||Angela and Bruiser
||It's been my experience (& I've been into bdsm & beastiality a l o n g time) that women who are into dogs are also deeply into bdsm and submission. You might consider that with your next storie.
||SIGMA LAMBDA ALPHA PHI
||Not just good. DAMNED good!!
||Melissas Tribulation part II
||Great job! Only next time, be a lot harsher and more degrading.
||Ended too soon, and did not go far enough.
||Perfect Wife - Diary of a bad time
||Learn something about human child birth. Twins don't have 2 fathers.
||The Abduction of Selah
||Please don't continue. You had a good thing going until you decided to turn it into a snuff story.
||Raping The Office Tease
||A lot better than 50% of this other crap.
||Useless Fuck Slut, Part 2
||Where's part 2? The other guys? The other girl? The dogs?
||Message #2. Apparently the quotation mark in the torure section doesn't know what it's suppose to do or where it's suppose to go. Their bad - not mine!
||Good work, but it's listed in the "torture" section. And I wouldn't call any of it "torture".
||Breaking Sarah's Will with my Friends Help, Part I - ReCut
||I hope you got enough responses (good ones) to pick up where you left off. Any story with a beginning like that can go as far as you want it to.
||Cock Whore Gets What She Wants
||Cock Whore Gets What She Wants - great stuff!!! Next time make it 2 guys. firstname.lastname@example.org
||Writers Block 2
||Good work on both "Writers block". Particularly wanted to thank you for saving her in the end. There's too many "snuff" stories out there already. Glad yours wasn't.
||A new life begins (Edited and Revised)
||good job. if you continue it, bring in another dog and a woman.
||Cheer Squad Abducted
||You've got a hell of a story going - why not continue it?
||Sister's Fate - Emily's Ordeal
||I gave you a good mark. you deserved it. But let me make one point. Teenaged girls can't do crap with a horse dick. But they CAN suck and fuck the shit out of dogs and goats.