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| 2011-10-18 15:03:56 |
STAINED MEMORABILIA |
Good story; the characters come off as being older than what they are written, but that's okay I still liked it. |
| 2011-10-12 15:36:05 |
Twin Lover |
Loved it. Great writting my friend. Can't wait for part two. |
| 2011-10-11 13:56:43 |
Moms Kids 3 |
By far one of the best stories ever. |
| 2011-10-03 01:48:33 |
Hole in the Wall, Chapter 3 |
Great chapter; keep them coming. |
| 2011-10-02 04:11:05 |
Hole in the Wall, Chapter 2 |
Good story. Wished it was a little longer but great nontheless. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| 2011-09-30 00:12:54 |
I love my son Danile (edited repost) |
Thank you. Now that you mention it he does act a bit younger than he actually is. Love the constructive criticism. :D |
| 2011-09-29 21:56:43 |
Moms helping out. |
I like the story line but there's no character build up of any kind. I would add that and some more details next story. Again great story line. |
| 2011-09-29 19:43:25 |
I love my son Daniel |
Chapter 2 and edited Chapter one will be up tonight. |
| 2011-09-29 14:13:42 |
I love my son Daniel |
Thanks everyone. I will get Chapter 2 out ASAP and edit and repost this one. |
| 2011-09-29 02:08:45 |
I Did My Brother II |
I love your stories, one of the best around. Just one suggestion though. I would stop using the same charcter names in your stories. |