Comments from raleighwolf

Date Story title Comment
2011-09-16 20:13:50 Elle's Revenge 2 Can't wait for chapter 3! try adding more detail and more substance though.
2011-09-23 10:23:04 Earning the Afternoon have the son get his mom pregnant and give birth to a daughter, then when she is a teen have dad play with her
2011-10-26 12:07:55 LONG WINTER WEEKEND WITH THE GIRLS – Part 2 I thought all the chanting was retarded and the way they manipulated her using their love was rather pedophilia and disturbing but otherwise it was well written and a good story.
2011-11-03 10:13:19 Camped out in the back Field hey anonymous reader! Fuck off! If you can't handle reading this, then go back to your boring missionary sex world and stop being a hater!
2011-11-03 10:16:00 Camped out in the back Field suggestion for next chapter? have it so his wife doesn't leave when they come and have Claire sneak in to eat his wife's pussy while she is asleep and turn her into Claire's fuck slave!