutely, living with other people, in other place and doing another job. It still haunts me? Yes, but not enough to make me do something stupid as trying suicide again. I wish this luck to you.
Thanks again. |
| 2012-07-26 10:37:03 |
Kidnapped, tortured and raped (1) |
I little more gory that I'm used to, but I loved it. Don't mind about some sucker criticizing it, stupid can't read "Stockholm Syndrome" amongst tags... |
| 2012-07-26 09:41:48 |
The Horror At The Bruja House |
Hot as hell, Steve! But she does remind me of someone... It must be my imagination ;) |
| 2012-07-25 16:15:09 |
The Life Saver |
Lalagrl44
2012-07-25 14:49:50
First of all, thanks for the support ;)
I'm kinda in love with this story myself, so I'm really struggling to think about a sequel that doesn't spoil what I already have - and that's not purely based on sex scenes...
I don't mind about you writing a sequel, as long as you specify that it is an alternative sequel. You can message me for details if you want.
Thanks again! |
| 2012-07-25 08:05:46 |
The Life Saver |
Anonymous reader
2012-07-24 16:31:00
That...was...Legend...wait-for-it...DARY!!!!!! Loved it!!!!
"Kids, in the summer of 2012 I loved a comment" lol
Thanks! |
| 2012-07-21 14:40:00 |
The Life Saver |
came2blieve
2012-07-21 13:06:29
Thanks. I'm a depressive person myself, so I just changed a little the point of view, as I'm not her. But let's just say I'm very experienced on the whole subject this story approaches. I plan on using both characters in another story, but not as a direct sequel. |
| 2012-07-14 08:46:27 |
The Life Saver |
And just to clarify, there is no plot to go on, as I made it to be a one part story. |
| 2012-07-14 08:44:29 |
The Life Saver |
Anonymous reader
2012-07-14 03:39:17
First, I shouldn't be answering someone who comment as Anonymous, as your lack of honesty bothers me and I shouldn't be considering what you say. I'm not new at it, I learned english by myself and I'm not good at it. I dare you to write in portuguese, using a lot less words than you have in your normal vocabulary, then you tell me. Thanks for the comment anyway.
Lilith04 |
| 2012-06-24 07:15:40 |
The Little One - Chapters I & II |
Thanks for the comments guys. I don't know what happened to the formating, so I'll figure what happened and post it again fixing that bunch of number that pop every paragraph. |
| 2012-06-20 08:28:56 |
The Midnight Shade |
Oh my gosh, that was good! Reading the second one for sure! |
| 2012-05-24 10:28:32 |
Michelle Part 2 |
Another great installment, I loved it! I'm reading the others for sure. I've never read a story that made me actually be on her place, damn... Thanks for sharing this! |
| 2012-05-22 09:40:48 |
MIchelle Part 1 |
Awesome! And I know I have 5 other parts to read, that's great! Just my kind of thing. |
| 2012-03-20 11:04:16 |
Verde County |
Hi, White Hat. Loved the story and it really seemed like a girl was telling the story, except for some little details you avoided to describe but they did nothing to lessen the reality on it. Great job, really hot almost consensual rape =) |
| 2012-03-05 13:41:17 |
Cheer Squad Abducted |
Awesome story! Please, write part two no matter what people say. They're not aware that we don't wish this to happen with another girls, just enjoy a lot the creepy and scary sensation it brings to read this kind of fantasy. |
| 2012-02-13 07:49:54 |
Different Love - Part II |
The third part is half way done but I stopped writing for a while. I'm posting Night Skies Part II tomorrow or wednesday, then I'll be back to this story. Please be patient, it will take a while but I'll post the sequel for sure. |
| 2012-01-18 09:53:50 |
Katie's dress is too small (corrected) |
Hot story! Very well written too. |
| 2012-01-16 09:12:59 |
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Oh my... The story I liked the most so far! I love it.
Thanks for writing it Glacialis. |
| 2012-01-12 08:44:48 |
Different Love - Part II |
Hi! Thanks for all your comments.
As for Part III, I'm kinda stuck writing Night Skies - Part II, so I'll start writing Different Love - Part III this friday and next week, probably monday or tuesday I'll post it, but I can't say exactly.
Lilith |
| 2012-01-09 12:01:44 |
Santa's Perverted Helper ( or Susie Learns What Happens To Naughty Girls ) |
I loved it! Sweet story!
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| 2012-01-04 14:27:40 |
The Dragons' Pet Part 2: Spawn |
Damn it feels weird to read it, but I'm loving this story!
(God, let her have a bath somehow... I'm itching here!) |
| 2012-01-04 12:39:20 |
The Dragons' Pet Part 1: Taken |
God Dammit! The guy warned at the first paragraph that it wasn't meant to be read by people who doesn't stand rape stories, why the hell people insist discussing about it here?
I loved the story, just wanted some spaces between paragraphs, it's really hard to read the way it is. And I loved to see S&M and Stockholm tagged at the third part of the story, it means she'll start to enjoy it. Cool! Positive rate buddy! |
| 2012-01-02 06:19:18 |
Night Skies |
Don't worry, I'm already doing that in my new texts. I was still getting used with this board and the way it ignores all my accents ¬¬
Sorry about these text blocks... Next will be easier to read. Thanks for the comment! |
| 2011-12-30 09:52:45 |
Night Skies |
Hi! Sorry, I was working in another story. I'll work on the second part and I'll post it next week, ok? Thanks for your comments! |
| 2011-12-29 10:22:23 |
Different Love |
Hi guys. Yes, there will be a part two, it's been hard to write because I'm vacationing but I'm finishing it today and I'll probably post it tomorrow. Thanks for the votes, comments and support.
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| 2011-12-20 18:09:53 |
Night Skies |
I know, no offense taken. I'm a brazilian girl that never lived abroad and barely took an english course... My grammar should really suck. But I love writing and I'm trying to improve faster I can. Thanks for the comment anyway. |
| 2011-11-27 20:55:28 |
Night Skies |
Actually he really is an alien. It'll be explained at part 2, if I feel confident enough to do it. Sorry about this rushed end. I thought that some suspense should be a good idea... Guess I'm wrong. |
| 2011-11-01 10:52:20 |
The Immortal Kiss |
My God!!!
At first I got pissed by the unecessary number of themes, but soon as I kept reading...
I loved it! Please make a second part, pleeeeease! |
| 2011-10-31 13:26:13 |
Megan and the Monster |
Oh my God, I loved it! I went all wet before the middle... Great job! |