||This was a true compliment to the original story. Well-written, good formatting, nice flow and filled with holiday magic.
||Unknown Presence - The Vessel
||Very very creepy. I sometimes knew what would happen, and then you turned it around and surprised me. Good job.
||CAW13 - Pimp's Revenge
||Extreme. That's the word I think of when I read this. Extreme. Good luck with the CAW.
||Loved your characters and the way you lead us to believe one thing throughout the story. Then ending gave me chills. Nice pace and really well written.
||Chili, Booze, Nightmares, and the Girl Next Door
||Very creepy and a great Halloween story. If I had one criticism, it's that it read like you were writing for the male audience. There's nothing wrong with that - after all, you appear to be male.
||I've never played D&D, but your story made it fairly easy to understand. Your descriptions helped me to visualize every scene. Great story.
||Sister Catherine's Nighmare CAW 13
||Wonderfully written even if it was very violent. I really enjoyed your character.
||I AM NUMBER 69 (CAW 12 Entry)
||I think you captured the fantasy of so many women. Good job.
||SEX FORMULA 69
||It was nice to see you put your personal stamp on this story. Great job!
||Tristane of Eloise
||A great addition to your Cookie series.
||The Wolves of Paris.
||I love history so this was a great read for me - not to mention your flawless writing. Just wonderful.
||Amanda's Story: The Date
||I'm sorry, but your lack of mojo showed.
||Young Indy Jones & the Gift of Wet Pussies
||I just love your stories - thank you.
||A bit disappointing.