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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-02-10 00:37:12 |
Family Love Boat 4 |
Fantastic, please continue.
Also, feel free to check out my story, "The Business"
Thanks, and keep going! |
| 2012-02-09 16:57:23 |
The Business - Chapter Seven |
Yeah, that is a reasonable remark.. No critique, no explanation. Why should your comment even be considered, hm? Enjoy your sappy life, twit.
Btw, sentences begin with a capital letter and end with some sort of punctuation. And it is 'fucking sucked' not 'fuck sucked'. K? |
| 2012-02-08 09:07:23 |
The Business |
Thank you, Leighdway. I appreciate it! |
| 2012-02-07 16:52:46 |
The Business - Chapter Six |
Thank you so much. After seeing soo many negative ratings I was becoming glum. I know it is because it lacks sex, but they can go fuck themselves. Anywhoo, thanks again. Working on chapter seven. :] |
| 2012-02-07 09:47:19 |
The Demons Harem : Mara's Story, Part Two |
Very unusual, but I did like what I read. Hope you continue.
Those threshers sound wicked disgusting. Need to go back to the beginning and start from there, I suppose. =)
If you ever get the opportunity, please check out my story, The Business. |
| 2012-02-07 09:44:35 |
Cum Slut's Walk |
You have potential. Goo luck on your writing.
If you ever get the time, please check out my story, The Business. |
| 2012-02-07 00:36:51 |
The Business - Chapter Six |
Hopefully I will have a new chapter up tomorrow night. Thanks for your support. |
| 2012-02-06 23:37:50 |
The Business - Chapter Six |
Please, please comment! If you are unhappy with this please critique! |
| 2012-02-05 08:23:12 |
The Business - Chapter Five |
It will definately not always be like this. But thanks for you critique. If you haven't read the first few chapters I recommend them. :] |
| 2011-07-02 01:58:08 |
The Business - Chapter Four |
xP. Didn't realize I was logged out. Anywhoo, bottom comment was from I, the author. |
| 2011-07-01 02:29:56 |
Sister's Fate |
Most likely reason it was removed was that the sister was under the age of sixteen, which is no longer allowed on XNXX. I am a new member and found this out only yesterday, but yeah, age possibly has something to do with its' removal. Nice story, however. =) |
| 2011-06-28 17:29:11 |
The Business - Chapter Three |
Third chapter is up, I apologize for the lack of sex but this chapter was mostly for character development. :] |
| 2011-06-28 02:50:09 |
The Business - Chapter Two |
You got it!
I should have another up tomorrow or the day following.
Just want to actually get the story's chapter overview complete. :]
Expect 50+ chapters and more slaves. ^_^
Thanks for following this story! Gives me a reason to continue. |
| 2011-06-27 20:37:32 |
The Business - Chapter Two |
Well, second chapter is up as all of you can see.
Please rate and comment! Thanks. |
| 2011-06-25 05:37:28 |
The Business |
Hahah, forgot to log in when I posted that comment.
Just clearing that up.
Anywhoo. I hope all readers will post a comment, either to critique or praise my work. Please, I love to here what everyone thinks of my descriptive skills and character creation. Tell me who you would like to see more of and what you think I could include to improve. I hope to gather a dedicated, adoring group of friends who will read chapter after chapter of The Business. Thanks! |