Comments from BestFriend(:
|2014-04-20 05:00:10||My Best Friend, Derek.||Dear Luvsalik,
This is from 2011, and was one of my first stories on this site. That is why I am in the midst of redoing it- to be frank this one feels like a 13 year old wrote it. That is not how I want my writing to be represented, so I am rewriting in right now. Oh, Ollie.. Is the redo of Ollie... Which I have taken down. My Brother is the redo of My Brother and Me, which also felt the same way. I am going through an redoing all of my stories.
Thanks for saying you like my writing style! I have grown since this work, and will continue to write for people like you! Your comment made my day.
I hope you completely understand why this writing feels different from my current one.
|2011-08-16 14:09:43||Sharing Jack's Bed: Part 1||Hey, this is really gr8. One of the best stories i've read.|
|2011-08-16 14:10:59||Sharing Jack's Bed: Part 2||I love this story. Keep up the writing ok?
|2011-08-16 14:20:03||Sharing Jack's Bed: Part 3||This was the best I've read so far keep it up!!! ;)|
|2011-08-16 14:29:31||Sharing Jack's Bed: Part 4||This series is great! Please write another part soon!!!|