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Story title |
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| 2013-05-02 18:56:01 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt19 |
To my anonymous down voter. I am sorry you think that way of me. I am not really concerned with where my posts wind up because this is a true account of me and my family. The only stories I have given a negative vote to are those which have poor literary style and are riddled with errors, making them almost unreadable. I also post some constructive criticism in an effort to help the writer improve their stories. If I wronged you, i'm sorry. No malice was intended. Good luck with your future endeavors.
Mike |
| 2013-03-28 06:28:51 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt18 |
I am sorry that I was not more clear about my intentions with this story. I am finishing the story through December of last year to fill everyone in on the events that happened over the summer. The twins story will conclude when I get to the point where I lost Kayko, Nark, and Shiori when they were coming home from christmas shopping at the mall. After which I will start the story of Kayko. Please understand how difficult it is for me. I miss my wife and kids very much and at times it hurts so badly that I can not think straight. But the "healing" process is an ongoing mission and I am doing my best. A lot of different things happened last summer so there is a lot to tell. I just hope you guys can see how tightly wrapped we were as the story is told. Thank you guys for reading. I never thought that a cronicle of my family and the events that took place would be so interesting.
Mike |
| 2013-02-19 23:13:52 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Update |
Thank you everyone. All of you are too kind with your remarks and well wishes. I do feel blessed in knowing that people out there can care about us. I really am at a loss for words. Your response is overwhelming to me and the girls, and I want you all to know that we really do appreciate it. Thanks.
Mike, Erin, and Saki (and yes, she is still my pet) |
| 2012-11-29 22:39:29 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt16 |
Believe me when I say that I do love my daughter very much. This is just the beginings of what happened over this last summer. As of right now, my time is budgeted between Erin, Saki, and Kayko. Between the three of them I stay pretty much drained. It took a little bit to figure things out, and how to share me evenly with all of them. I don't want to give a spoiler to my story, but I will say this, only two of our bedroom are occupied now. As for my relationship with my daughter, top shelf. We still do father daughter things as well as a family group. Mark is still having Shiori daily, and everything seems well. Please continue reading the chapters. I know I am dragging this out a bit and I am sorry to everyone. So much happened I can't write it all. But the important things are there as well as some of the fun. Read what happens. It has been a real experience for me.
Mike |
| 2012-11-29 17:45:20 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt16 |
Throughout my stories I have described the techniques Kayko uses to keep herself tight and talented. The descriptions are good because Kayko is sitting on me most of the time when I write. She will lean back against my desk and let me put my lap top on her belly. She likes the feeling of the key strokes through the machine and it lets her stay close to me while I write. So she tells me how to describe most things. Any woman who wants to learn these techniques is welcome to. Kayko will answer any questions if you will send a pm to my page. She will be more than glad to help. |
| 2012-11-19 21:50:11 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt15 |
I am sorry for the punctuation error. There is something wrong with the document. It showed up on the repost as well. I will fix that in the next chapter.
Mike |
| 2012-11-18 07:06:42 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt14 |
For the person who made the last comment, here are a few answers. Understand that sex is viewed completely differently in the far east. The Protestants and the Roman Catholic church placed a stigma or taboo lable on it and said it was a sin to enjoy such activities. The orient, which practices Buddism, Shintoism, and a variety of others Have a different view. Sex is viewed as not only a natural bodily function, but also an alignment of the body and soul as well as the energy centers of the body. (This also depends on the spiritual philosophy followed.) As for the incestual sex, On many occastions the mothers will have sex with their boys. This is to teach them and make them better suited for manhood. It's difficult to find on the web because it usually is not spoken of. As for the girls. That is a different subject all together. Until reciently, the women were treated more like second class people. Fathers gave them as gifts many times. Sex usually startes early too. |
| 2012-10-30 21:19:53 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt6 |
Dude, you don't know the half of it yet. If I actually wrote everything that Kayko has taught the girls this story would wind up being 100 chapters long. She has been exceptionally thorough in teaching them these ancient pleasure techniques. |
| 2012-10-20 18:20:33 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt9 |
Thank all of you for the nice comments, especially the last one. It does get just a little discouraging for me to hear bad stuff about my family even though it is irregular compaired to traditional american families. But as I posted before, there is quite a mix of cultures in my household. And you are right, you can't please everyone. I will continue to allow posts for those of you who enjoy my stories. I will try to keep them interesting and not bore you with unnecessary details. I thank you all again.
Mike |
| 2012-10-18 18:25:36 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt9 |
Thank you whoever you are. I appreciate you speaking up. But that guy has been trash talking my writing and giving me bad votes since I started this series. It's no big deal. I will just turn off comments and voting on my remaining chapters. For those of you who want to send me a pm, log in and make your comments there. I am thankful for all of your support.
