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| 2012-03-10 08:06:05 |
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Thanks FJ & everyone. So great to have this support.
'Speeded' is correct btw, interchangeable with 'sped' ;). |
| 2012-03-06 10:02:11 |
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Thanks for your great comments everyone! Yeah that's happened to me meforyou, makes you so cross! |
| 2012-03-05 17:22:07 |
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There is a longer version now, you can find it through my yellow profile link at the top of the page.
It's called The Schoolgirl Thighs Trilogy. |
| 2012-03-05 17:07:33 |
THE LUCKY BABYSITTER: Part 3 Losing the Cherry |
Lovely sexy story! Very hot and sweet sex. |
| 2012-02-23 09:37:31 |
My Best Studies Ever part 2 |
Haha, fun and sexy story! Loved it! |
| 2012-02-20 15:56:08 |
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CAW stands for Calling All Writers; it's a competition run in the Forum. Writers write within a given theme and then members vote and the story with most votes wins.. We put CAW in the title to make it an official entry. The theme for CAW 10 is The Best.something. |
| 2012-02-20 02:27:55 |
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Personkind is what Mankind would become if we were all hermaphrodites with no Men :). |
| 2012-02-17 16:59:00 |
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Thanks for that great comment Cuddles. And to you too xtreme, Hcb and Snow :) |
| 2012-02-16 16:31:11 |
CAW 10 - The Banger Sisters |
Very nice story! Love the theme!! |
| 2012-02-15 12:53:51 |
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You can read my later stories using my yellow AngelEyes15 profile link at the top of the page :) |
| 2012-02-12 16:13:11 |
CAW 10 *The Best Decision I Made* |
Nice story! I really enjoyed it. |
| 2012-02-12 12:55:19 |
Our Best Summer - CAW 10 |
Wow that is so emotional! What a trip! Fantastic love story. |
| 2012-02-05 04:39:39 |
To dream of dragons |
Wonderful again, so imaginative and with terrific imagery! |
| 2012-02-04 07:25:51 |
Dr. Visit Part#2 |
Fabulous!! This is just top quality, concentrated sex !! |
| 2012-02-04 07:20:45 |
Doctor visit |
Wow totally fantastic, erotic and s e x y !!! |
| 2012-01-29 18:30:23 |
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There is a further chapter, you can use my yellow profile link at the top of the page to see it :) |
| 2012-01-29 18:27:14 |
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There are further chapters, you can use my yellow profile link at the top of the page to see them :) |
| 2012-01-29 11:15:41 |
Cat girl Charity - final revelations |
Another wonderful chapter with great imagery and presence! Quite exciting as well!! Terrific. |
| 2012-01-23 02:21:46 |
The Girl Of My Dreams |
Lol nice ending to a very nice, affectionate story. |
| 2012-01-21 18:54:01 |
Casey goes to Miami Beach Part#2 |
Fantastic, hotter than hot!! Part 3 NOW!!! lol |
| 2012-01-21 18:41:33 |
Casey goes to Miami Beach Part#1 |
WOW fabulous!! Have to rush and read pt2 now... |
| 2012-01-21 18:14:02 |
Bus Ride |
Wow super hot story!! I really liked the way you told it, the little preview and all the detail. |
| 2012-01-21 16:41:55 |
Cat girl Charity - Hidden games |
Beautifully creative story. And with that foreboding at the end, can't wait for the next chapter. |
| 2012-01-20 16:24:52 |
Caught You Looking Chapter 2 |
Great writing! Avoided the bro-sis cliche (hence probably the idiot negative lol) and kept the plot going right into the HOT sex. Terrific. |
| 2012-01-20 02:58:19 |
Who Fucked Angie McGee? |
Very nice writing! For me the title gave it all away though!! A bit shorter would've worked better for me as well I think. Nice story anyway, thank you. |
| 2012-01-14 16:27:15 |
Cat girl Charity - Transitions (part 2) |
Great fun and so stylish! |
| 2012-01-11 08:59:42 |
Cat girl Charity - Transitions part 1 |
Great imagery and so descriptive, brilliant! |
| 2012-01-08 05:47:26 |
Lucy the Zookeeper |
Great fun!! Thank you :) |
| 2012-01-04 15:33:26 |
The Dragons' Pet Part 1: Taken |
Not sex is it? It's pain and damage, the entire page in loving detail.. Obviously therapeutic for the sad and damaged person who wrote it. Keep writing and stay off the streets. |
| 2012-01-02 16:30:11 |
Cat girl Charity - of interrupted love |
Terrific tale again, really creative! I love all the hands too, that's so sensual. |
| 2011-12-29 06:00:57 |
Cat girl Charity - A personal invitation to dance |
Awesome poetic writing again! So sensuous, and just that bit challenging. Wonderful. |
| 2011-12-28 11:33:50 |
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Thanks for the comments! There are more chapters in this series, you can get to them with my profile link at the top of the page :) |
| 2011-12-27 06:02:27 |
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Thanks for the encouragement everyone!!
