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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-07-30 10:35:25 |
Angela and Bruiser |
It's been my experience (& I've been into bdsm & beastiality a l o n g time) that women who are into dogs are also deeply into bdsm and submission. You might consider that with your next storie. |
| 2011-09-19 01:13:06 |
SIGMA LAMBDA ALPHA PHI |
Not just good. DAMNED good!! |
| 2011-09-16 04:36:20 |
Melissas Tribulation part II |
Great job! Only next time, be a lot harsher and more degrading. |
| 2011-09-16 01:48:34 |
Bachelor bait |
Ended too soon, and did not go far enough. |
| 2011-09-16 00:06:13 |
Perfect Wife - Diary of a bad time |
Learn something about human child birth. Twins don't have 2 fathers. |
| 2011-09-15 21:37:58 |
The Abduction of Selah |
Please don't continue. You had a good thing going until you decided to turn it into a snuff story. |
| 2011-09-15 21:08:34 |
Raping The Office Tease |
A lot better than 50% of this other crap. |
| 2011-09-14 00:28:54 |
Useless Fuck Slut, Part 2 |
Where's part 2? The other guys? The other girl? The dogs? |
| 2011-09-13 23:01:16 |
Kidnapped |
Message #2. Apparently the quotation mark in the torure section doesn't know what it's suppose to do or where it's suppose to go. Their bad - not mine! |
| 2011-09-13 22:51:09 |
Kidnapped |
Good work, but it's listed in the "torture" section. And I wouldn't call any of it "torture". |
| 2011-09-13 21:05:48 |
Breaking Sarah's Will with my Friends Help, Part I - ReCut |
I hope you got enough responses (good ones) to pick up where you left off. Any story with a beginning like that can go as far as you want it to. |
| 2011-08-17 06:03:14 |
Cock Whore Gets What She Wants |
Cock Whore Gets What She Wants - great stuff!!! Next time make it 2 guys. bcjd.coolbreed.1@gmail.com |
| 2011-08-12 08:59:49 |
Writers Block 2 |
Good work on both "Writers block". Particularly wanted to thank you for saving her in the end. There's too many "snuff" stories out there already. Glad yours wasn't. |
| 2011-08-12 06:19:45 |
A new life begins (Edited and Revised) |
good job. if you continue it, bring in another dog and a woman. |
| 2011-08-11 02:53:42 |
Cheer Squad Abducted |
You've got a hell of a story going - why not continue it? |
| 2011-08-10 03:22:09 |
Sister's Fate - Emily's Ordeal |
I gave you a good mark. you deserved it. But let me make one point. Teenaged girls can't do crap with a horse dick. But they CAN suck and fuck the shit out of dogs and goats. |