Mike. |
| 2012-10-14 22:06:38 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt8 |
For the last person who posted. I do not speak Japanese because I have not spent as much time with my wife as my kids have. IF you had read my other stories you would know that I travel all the time. It is an accepted situation by my wife, and at times it is difficult. But Kayko wanted our kids to speak her native language so she taught them as they grew up. Answer your question? |
| 2012-09-27 17:21:28 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt2 |
Thank you to the person who made the last comment. You are correct in your assumption as to why comments have been turned off. |
| 2012-09-20 23:07:28 |
Bec & Sarah Get Revenge - CH1 |
Your writing style is a bit rough. Slow down a little. Think about the situations and stay on track. Also look at the form of your text as it appears on this site. Do a little editing and proof reading before submitting it, it will greatly improve your overall delivery. Not a bad story, it just needs a little TLC before publishing. Try it again, I will read the next one. 7/10 |
| 2012-09-08 08:42:20 |
Saturdays With My Sister |
If this was your first post it's not bad. Nice story telling and good attention to the time and story line. Many storys on this site have issues with the story jumping from one situation to another without any continuity, and many times the writer will forget where they are in the story so someone who is sitting will sit down again, or they will be inside and suddenly they are outside. Write a sequal and check out my posting called "My Asian Treat". It's not fiction however our names have been changed. Keep up the good work. |
| 2012-03-25 17:40:58 |
My Asian Treat Pt.9 |
I am working on the next part. You guys just have to hang in there because I have been around the world 4 times in the last few months working. This is a true story and I will tell all of what happens to me and Kayko. I am also working on another story that happened a few years ago that will be just as entertaining. |
| 2012-01-27 19:57:43 |
Seducing My Stepfather - Part 2 |
Nice writing. Very descriptive from the female point of view. 10/10 |
| 2011-11-13 21:14:42 |
Slave for a Day Part 2 |
I bought one of those eggs for my wife. It's really interesting to see her reactions while in a store or the mall. We have a blast with it! 10/10 |
| 2011-11-13 19:29:01 |
Blizzard Blues |
Good story. Sara reminds me of a girl I knew in New Jersey. The only real difference is we fucked for almost 2 days straight. Nice writing, only a few typos'. |
| 2011-08-20 21:01:04 |
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Here is a suggestion that you should take to the bank, use some kind of word processor that has grammer and spell checking before you try this again. Second suggestion, request the webmaster to remove this story, it's an embarassment. |
| 2011-08-20 20:09:19 |
My Asian Treat Pt.6 |
Ok guys, I was wrong with the year and not the month. It's the August 1982 issue of Playboy. Sorry for the fuck up. |
| 2011-08-18 18:09:33 |
My Asian Treat Pt.6 |
I'm sorry, but I guess you guys will have to read the rest of them to find out what happens. |
| 2011-08-17 08:11:38 |
My Asian Treat Pt.6 |
Attn: I gave the wrong info for the article! I will research and find the correct imformation and post it here. Sorry about the goof in my story. |
| 2011-08-12 16:55:39 |
My Asian Treat Pt.5 |
We don't. My wife and I are not into the anal thing. |
| 2011-08-06 07:43:44 |
My Asian Treat Pt4 |
I'll tell you why it's the best part so far. It really happened to me. |
| 2011-07-25 17:25:50 |
My Asian Treat Pt3 |
Thank you. I just want my readers to enjoy this story. |
| 2011-07-25 17:22:47 |
My Asian Treat Pt3 |
Thank you. I just want my readers to enjoy this story. |
| 2011-07-21 00:51:35 |
MY ASIAN TREAT PT2 |
I can't tell you about "most" Japanese women practicing with their "vulva muscles", I can only vouch for Kayko. However, the practice does go back several thousand years in the orient. I think American women would benefit from the practice if they would get past the stigma that has been engrained in them. Sex is a wonderful thing, and if you have the ability to increase the experience for yourself and your partner, why not do it? Wait till the next chapter. I spent a wonderful 6 days on this particular buisness trip and I am still telling everyone about the first day. |
| 2011-07-20 16:56:35 |
MY ASIAN TREAT PT2 |
In response to the comment about Kayko using the response 'Hy', If you have ever been to the orient and visited with a traditional family, anytime a female gives a response, 'Hy' always preceeds it. It is not only an acknowledgement, but it is also a show of respect and subserviance. |
| 2011-07-20 00:22:02 |
MY ASIAN TREAT PT2 |
It is true about incest between moms and sons in Japan. Unfortunately a lot of traditional famalies in Japan still treat women as second place. The boys get life handed to them on a platter and the girls live lives of servatude. Sometimes it makes me furious. |
| 2011-07-17 22:48:39 |
A new lover |
Not too good. Try using a word processor with a spell and gramer check. It will make you stories a lot more readable. 2/10 |
| 2011-07-11 16:09:04 |
Sleeping Pills |
I had a live in girl friend in New Jersey who was a very hard sleeper. She told me one day that if I ever woke up in the middle of the night and wanted some, I could fuck her while she was sleeping. Aside from our regular nightly marathons, I screwed her every night for nearly two years. It's an interesting feeling. 9/10 |