Yes there are some later chapters now, thanks to you, you can get to them using my profile link at the top of the page. |
| 2011-12-25 16:29:19 |
Leah's Self Bondage in the Woods |
The tension is terrific! And the writing is so good I was thinking all the way through 'she actually did this LOL!' |
| 2011-12-24 02:32:47 |
Caught You Looking |
Like it! Hot story with great pace and tension, and nice ending too. |
| 2011-12-23 05:43:04 |
Shooter Bitch |
I liked this story :) |
| 2011-12-22 15:34:01 |
Cat girl Charity "The fox and lion" |
Fabulous story, worth reading several times! |
| 2011-12-17 18:00:48 |
Cat girl Charity - the beginning. |
Fabulous, fabulous writing!!!! |
| 2011-12-16 17:15:18 |
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Fantastic story, such a twist! |
| 2011-12-16 16:48:07 |
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Totally fabulous writing!!! |
| 2011-12-08 02:42:47 |
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I might do part 3 :) |
| 2011-12-05 07:16:44 |
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Thanks so much for your nice comments everyone, especially all you great writers that really makes me feel like trying some more!! |
| 2011-12-01 16:28:53 |
bondage surprise 3 |
Good fun thank you :) More to come? |
| 2011-11-26 10:11:21 |
Rich Sado Girl 2 |
Hehehe, fantastic!!!!
More PLEASE :)
But keep Rose in charge, definitely. I will hate it if the man ends up on top. |
| 2011-11-23 12:57:07 |
Into The Depths Of Madness |
Sorry the girl being raped to death because she worn skimpy clothing is pure shit. By college friends yeh sure. And as for the instant love that doesn't work either, kind eyes of the mass killer @@. |
| 2011-11-23 03:47:23 |
She's a Runner, Rebel, & a Stunner: Chapter One (Edited) |
Different feel from the first one, doesn't work as well for me :(
Only me I expect but bored by another brother/sister story, and the old hairbrush start was fun, then w Carolina I was really looking forward to some girlie action :)
Also I just ask if dad is sooo uptight would he really pull the cover off and be talking about it, + telling her bro? For me if he's uptight he has to just catch her OR if he pulls the cover off (which I love!! It nearly happened to me!) then he has to be a perv/fun guy subconsciously wanting her. And now it doesn't lead so much one thing to the next.
Still think your style is great and want you to keep writing so I voted it ;) |
| 2011-11-22 12:23:08 |
She's a Runner, Rebel, & a Stunner: Chapter One |
Well I voted it as it starts so well but it's not joined up is it? The bit being caught by daddy is so real & great writing, it's a waste to go to a vampire fantasy. And the end needs to follow from the beginning so being chucked out leads to something that wouldn't happen otherwise plus something that'd only happen between 2 sex-mad girls :))
Too short obviously I expect you know.
