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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2011-06-29 13:29:39 |
The Sexy Babysitter |
I always make the grammar mistakes because they don't come up in grammar check and I usually type so fast and I think too fast that I get ahead of my self and skips over words when I'm typing and when I proofread the first time I usually miss it, but I don't ever realize it unless I read it a couple days after first writing it. I wish this god damn site allowed me to edit my mistakes. |
| 2011-06-07 22:05:46 |
When my little sister became a 'model'. |
Written feedback would be nice. |
| 2011-06-07 22:05:29 |
When my little sister became a 'model'. |
Written feedback would be nice. |
| 2011-06-06 00:33:19 |
When my little sister became a 'model'. |
Ahh I screwed up and posted this twice. I did this because when I pressed submit I apparently I timed out so i logined in again and I guess that actually submitted the story for me but I didn't know so I submitted it ago so sorry people for double post. |
| 2011-06-05 00:13:21 |
14-Year-Old Model |
I liked this story, maybe it's because its total taboo and probably would never happen. |
| 2011-06-05 00:01:58 |
Sister Rape |
I'm not the most moral person ever, but part one of this story just gave me a sick feeling in my stomach. I think that 11 was a bad age I say 14 or 15, 13 if anything. |
| 2011-06-04 18:20:05 |
What the hell is my sister doing? |
I also forgot to mention that if you can't stand the spacing of this one just read the other one that I had written, IMO its easier its read than this. |
| 2011-06-04 18:15:37 |
My little sister's big secret. |
It was about a little sister, but I see what your saying about the more experienced part. |
| 2011-06-04 15:03:54 |
My little sister's big secret. |
I might write more, just need to think of some ideas. If anyone has suggestions on a story similar, I may write it. Also I don't want to write it if nobody else wants it. One more thing is tell me what you liked about my story and want you didn't like so I can change that in the next one. |
| 2011-06-04 15:03:25 |
What the hell is my sister doing? |
I might write more, just need to think of some ideas. If anyone has suggestions on a story similar, I may write it. Also I don't want to write it if nobody else wants it. One more thing is tell me what you liked about my story and want you didn't like so I can change that in the next one. |
| 2011-06-04 01:15:56 |
My little sister's big secret. |
Dang after reading this I realized I fucked up allot in this story. I typed it an hour and a half. |
| 2011-06-04 00:48:12 |
My little sister's big secret. |
Dang after reading this I realized I fucked up allot in this story. I typed it an hour and a half. |