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| 2013-05-08 05:06:42 |
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I don't think you've read it before.
I just made it up! |
| 2013-05-08 05:06:39 |
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I don't think you've read it before.
I just made it up! |
| 2013-05-07 20:37:10 |
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Okay last time I explain this.
This was a two hour un-edited story done to kill my boredom last Sunday.
I guess I can't just fool around anymore because you want perfection.
Look for my new saga.....Wades Pool Service. |
| 2013-05-05 13:54:39 |
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Curious, if this story was so great, why is the score so low?
Haters I guess but that's okay I still think it was the best I've written to date. |
| 2013-05-04 11:52:53 |
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Thanks again for all the nice comments. In all fairness bestiality isn’t exactly my thing either, but one of you PM’ed me and said Big Johns Confession was good but too safe. They told me to take more chances as a writer, and push the envelope and see what happens. So that’s why it’s part of this story, and to tell you the truth it just sort of fit in the scenario. I don’t know what’s next but if you have an idea please feel free to post it. |
| 2013-05-04 08:47:44 |
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Thanks to all!
Yeah Cindy died, but she became a wolf. I'd make that trade myself. Beats the hell out of all the crazy people the world seem
to be full of now. |
| 2013-05-03 20:09:56 |
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Thank you!
Great feedback and I agree with every word.
I'm not there yet, but getting closer.
I have an idea for a new series called
"The Congo" wild country filled with danger
Diamonds, emeralds, and gold! |
| 2013-05-03 15:21:01 |
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Thanks CC!
I'm glad at least one person loved this story as much as me.
Chapter seven should be out sometime tonight and its going
to blow you away! Soryy it will be the final chapter.
Thanks to everyone else for reading it too! |
| 2013-05-03 05:07:50 |
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Thanks for reading!
More soon!
It's not over yet! |
| 2013-05-01 20:02:59 |
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Part 6 is out. Going home! |
| 2013-04-30 16:43:49 |
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Thanks for all the comments!
I guess you can like this story or hate it either one.
I will say this, although the story and characters are fiction. Everything else is fact from research. That includes lightening, the wolves anatomy, size, and pack behavior even though the interaction with humans is conjecture on my part. Not every Eskimo stands over a blow hole with a spear waiting to kill a seal. If you don’t believe me, check the facts yourself.
As always I appreciate you reading my work! Thank You so much....It’s all good!
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| 2013-04-28 16:05:24 |
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Okay let me address a few of your snarky comments. First of all you are not paying me to custom build a story for you. Your comments about how this or that should happen are usually ignored. If you don’t like what I write, or how I write it....feel free to stop reading and go read something else. I create my stories out of thin air, if you can do better please feel free to do so. |
| 2013-04-28 09:19:14 |
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Point taken, I'm not sure that was how it worked out but maybe it came off that way.
Thanks for Reading! |
| 2013-04-28 07:09:06 |
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Lots of 16 year olds say Gawd, and other things that are not proper. Sorry it bugs you so much but how many people have real conversations in perfect english, or don't use slang?
Thanks for reading. |
| 2013-04-18 15:11:36 |
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One more thing, who voted that negative? If you don't like this story why are you still reading it?
People never cease to amaze me.
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| 2013-04-18 15:09:16 |
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I want to thank everyone who followed this story. It went about 12 chapters further than I originally anticipated it would. I had a great time writing it and your comments and appreciation for it drove it to the end. I’m sorry if the final chapter was a bit weak, but that told me it was time to end it. I hope I can come up with another adventure for you to read. Thanks again! |
| 2013-04-08 17:12:04 |
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I guess some folks don't like this based on the score? Oh well you can't please everyone.
Thanks for reading! |
| 2013-04-06 17:09:14 |
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Okay readers I wanted to clear up some things for you.
To the comment about being consistent: If you re-read that part you’ll see that John is having a fantasy about stretching the defense, catching the super bowl pass etc. I know he was a bench warmer and so does John.
To the comment about too much drama: Life is full of drama and so is John’s. I don’t have some grand plan on how this story is going to go. I start typing and listen to my muse tell it to me, and that’s what you get.
My word count was wrong: It’s actually almost 90K right now, enough for a novel so if you’re a publisher let’s talk about a book. I think it would suck without the sex so maybe that won’t ever happen.
To everyone else: Hey what can I say, this is a blast and I’m having a great time with it. You make it that much better and your comments keep me going. Thank You for Reading! Without you, it really wouldn’t matter what the hell I wrote!
So what’s next? I have no idea but I’m sure |
| 2013-04-05 21:26:09 |
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Part 12 is in the Q.
