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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-08-08 09:57:00 |
Mom Needs Son's Help, Ch. 2 |
I'm gunna have to agree with 2012-08-08 05:21:05, the best stories I've read on this site. Look forward to more. BTW, I hope its not too weird getting yourself off to your own stories. I've been doing it long before I ever found XNXX and started posting. Hell, that's why I started writing such stories |
| 2012-08-03 09:41:25 |
Sexting Mom, Ch. 3 |
I think I see where you're goin with this. One drink my ass. I love it when a story does this to ya. I'm literally on the edge of my seat...And thats not just so I can get my hand deeper down my pants either... Love your work. |
| 2012-08-02 12:49:08 |
Sexting Mom, Ch. 2 |
Wow!!!!! Turned me on like a thousand watt bulb. I'm not sure my heart can take this kind of current. |
| 2012-08-02 11:59:27 |
Sexting Mom, Ch. 1 |
People write and ask why I write incest stories. YOUR story is why. I love that inner turmoil that says... DON'T...You shouldn't...You can't...but the lust and desire is just too overwhelming. Loved your story. I'm gunna move right on the ch. 2. Thanks |
| 2012-03-16 20:00:23 |
A Reasonable Deal (Pt. 2) |
2012-01-06 12:28:24 was a little harsh. It never ceases to amaze me that a person can log-on to a site such as this
a site that offers an array of stories ranging from jerking-off your horse to fucking dead people, and STILL manage to get offended by something they read. In my opinion, there is no doubt, a conflict going on inside Bianca. Her feelings are getting in the way of her morals. Of course she feels bad, she wants to stay faithful to her husband
And good for her
but sometimes, deeper feelings prevail. Lust can be a hard pony to ride. And, (For ME) that makes for a really good tale. For MY taste, shell never feel bad enough to consider Taping the kid, and again
Good for her. I liked the story and I liked your response to the anonymous reader I mentioned above. Ill get to the third part as soon as Im done here.
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| 2012-03-16 13:06:17 |
I Did My Brother |
I like the word "Coochie". (My daughter's word by-the-way. There's no story there) I think it's kind of a sweet name for a pussy. I don't hardly ever use the "C" word...unless referencing my ex-wife. |
| 2012-03-16 13:00:53 |
I Did My Brother |
For 2012-03-03 20:14:00...
Dude, lighten up. Less coffee...More weed...Something! I just do this for fun. It's not my life's work. I have a hard time believing that a GOOD EDITOR would want to waist any of his time making sure that I spelled "Fuck" right or that I've led into the next orgasm correctly. Sorry I offended you.
By-the-way...Looking forward to reading some of your "work" on this site. You know the old saying; "Those who can...do, those who can't...just bitch about it" Be good. |
| 2012-02-14 20:46:42 |
Mom's Kids 4 |
To 2012-02-1201:56:33...My name is Jay. My mother was a very attractive woman well through her 40s and into her 50s. Although there was a time that I certainly would have considered a lustful union, had she initiated it, that day is long gone now. Shes 79 years old. You seem a little acidic
Hope you're not reading palms for a living. |
| 2011-12-22 16:04:19 |
Peeping Tom 2 |
Kinkybitch, There's no story that I know of like this. As I mentioned at the start of Peep 1, A reader wrote me and gave me the guide lines and asked if I'd write it for um. Fact is...I don't think I would have ever come up with the idea by myself. |
| 2011-12-19 21:50:33 |
Peeping Tom |
Sorry it took so long for part two. It was one of those rare times that I went one way...scrapped it...and then went another. 14 TIMES! I finished it a little while ago. I'll try to get it proof read and posted tomorrow. For those of you that were waiting for the next chapter...Thanks (I could tell the guy below me was getting a little...anxious. Sorry) |
| 2011-11-26 09:52:00 |
Moms Kids 3 |
Take it easy! I don't want you to slip and bust your ass. There IS a part 4. I'm playing around with three diff. stories at the same time. I'll try to get it out soon. |
| 2011-11-20 09:09:34 |
Jeanie's Big Boy |
58:38
