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Comment |
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| 2011-07-10 07:19:54 |
Yukio's Adventures Part 3 |
Jade, that was so hot and a great cliffhander at the end! I would love to read a fourth part. Keep up the great work! |
| 2011-07-10 07:19:45 |
Yukio's Adventures Part 3 |
Jade, that was so hot and a great cliffhander at the end! I would love to read a fourth part. Keep up the great work! |
| 2011-07-10 07:17:59 |
Yukio's Adventures Part 3 |
Jade, that was so hot and a great cliffhander at the end! I would love to read a fourth part. Keep up the great work! |
| 2011-06-26 05:35:45 |
Loving Lisas Pretty Pink Pussy Petals |
Great story, Jack, as always. You outdid yourself on this one. I love the romance that goes along with the eroticness of you're stories, 10/10. Keep at it! |
| 2011-06-24 06:57:50 |
Family Life 1 by Darklord |
Excellent! Positive rating! |
| 2011-06-24 06:35:55 |
Adult Room Chapter 1 Darklord |
Don't listen to that ass, it's a great story, though you have this chapter posted twice. I'm waiting for a fourth chapter! |
| 2011-06-24 06:32:33 |
Adult Room Chapter 3 |
Is there more? This one was a touch short... |
| 2011-06-24 06:16:09 |
Adult Room Chapter 1 |
I reitterate my comment on your first story! You are a very good writer! This has me spent and wanting more! I'm off to read part two! Very positive rating! |
| 2011-06-24 05:56:11 |
Big Incest Family Fest |
The idea for your story is good. By reading, English is not your first language, and for that you did well. I myself am not a fan of scatology, but the idea of the plot you have is nice.
I say all you need is a grammar checker, and to break it down to paragraphs, and you have a great story. I rate positive. |