REALLY hope you keep writing as you're so sexy with it just get your plot together babe :) xx |
| 2011-11-22 05:11:30 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 03 |
A 'wet pussy' switch?? Itch switch?? Too many, too easy. Now you have plenty of positives it's time to make a bit of room :)
As for Mr self-rating RJX tuffest critic - wowee @@ lol |
| 2011-11-22 04:36:30 |
Violated |
It was nearly great but you needed to explain Wade's change and the gunk thing. It's like the @@@ is where you shoved 2 different stories together.
Hope you write more but get organised first :) |
| 2011-11-21 06:47:05 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 02 |
it's not a bad story just a bit fake with the switches i think, n the sex not ALL that sexy is it, time to take it off 100% anyway as you have others :) |
| 2011-11-14 12:22:08 |
The Girls' Family Gains a New Member |
Wow I so need Sara and Natasha!
Such a lovely story :) |
| 2011-11-13 16:48:51 |
I am the Puppet MAter Chapter One: Coin Operated Girl |
Why? You anwered your own question. I don't think its art sorry |
| 2011-11-12 05:23:48 |
{cove} - 1 |
Great start, love the atmosphere |
| 2011-11-11 03:42:35 |
The Egocentric King - Part one |
is this spam? not very sexy anyway sorry, and language is a bit weird |
| 2011-11-08 15:49:45 |
Vanish |
wow, what a great story
where have the negatives come from??
+ from me anyway :-) |
| 2011-11-08 09:30:49 |
I am the Puppet MAter Chapter One: Coin Operated Girl |
have to agree the lead character is not likeable enough/at all
and just another mind control story with no limits, it's too easy and not interesting
typical boy's story really!! |
| 2011-11-05 17:13:55 |
The Weekend Dinner |
have to agree it's not very interesting and the writing is dull too |
| 2011-11-03 05:58:23 |
Bait and Switch Ch. 01 |
it gets too easy with all the switches just inventing them so he can do anything at all. then surprise surprise the bully has a tiny dick and the hero has a giant one.
so for me it started really great but i lost it as it went on. |
| 2011-11-02 04:52:34 |
Holiday in the South of France |
very nice story :)
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| 2011-11-02 03:48:16 |
Teen Lovers |
it's not really a story tbh
i don't think it's interesting enough to continue, personally, sorry
even the sharing a bedroom - not really likely to be allowed is it? |
| 2011-11-02 03:19:46 |
My Daughter's Slumber Party Part 2: My Little Fuck-Slaves (unfortunate repost) |
it's shit sorry. the girls liked that? oh yeah
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| 2011-11-01 11:06:52 |
Sibling Rivalry - Coping with Retirement Ch5 |
i did prefer it with ravishing tbh but i still love it!! |
| 2011-10-31 12:24:28 |
gang slut |
i think there needs to be a reason why she's the gang slut and doesn't just go back to the farm
otherwise it's like a load of nasty things happening just for the sake of it |
| 2011-10-30 17:15:51 |
Discovering myself |
Nice story i love the emotions.
For me i'd have preferred it with affection/attraction/sexiness more than Love but really enjoyed it :) |
| 2011-10-29 18:50:52 |
Lights Out |
Good writing nice story! |
| 2011-10-28 05:01:15 |
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anyone who thinks this is a rape story needs to go back to school!
vicki starts off where she's a jealous bitch and nobody likes her, then by the end she's one of them and she belongs and she thinks they're sexy even Lettie that she's so jealous of. Lettie accepts her too into the group that's what the last line means.
there are bits all the way through about it.
some of you need english reading lessons honestly! |
| 2011-10-20 09:04:45 |
Coping with Retirement Ch4 - Lettie's Brother |
Sexy story! Think Ill try a nice boy like that : ) |
| 2011-10-18 12:26:18 |
This Little Piggy in a Pen |
Wow amazing writing!! |
| 2011-10-18 05:41:18 |
Gang rape for fun and profit |
not very sexy is it, just like he did this he did that |