I know. Drove me crazy too. Someone suggested I post from Wordpad and when I did, that seemed to make it a lot better. Another friend told me to post in a diff font... Times New Roman I think...I'll give that a try too. I think if you can fly the space shuttle with a computer damn-near the size of my dick...Well...It seems this posting thing shouldn't really be a big problem, ya know? |
| 2011-11-01 21:09:38 |
Peeping Tom |
I can't take credit for the plot. -countryfine69- gave me the ball and pointed towards where I had to go...I just ran with it. |
| 2011-10-10 11:07:03 |
My Son and I almost caught. |
Stumbled upon you, read a story and then started reading them all. They really
Move
me. (The true ones even more) I have no problem believing the true stories are indeed true. Regardless
Theyre hot. And isnt that what we all read them for? Im a firm believer that ANYTHING you write about (Fiction, nonfiction, truth, or fantasy) there is someone
somewhere
that has tried it, does it, or wants to. Shawnababy, please keep doing what you do
and write about it. |
| 2011-10-09 08:50:01 |
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Dislexia? I don't see it. I loved this story. Second time I've read it. It made me jump right up to your story list to read what else ya got. |
| 2011-10-04 21:05:32 |
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Rachael, Great...Loved it. Loved it TOO much...Made me feel like was almost doing something wrong...Felt good. Great story...and you told it well. Thanks |
| 2011-09-22 13:10:11 |
Mom's Kids I |
To 2011-09-22 02-45-16,
Grammar has very little to do with my writing as some of you have so nicely pointed out. People dont always use
good grammar
when theyre just talking to other people. When YOU tell one of your mates what another of your mates had told YOU
..Do you fix the grammar while passing it alone? I hope not. Its just the way I talk
The way I write. I truly apologize to you
and anybuddy
it offends. Im just tryin to write some hot stories and have some fun doin it; stories that
I
like and hope others might as well.
Simple. |
| 2011-09-18 11:43:28 |
Earning the Afternoon |
I loved it. Theres something about a character having to be convened of what they really want. Hearing her giving in to the forbidden lust little by little was hot
Really hot. You could have drug that out for another hundred pages or so and I would have kept reading into the wee hours of the night. Thanks. Im gunna hit some more of your stories now. |
| 2011-09-03 15:54:43 |
Mom's Insecurities |
There is a Mom's Insecurities II that I posed but I'm an idiot and didn't have the II on it. Sorry! |
| 2011-08-19 12:53:48 |
Caught IV |
I keep reading comments on a lot of stories about getting everyone (moms/sisters/grandma/ and whatever else you can stick a dick into) pregnant. What's up with that??? |
| 2011-08-18 11:44:23 |
Caught II |
She doesn't always cal him Bobby.
She calls him 'Robert' when she's trying to sound all pissed off...
And 'Bobby' when she's trying to sound more...motherly...nice.
I thought that might help show her conflict a little better.
Thanks for responding by the way. |
| 2011-08-15 23:43:58 |
Caught IV |
Ouch. That was pretty harsh. I know Im apparently an idiot, but I find it a little odd {Maybe even ignorant} that you would consider the mistake a result of my poor education rather than a typing error. I get the feeling you used to take lunch money from idiots like me in grammar school. I gotta go, gotta put a band-aid on that new asshole you just ripped me.
Jacks first cousin
Good one.
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| 2011-08-15 13:33:19 |
Caught IV |
Sorry about that whole Bobby/Brian thing. In my defense; when you only have a few active brain cells, you tend to prioritize what you hold on too and what you just let float around. I cant afford to lose something important
Name-Address-Names of my kids, that sort of thing. As soon as I figure out how to fix those mistakes, Ill get right on it. Again-Sorry. |
| 2011-08-15 00:12:34 |
Caught IV |
It seems a lot of people get into the anal...so-to-speak. I can tell that Brian and his mom are heading that way. |
| 2011-08-14 23:42:52 |
Really? My dad? |
Wow! In my stories it would take 22 chapters before I got to any ass licking. You jumped right in ther so-to-speak. Good for you.
