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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-01-02 20:40:51 |
Marie's Christmas |
This was a true compliment to the original story. Well-written, good formatting, nice flow and filled with holiday magic. |
| 2012-10-22 21:51:39 |
Unknown Presence - The Vessel |
Very very creepy. I sometimes knew what would happen, and then you turned it around and surprised me. Good job. |
| 2012-10-22 21:49:13 |
CAW13 - Pimp's Revenge |
Extreme. That's the word I think of when I read this. Extreme. Good luck with the CAW. |
| 2012-10-22 21:32:19 |
Angela |
Loved your characters and the way you lead us to believe one thing throughout the story. Then ending gave me chills. Nice pace and really well written. |
| 2012-10-22 21:29:59 |
Chili, Booze, Nightmares, and the Girl Next Door |
Very creepy and a great Halloween story. If I had one criticism, it's that it read like you were writing for the male audience. There's nothing wrong with that - after all, you appear to be male. |
| 2012-10-22 21:24:48 |
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I've never played D&D, but your story made it fairly easy to understand. Your descriptions helped me to visualize every scene. Great story. |
| 2012-10-22 21:14:46 |
Sister Catherine's Nighmare CAW 13 |
Wonderfully written even if it was very violent. I really enjoyed your character. |
| 2012-08-26 17:36:35 |
I AM NUMBER 69 (CAW 12 Entry) |
I think you captured the fantasy of so many women. Good job. |
| 2012-08-26 17:29:05 |
SEX FORMULA 69 |
It was nice to see you put your personal stamp on this story. Great job! |
| 2012-08-26 17:27:57 |
Tristane of Eloise |
A great addition to your Cookie series. |
| 2012-08-26 17:23:40 |
The Wolves of Paris. |
I love history so this was a great read for me - not to mention your flawless writing. Just wonderful.
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| 2011-11-20 20:24:32 |
Amanda's Story: The Date |
I'm sorry, but your lack of mojo showed. |
| 2011-11-20 20:23:21 |
Young Indy Jones & the Gift of Wet Pussies |
I just love your stories - thank you. |
| 2011-11-20 20:21:34 |
Amanda's Story |
A bit disappointing. |