My Fantasy - Fucking Katie
||Hi, I'm Katie, the girl in this story. I'm 18, 38DD and I'd love to meet men in the Seattle area for intimate encounters. Serious inquiries only. Email me at email@example.com.
Her first time, Part 3 (Conclusion)
||I absolutely love this "series". They were well done and I wish they kept going. I want to hear about there possibly weekend and so on. How cheri handles everything, what kind of "talent" she has and what responsibilities she gets around the house. You did an amazing job. Well done!
Coaching Clinic - Part 1
||Good story. Try and develop the characters more. You could try having all the girls over for a sleepover to try and see what they all talk about. If you tried you could probably make it a long series. It would be good, interesting, and long. I love to read some of the stories that are a long series of stories. Keep up the good work!
Sharing Jack's Bed: Part 4
||This was an AMAZING story. I haven't been this hooked on a series/story from this site in a longtime. I desperately want you to keep it going. Spectacular job. Just brilliant. You had me so hooked and so turned on. I felt like I was there or watching it on the TV. Great job with the description. I think alot of the time that's what makes the story. Description is like 3/4ths of a story. Job well done! Keep up the good writing. I love that each night I could look forward to the next part. Maybe next time you could string it out a little more and keep it going. Just an idea... firstname.lastname@example.org if anyone wants to talk.