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| 2011-10-05 17:45:54 |
Gothic Amy And Me Part 11...END |
hey, to all the people saying something along the lines of "you just dont kill off the 2 main characters" have you ever heard of a book called Romeo and Juliette? it does happen often its called romantic tragedy just get over it and look for his next story |
| 2011-10-05 01:31:18 |
Gothic Amy And Me Part 11...END |
i have commented on all your others this is my first time logged in lol, well what can i say tragic romance has a special place in my heart i love it and hate it at the same time good work dont stop with this write a new story or rather spin a new web of madness |
| 2011-10-03 19:45:12 |
Siblings and Lovers Part 1 |
ok maybe i should have been clearer in my very first comment sorry for any confusion i have caused so let me clarify: 1 i am the author of this story, 2 i uploaded it before but deleted it because i didnt like how it had turned out, 3 therefor its not plageurism. now hopefully that's clear, just enjoy the story i am re-writing the other parts and then i will continue where i left off with chapter 5. peace |
| 2011-10-03 19:37:31 |
Siblings and Lovers Part 1 |
Dude what did you not understand about my previous comments, this is my story i originally wrote and uploaded it then deleted it because it was poorly written and then came back re-wrote it and re-uploaded it, how is that plageurism this was my story to begin with and i really don't appreciate the accusation |
| 2011-10-03 17:01:07 |
Siblings and Lovers Part 1 |
i put chapter 1 and 2 together so it would be long enough to be worth reading but i took out the parts that did not flow as well and also added a lot of material, from the ratings I've received this time it seems like i did better so ill try to start on chapters 3 and 4 soon |
| 2011-10-03 07:16:35 |
Siblings and Lovers Part 1 |
maybe you did, I did try to write this before but it turned out so horrible that i decided to take a step back and improve my craft before re-releasing my 1st story. |
| 2011-08-08 19:10:49 |
Taming my niece, Ashley |
all i can say is wow i read a lot of stories especaily rape and incest and many times in the past few days i look at the author when i finish the story and bam MR.kool so many times, you are an amazing writer kudos and keep the stories cuming |
| 2011-08-06 02:33:34 |
Giving in to my sister: Part 1 |
its been 1 month cum on how long is it gonna take for part 2 |
| 2011-07-26 20:22:37 |
A New Toy |
everyone who thinks this is sick, fuck you this is some of the hottest shit ever, luved it keep on writeing |
| 2011-07-17 09:33:01 |
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i knew some asshole like you would show up eventuilly. so my responce is basicly fuck you nigga i dont know for sure that your black but you did type in all caps which suggests it and the vast majority of my spelling is correct bitch but typos happen frequently when half your keys are fucked up and you cant realy afford to get them fixed, but searously next time you feal like saying something similar to this you can go blow it out your ass i remember welcoming critisizm but you sir ar just being a troll oh and one more time fuck you |
| 2011-07-17 08:00:23 |
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for those who made suggestions and guesses about the story and those who enjoyed the previous parts. I strongly belive you will enjoy part 4 as well it will be uploaded today, peace |
| 2011-07-17 00:35:56 |
Owning a Dominant Bitch - Complete |
glad i took a brake from my useal incest stories |
| 2011-07-16 10:39:10 |
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hey everyone, i have decided that tomarrow i am takeing down thease stories and re-writeing them adding to them and makeing the plot more beliveable ect. and will also write the last 3 parts and put it all together in one complete story upload so if you have advice give it because i go back to the drawing board tomarrow |
| 2011-07-16 10:38:36 |
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hey everyone, i have decided that tomarrow i am takeing down thease stories and re-writeing them adding to them and makeing the plot more beliveable ect. and will also write the last 3 parts and put it all together in one complete story upload so if you have advice give it because i go back to the drawing board tomarrow |
| 2011-07-16 10:38:01 |
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hey everyone, i have decided that tomarrow i am takeing down thease stories and re-writeing them adding to them and makeing the plot more beliveable ect. and will also write the last 3 parts and put it all together in one complete story upload so if you have advice give it because i go back to the drawing board tomarrow |
| 2011-07-16 00:17:56 |
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thanks for the feedback, you say you want more detail you got it check back in a day or two and ill have part 3 up, and to the guy 2 below yeah message me when your loged in and thanks everyone 4 the support |
| 2011-07-15 14:17:25 |
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ive got 666 reads funny right |
| 2011-07-15 07:16:51 |
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ah the evil tripple post bug strikes again, great work on the story |
| 2011-07-11 19:20:54 |
Blindfolds Aside |
yeah "happy" probibly wasent the best word lets just say i love the whole polital thing in this one, and the way you develoup your charicters in general so basicly reading your stories(plus music and a few other things at the same time) leaves me with this natural high, cant wate for part 2 hopefully this doesent post 3 times :) peace |
| 2011-07-11 04:25:59 |
Blindfolds Aside |
let me just say that everything you have written is pure brilance, its the wierdest thing every time i read your stories i am unervingly happy all damn day its amazing, i literaly have a tab open on one of your stories all day also, i hope you keep writeing thease stories for a verry verry long time because theyr some of the best i have ever read kudos, ill be on this page for a few days hope you comment back :) |
| 2011-07-11 04:24:44 |
Blindfolds Aside |
let me just say that everything you have written is pure brilance, its the wierdest thing every time i read your stories i am unervingly happy all damn day its amazing, i literaly have a tab open on one of your stories all day also, i hope you keep writeing thease stories for a verry verry long time because theyr some of the best i have ever read kudos, ill be on this page for a few days hope you comment back :) |