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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2011-12-13 17:17:16 |
3 Evil Sisters-Part 2 |
I think that was a great twist to his character. Years of pent up frustration and recent sexual desires coming out made him act differently than he normally would have, and he realized it after the fact that he wasn't himself, because he really just wants to be a loving brother who is loved by his sisters which is portrade throughout the story. Great work. |
| 2011-11-02 17:05:24 |
Earning the Afternoon |
Please do a follow up on this one... |
| 2011-10-05 19:11:25 |
The beginning of my addiction to sex |
I'll vote after the next one but u got me worried there is guy on guy action and I am straight as they come. |
| 2011-09-06 09:05:14 |
Live-in Maintenance Man part 3 |
I didn't realize it but when I copied my story into here it changed all the comma's to question marks. Sorry people. |
| 2011-08-21 00:18:42 |
Live-in Maintenance Man part 3 |
This story had almost no sex, except for a bit at the end. The next and final story will be almost all sex. |
| 2011-07-30 20:08:45 |
Live-in Maintenance Man |
Check again the mother is 36, says in the beginning then states she looks 25.
Thanks though. |
| 2011-07-30 20:02:43 |
Live-in Maintenance Man |
Check again the mother is 36, says in the beginning then states she looks 25.
Thanks though. |
| 2011-07-30 19:56:09 |
Live-in Maintenance Man |
Check again the mother is 36, says in the beginning then states she looks 25.
Thanks though. |
| 2011-07-30 19:38:59 |
Live-in Maintenance Man |
If i keep making the same mistakes on the same words please let me know so I can correct the original on my computer.
I am already working on the second part.
Thanks for the positive feed back. |
| 2011-07-25 23:23:15 |
Games at Work |
Great story, hope to see another part to it. |
| 2011-07-24 18:24:00 |
May-Ling the Litle Chinese American part 1 |
I use LibreOffice and it says it is all good. This is the first story I have written and since I am an amateur I don't expect it to be perfect. Just like I wouldn't expect anyone's stories on XNXX to be perfect, every one's on here is at different levels and you have to take the good with the bad and read it for the story to see if you like it.
About writing another part there will be secound. |