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| 2011-09-22 02:36:18 |
Different Dads, Different Daughters - Chapter 5 |
Amazing story!! Loved the sex scenez! But honestly i think there shouldve been mre sex and less "regular day" stuff. Loved the storyline and detailz though. Younger girlz being fckd by older guyz and vice versa getz me so wet!! Keep it up;) |
| 2011-08-13 14:01:55 |
My Breanna My Darling Fix |
Amazing story!! Little flawz here n there but for the most part it was pretty good. I like the detailz and how theyre so descriptive. Im lookin forward to the next part so keep writing:) |
| 2011-07-18 04:34:29 |
My Very First Time |
Thnx for the commz. I really appreciate ur thoughtz n stuff. Im considerin writing this story over with proper spellin n more detail but i dnt noe if it'll be anytime soon. |
| 2011-07-15 18:56:05 |
My Very First Time |
And ok jsinner93 im probably around the same age as u. Such critizism |
| 2011-07-15 18:54:09 |
My Very First Time |
Wow! Dint know spelling was such a big issue. May i remind u that this wuz my first story ever?!
Really anonymous from 2011-07-15 16:28:17?? How would u know if thatz the truth? Because i highly doubt that. Itz only in san fran |
| 2011-07-15 18:53:10 |
My Very First Time |
Wow! Dint know spelling was such a big issue. May i remind u that this wuz my first story ever?!
Really anonymous from 2011-07-15 16:28:17?? How would u know if thatz the truth? Because i highly doubt that. Itz only in san fran |
| 2011-07-15 07:44:46 |
My sister and I Pt. 6 (conclusion) |
Juz finishd reading all the storiez to this series n i hav to say therez no such word to explain the greatness in the detailz n storyline. Kudoz:) this definatly a top favorite. N keep writing, u obviously hav a gift:) |
| 2011-07-13 07:29:54 |
The Bad Side of Town |
Great! Sequel in the movie theate??;) |
| 2011-07-13 07:07:14 |
The Cheerleader Auction |
Mmmmm nice. It needz more detailz in the sex scenez but i give it a positive rating:) keep writing |