The story was hot! For me, the fact that its true and written by a Lady seems to somehow make it even hotter. I really like that youre so OK with the whole incest thing. Not just OK
but the aggressor for Christ's sake. It sounds like you really enjoyed the whole experience and Im happy for you. Had it gone the other way for you
Well
it would have really bummed me out. Good story. Im off to read the sequel.
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| 2011-08-14 13:27:29 |
Ask Me |
This is in response to- [Ga-head may be the way you talk but it is not the way everybody in your story would talk.]
You're right. I'll keep that in mind. In my defence...Everyone in MY family torks like that but that might just be a New York thing.
I'll try to pay more attention. Thanks... |
| 2011-08-14 13:13:22 |
Caught III |
I didn't realise Jersey had it's own style. I grew up in Jersey. You're freakin me out a little. I'm going outside now to see if you're peeking in my window |
| 2011-08-13 11:54:59 |
Mom's Insecurities |
Thanks. I enjoy the build up as well. For me...it tends to make a story more believable, more possible. Sometimes its nice to know peoples motorvations. I like the romance too although sometimes its hard to relate it to incest or just plain lust.
And by the way.......I like the word Coochie too. It's a prettier, more delicate word. Way better than Cunt! I try not to use that word unless referencing my Ex. wife. {And NO, I'm not bitter.} |
| 2011-08-11 19:53:12 |
Blackmail II |
You're right. I could have sworn I'd deleted that last line.
And for the other guy...The mom has to do the kid to but his silence. Should have taken for time on both stories. Thanks for the help. |
| 2011-08-10 18:27:33 |
Vacation For Two - Friday |
I really liked it. It flowed nicely, an easy, believable read. It made me want a little sister. |
| 2011-08-10 11:10:49 |
Obsession |
Sorry about all the ―'s. It has nothing to do with proof reading. The system puts them there. Why would anybody just put something like that in a story on purpose? What do you think...It's some kind of code. & FYI...I don't do this stuff because I want to be a "Writer". I don't consider this a stepping-stone to greatness. I do it for fun!
Hope that didn't come off too harsh... |
| 2011-08-09 22:45:29 |
Ask Me |
Can't stop saying Ga-head. That's the way I talk...so that's the way I write. |
| 2011-08-04 19:39:08 |
I Did My Brother |
papaw's gal....The girl telling the story is 25 at the time she's telling it. She states, early on, that she should really start at the very begining, {The first time something happened between them} when her brother was 11 going on 12 and she was 14. As far as the 8213 goes. I agree. It drives me crazy. |
| 2011-08-04 12:27:45 |
My Real-life porno with mom |
I liked it a lot. It came across as something that could very well happen between any horny teenage boy and openminded mom. I've always liked the theme...Someone catching someone else. |
| 2011-08-04 08:32:33 |
Caught III |
I didn't realise Jersey had it's own style. I grew up in Jersey. You're freakin me out a little. I'm going outside now to see if you're peeking in my window |
| 2011-08-03 22:54:47 |
Caught III |
I didn't realise Jersey had it's own style. I grew up in Jersey. You're freakin me out a little. I'm going outside now to see if you're peeking in my window. |
| 2011-08-01 08:46:41 |
Jeanie's Big Boy |
It also seems to spell out my quotation marks. I better get a handle on this or I'm gunna start to feel like a writer with Tourettes. |
| 2011-08-01 08:35:35 |
Jeanie's Big Boy |
I don't knowe what the deal is with the #8213. The system seems to replace the "Dashes" with it. Question marks for the smaller dashes...Go figure. Maybe it's some kind of code or something. Scary! |
| 2011-07-31 12:59:52 |
MOM WAS A DESPERATE HOUSEWIFE |
A question for one of the readers-Why just the one encounter. Seems like that might be a hard thing to reframe from unless something was unpleasant |