Enjoy! |
| 2013-04-04 15:20:36 |
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Thanks to all for reading and commenting!
Fear not John's story is not over yet! |
| 2013-04-03 17:57:07 |
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I keep hoping its done, but alas there is so much more John wants me to tell you. I going to keep telling this tale until it reaches its conclusion. I can't promise you will like it, but I'm going to tell it just the same.
Thanks for all the great commetns, I'm glad you are enjoying it as much as I am telling it.
PF |
| 2013-04-02 19:12:06 |
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Part 11 is in the Q.
I wish these spammers would die a miserable death. |
| 2013-04-02 19:09:38 |
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Why don't you go to hell and save the rest of us from reading about
Your pathetic life? |
| 2013-03-31 05:52:00 |
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For the idiot below:
1. Kiss my ass
2. Get off my thread
3. Shut the hell up
4. Eat shit and die
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| 2013-03-30 21:56:12 |
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Thanks to all of you following this tale. I really didn't think it would turn
Into a book size story. So you tell me if you would like it to go on.
PF |
| 2013-03-27 19:18:04 |
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I'm working on part 10. It will be worth the wait
PF |
| 2013-03-26 19:08:58 |
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Many thanks!
The story will continue.
You would think by now that people familiar with this story would stop reading it. But instead insist on voting negatives. Go figure? |
| 2013-03-25 15:35:45 |
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Part 9 is in the Q.
Thanks to all! |
| 2013-03-22 17:29:21 |
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anyone who voted a negative needs to eat shit and die! This story rocks the world you dumb bitches! |
| 2013-03-22 11:02:29 |
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Very kind of you Sir!
Thanks for reading and everyones great comments! |
| 2013-03-21 17:24:44 |
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Thanks Thunder!
Auora don't you think Grace will love hanging out with her new sisters?
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| 2013-03-21 13:53:03 |
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I have to disagree, 6000 word chapters are pretty big. Maybe you should read slower? LOL! Just kidding.
Thanks for reading! |
| 2013-03-20 19:03:32 |
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Thanks for all the great comments!
I'm working on part 7, maybe done by tomorrow night.
You make it all worth while my friends, without you I'd have to enjoy this story all by my self!
PF |
| 2013-03-19 16:59:43 |
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Part VI (6) will be up soon.
Hope you enjoy it! |
| 2013-03-15 16:12:15 |
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Thanks to everyone for the nice remarks!
Author's get paid by reading the feedback, most of the time its slim pickins so be sure to support your favorite author even if its not me. Trust me they live for it!
If you vote a negative, tell me why and maybe next time I'll get better.
Thanks again! |
| 2013-03-15 16:08:56 |
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Thanks Harddick1974! Yes give writing your own story a try. Don't be discouraged by negative comments! If I can help in anyway please PM me. I know from doing it myself that self-editing is a bitch! I miss things that my brain refuses to acknowledge.
PF |
| 2013-03-13 18:52:48 |
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First of all I would like to thank you all for your comments and votes!
It seems that you are enjoying this story as much as I am creating it. I’m going to start on part V tomorrow and you might wonder what’s next.
I can’t tell you until I start typing, because this story seems to be writing itself.
I’m not sure where we are headed, but will get there together. Thanks Again!
PF
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| 2013-03-12 16:44:09 |
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Part IV is in the que. I hope you enjoy it as much as I did creating this twisted tale.
PF |
| 2013-03-12 12:15:24 |
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Thanks Okieblueyes!
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| 2013-03-12 07:06:55 |
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Thanks for reading and voting! |
| 2013-03-12 07:05:39 |
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Thanks mudflap, rest assured this story is not over yet.
Also a logged on vote counts as 4 votes against an anonymous vote. Thanks again! |
| 2013-03-11 13:22:36 |
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Part 3 has been posted.
Hope you enjoy! |
| 2013-03-11 13:21:29 |
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Thank you kind Sir for the post! |
| 2013-03-08 17:34:13 |
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You're right, she hated every minute of it! |
| 2013-03-08 17:31:57 |
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Click on my name and you can read all of my stuff. |
| 2013-03-08 16:05:23 |
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I have to write part 3 still. Some of us have real jobs everyday, so maybe Sunday or Monday I'll post it. |
| 2013-03-07 16:45:50 |
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How about some positive votes to get this up the list? If a story doesn't keep at least a 95% rate I usually delete it.
Keep sending your story ideas by PM or to purefiction@rocketmail.com
Or post how you think this story should end. I already know but maybe you can change my mind? |
| 2013-03-06 17:24:39 |
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Okay, I give up. Why is everyone hating on this chapter? I thought it was just as good as the first one. |