Comments from PhoenixOfKaos
|2011-06-04 10:32:37||Seeing mom again||Believable scenarios and hot action....shame you missed out the 3 day car ride with the mom before this part, but doesn't detract from what is (and what hopefully continues to be) a great series!
|2011-06-05 12:04:08||THE ROOMMATE||Excellent series and I'm glad you're carrying on...I was slightly disappointed that more wasn't made of the relationship with Marcela after the admission of love...but i'm a sucker for a Latina|
|2011-06-05 22:03:44||Fucking our Sisters!!||couple spelling mistakes and at one point (just after Dave and Bruce had the fight) Ashley made an early appearance - other than that, you did an amazing job!!|