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| 2012-07-16 01:54:00 |
Kelly The Schoolgirl |
Thank you for expressing your creativity, and expanding the realm of bestiality. Paragraphs and word usage are areas to consider for improvement if you choose to further this work of creativity. I would appreciate reading more, if you find the time. |
| 2011-10-01 12:37:04 |
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Thank you for sharing such an awesome story Rachael. To the ink of all those girls that were hot when we were teens.... Awesome story , I will like to see where this goes(what your next were) =} |
| 2011-09-10 16:08:01 |
Daddy Takes Care of Her Little Problem (9) |
Thank you for continuing this fantasy. You masterfully handled the father's conscience surfacing. Kudos to you and your story telling skills. |
| 2011-07-09 07:56:37 |
Dad and his Girls |
Thanks for writing this erotic fantasy, the level of caring developed when the father was hesitant to take advantage of his daughter's drunkeness. I look forward to reading how Demi will get in on the scene. Nice style, by letting the characters express their love for one another you opened the question "What really happened to the mother? Had she developed feelings independent of her daughter's motives"? We will need to wait. |
| 2011-05-14 14:31:26 |
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Great story, nicely told! Thanks for sharing your tale of lust with us! |
| 2011-05-13 09:43:33 |
The New Den Mother |
Encore! Wow ! Great story, what a cliff hanger. Thanks for for sharing that piece with us. |
| 2011-04-27 15:50:10 |
Part 1) Within The Lab: The Beginning |
Yep . Now he can really get inside her pussy lol and please her by darting his tongue out. |
| 2011-02-11 12:34:17 |
My Daughter's friend Natalia Part # 20 |
This is a super series! Thankyou so much for sharing this fantasy with us. |
| 2011-02-11 12:18:35 |
My Daughter's Friend Natalia Part # 18 |
This is so good, I want it to never end! |
| 2011-02-11 12:14:27 |
My Daughter's Friend Natalia Part # 17 |
This is a super series! Thankyou so much for sharing this fantasy with us. |
| 2011-01-27 13:28:08 |
Our new cleaning girl |
Thank you for sharing that fantasy with us! The next part will not come soon enough for this reader! |
| 2011-01-26 10:59:45 |
Amy's Week Away - Day 1 |
Thank you very much for sharing that masterpiece of fiction with us! |
| 2011-01-26 04:36:56 |
The Suitcase |
Thank you for this exquisite piece of fiction! Those who read then ridicule are , well, ridiculous. |
| 2011-01-13 09:54:43 |
Lovley sisters |
That was an incredible story. Thank you so much for sharing such a lovely story. |
| 2011-01-12 14:18:12 |
a girl and her tentacle monster 11 |
I read all of this fantasy and thank you for your sharing this masterpiece of erotica with us! |
| 2011-01-12 14:14:43 |
a girl and her tentacle monster |
I read all of this fantasy and thank you for your sharing this masterpiece of erotica with us! |
| 2011-01-08 11:10:20 |
my neighbour and her duaghter |
T hanks for putting your hot story on the internet . Use a spell checker or perhaps you spell "daughter' ,in your location, d-u-a-g-h-t-e-r . Good story from my perspective though. |